Spring Birth

[LisaJMoore]

This is a wonderful poem....great job!

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@LisaJMoore Thanks, i loved your entry too, good luck with that :)

[AS6VIDEO]

This is great Paraic ,love the kittens .. great poem Dude good luck

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@AS6VIDEO Thanks mate, the kittens are today exploring a little, the mother cat doesn't like it, she keeps gently pulling them back to her :)

[KreatuRRR]

I loved the poem! Good job!

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@KreatuRRR Thank you :)

[IanDigs]

Nawwwwwwww, cutie kitties! Awesome job Pariac.

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@IanDigs Thanks mate, they are now starting to explore, its a full time job ;)

[attomtv]

great Paraic, good luck :)

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@attomtv Thanks Mate :)

[RandomBadgerRyan]

That was just brilliant Paraic :)

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@RandomBadgerRyan Thanks ryan!

[hsomerville09]

wow Paraic. that was so sweet 

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@hsomerville09 Thanks Helen, the whole thing clicked in my mind when comparing spring to the kittens in my room! it just flowed out then.

[dad200uk2000]

Really good Paraic. I love the time laps

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@dad200uk2000 Thanks mate, time lapse was taken a few weeks ago before the camera met the floor :)

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@billyCtv Thanks Billy, i'm glad.

[Br1anI]

awesome job Paraic...simply brilliant

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@Br1anI Thanks a milion, i saw yours mate, and it blew me away!

[richw4]

Nice one Paraic...very touching and liked the simile of the seasons and the new birth of the kittens.  Wow this comp is bringing out some talents in people that we didn't know! about! Thanks for entering and good luck in the comp :)

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@richw4 Thanks Rich, thats what i was going for. the whole birth/spring idea came to me as i looked at the mother feeding them. Thanks :)

[markasomerville]

Nice poem Buddy and well put together. Good luck in the competition. Big thumbs up

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@markasomerville Thanks a million Mark, my first go at writing a poem :)