1: You owe "DBZJOJO" for teaching you how to edit he did a great job
2: This isnt the most creative but the Storytelling is superb along with the overall presentation
3: I'm looking foward to how this plays out and i think u got a new fan.
(Serisouly though this was very good i mean I actually paid attention, the story had rising/falling action and a cllimax and the dialog was well written.
Hey, this fanfic looks like It's going to rival DBZJojo, blscc4, and sprawlers. If you didn't hear about blscc4 (he's not as big as sprawlers, but still, he's BRILLIANT!) You should go check him out. But anyways, about this fanfic.
One word: AMAZING! Man, the editing was smooth and suited the fanfic. There was just one tiny problem. The music really wasn't the best. But I didn't mind listening to it. 9/10 on editing. 8/10 on story. 4/10 on music.OVERALL: 9/10! I loved it nd cnt wait for more.
i thought it was pretty tight, but some of the music really pissed me off... i dont know it just annoyed me for some reason. naruto and dbz sorta mix together i guess
wow this was really really good for a first episode. It seems like you've been editing longer than jojo has lol. A lot happened too, Jam packed episode. NICE JOB!!!!!
jojo you better watch out he might catch up to you XD 5/5 !!!!!!!
also to add, (after i finished watching it) jus gotta say it was a really good episode, crisp quality, and nice job w/ the effects, lookin forward to more
awesome first ep, i can difinatly tell jojo taught you how to edit, your styles are almost identical and the story is great, somewhat reminds me of the legend of zelda...great job 5/5 keep it up
I wonder if Goku found out Jackie Chun was Roshie all these years during the DBZ era. It wouldn't really matter by then. Hmm.
SpartanForgeWorld300 2 months ago
Hmm... one of the demons appear as soon as Gohan learns about the story.
How convenient.
incrediblecaptain 5 months ago
Rly a naruto song but good vid though
watisupbro90 6 months ago
please make more of this series
Silverfang1231 1 year ago
This is a very good video=)
I like it because the fights are very interessting and realistic(like dragon ball)!
Nice Job:)
P.S.: What's the song's name at the beginning?
Thank you=)
FeetMountain91 2 years ago
that dark kamehameha looked so evil! Great work
Jarif57931 2 years ago
that dark kamehameha looked so evil! great work
Jarif57931 2 years ago
omg this is awesome!!!!!!!! Best fanfic i have ever seen
TheRealPivotLord 2 years ago
Damn i need to learn how to edit
Haruo890 2 years ago
i want more lol this is great can't wait for the next ep.
UltimiteSaiyan 2 years ago
Lol roshi's always the master getting killed off in the first episode lol
movie1321 2 years ago
3 Things
1: You owe "DBZJOJO" for teaching you how to edit he did a great job
2: This isnt the most creative but the Storytelling is superb along with the overall presentation
3: I'm looking foward to how this plays out and i think u got a new fan.
(Serisouly though this was very good i mean I actually paid attention, the story had rising/falling action and a cllimax and the dialog was well written.
runepistol 2 years ago
check out my fanfic dude
haseo579 2 years ago
For a first episode, this is really amazing. This seems to have alot of potential, so well done.
jimbogoose 2 years ago
well done...youll be one of the fanfic greats easily. 5/5.
DaSikestVidMaka 2 years ago
Hey, this fanfic looks like It's going to rival DBZJojo, blscc4, and sprawlers. If you didn't hear about blscc4 (he's not as big as sprawlers, but still, he's BRILLIANT!) You should go check him out. But anyways, about this fanfic.
One word: AMAZING! Man, the editing was smooth and suited the fanfic. There was just one tiny problem. The music really wasn't the best. But I didn't mind listening to it. 9/10 on editing. 8/10 on story. 4/10 on music.OVERALL: 9/10! I loved it nd cnt wait for more.
colm9911 2 years ago
Blscc4 quit a long time ago.
EddyGriff 2 years ago
how do you get subs like that
Dman9910 2 years ago
vry cool man
5\5
the storie is very cool...
jackhame 2 years ago
THE BEST SHOW EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kanjidragonziqi 2 years ago
dang, lol taught u alot OMG 5/5
chedell 2 years ago
Jojo has taught you well this is the best first episode I've ever seen. A very nice story to boot.
NeoCooler1 2 years ago
yo that waz the best first ep ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1000000000000000000000000000/5
nice storyline and watz the song at 5:03 i know its from naruto
ssj2unlimited 2 years ago
i thought it was pretty tight, but some of the music really pissed me off... i dont know it just annoyed me for some reason. naruto and dbz sorta mix together i guess
RACERx682 2 years ago
it is just like DBZjojo's but that can be a bad thing too it looks like you " stole" his editing style so try to make up your own
style
stephdeo 2 years ago
Jojo told me it was one of the best he'd ever seen.
EddyGriff 2 years ago
amazing first ep! can't wait for more
XxxBardockShinigami 2 years ago
wow this was really really good for a first episode. It seems like you've been editing longer than jojo has lol. A lot happened too, Jam packed episode. NICE JOB!!!!!
jojo you better watch out he might catch up to you XD 5/5 !!!!!!!
Ragnaroksai6 2 years ago
nice job man!
dbzman369 2 years ago
Nice man you're really good
rendetsku 2 years ago
good stuff, nice editing job
j2lewis 2 years ago
also to add, (after i finished watching it) jus gotta say it was a really good episode, crisp quality, and nice job w/ the effects, lookin forward to more
j2lewis 2 years ago
nice that was pretty gd some good edits and a solid original storyline i like this alot
dman9314 2 years ago
great episode i hope you continue and dont quit like others that make fan fiction also i suscribed too you
ZegetaX1 2 years ago
awesome first ep, i can difinatly tell jojo taught you how to edit, your styles are almost identical and the story is great, somewhat reminds me of the legend of zelda...great job 5/5 keep it up
CtCnJB28 2 years ago
awesome
SuperSaiyan2Raditz 2 years ago
nice man ive been waiting for new fanfic this should be sweet
daywalkerdennis 2 years ago