NOw, with my eyes closed, I could hear the words. LOL. This one was a little more difficult for me to get a grip on. Bouncing between the kids and the trophy wives, made a slippery grip on either, for me. The fifth time, my density gave way to the gestalt, and thepicture became clearer. Maybe this is a poem best absorbed after several applications.
I ended up loving the complexity, but like a good wine, it tastes better after the first sip, right? Love ya, Jeff
OK, my Darling. First of all, I watched this three times, and have to watch it a fourth with my eyes closed, because, (and I know it's gonna sound corny, but bear with me) your beauty and your performance, for the first time, got in the way of the poem. I just could take my eyes off you to hear the words. Sorry. I know I sound like a freakin' teenager dude, but you are gorgeous, and frankly, it was distracting.
Oh, Hrumphga--you're silly. I will say that this poem is a little complex for a YouTube reading...this is better for one of those poetry events full of pretentious poets. :)
Hope you're well. Sorry I haven't been in touch. I've been on the go with promoting my book!!!
Ok, here's what pisses me off about your poems: NOTHING! Each one is a somewhat twisted journey through the human psyche....and I LOVE that!
pepper123 2 years ago
nice work
newkirk915 3 years ago
2 words for you - DOUBLE TROUBLE. nyah. ;=] You looking good there..
CommentSense 3 years ago
omg >.>
xdrowningxdollyx 3 years ago
And they say it is impossible to get a boner in COLD water! LOL
pepper123 3 years ago
My body temperature is on the rise! Outstanding!
LordCrom 3 years ago
nice
bowlingballout 3 years ago
ahhhhh what has summer become? Awesome Saadia! Hope you've been having fun on your book tour!
brianstreehouse 3 years ago
NOw, with my eyes closed, I could hear the words. LOL. This one was a little more difficult for me to get a grip on. Bouncing between the kids and the trophy wives, made a slippery grip on either, for me. The fifth time, my density gave way to the gestalt, and thepicture became clearer. Maybe this is a poem best absorbed after several applications.
I ended up loving the complexity, but like a good wine, it tastes better after the first sip, right? Love ya, Jeff
hrumphga 3 years ago
OK, my Darling. First of all, I watched this three times, and have to watch it a fourth with my eyes closed, because, (and I know it's gonna sound corny, but bear with me) your beauty and your performance, for the first time, got in the way of the poem. I just could take my eyes off you to hear the words. Sorry. I know I sound like a freakin' teenager dude, but you are gorgeous, and frankly, it was distracting.
hrumphga 3 years ago
Wonderful.
sillysillytom 3 years ago
Oh, Hrumphga--you're silly. I will say that this poem is a little complex for a YouTube reading...this is better for one of those poetry events full of pretentious poets. :)
Hope you're well. Sorry I haven't been in touch. I've been on the go with promoting my book!!!
SaadiaSaadia 3 years ago
Favorited.
NewWarriorMan 3 years ago
This is one of your BEST! - I love you, I do.
NewWarriorMan 3 years ago
Another good one!
windcu 3 years ago
fabulous!
I will watch this over and over until I understand it completely hehe
good way to get lots of views!
so nice to see you again btw
missed you
daveni2 3 years ago
Aaaaaah... getting all cool with the special effects... eh? Fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiive
Staaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaars :p
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago