I'll be completely honest with you.You definatly need a new mic the one you used for this is pretty terrible.Your also need a little practice with your singing your not bad or anything you just need to get the right pitch.The lyrics weren't so great either it sounded like you tried to hard on making theme go together.All in all this wasn't to great but a good attempt and I commend you for that.That's all I got to say so good bye and good luck with all the videos you make from now on.
Hi! I liked the version of the song, but I'd like to make some constructive criticism, may I? :D Next time you sing try to put the microphone not so close of your mouth and/or nose, because when you breathe it can distort the sound pf your voice. Also, don't be shy! When you sung this version sometimes it was as if you felt quite umconfortable when singing and that could be heard through your voice. I think u have a pretty voice, and next time try to use the full potential od your voice ;D hugz!
The lyrics is not bad, but you don't hit the notes. Your mik is not very good, so try it with another one and try to hit the notes better, than it will be a nice fandub.
o and its not I formed another side of me a side made in the darkness its from the darkness (yami ga mou hitori no) another me is created (jibun wo tsukuru) and also at the end its not and dont forget its make it lol u need to get a better source
Uhmm.. Mabye you should get a better mike, so that wehn you say " Just walk a bit" Doesn't sound like "Just like a bitch" no offense I'm not making fun of you just saying.
I'll be completely honest with you.You definatly need a new mic the one you used for this is pretty terrible.Your also need a little practice with your singing your not bad or anything you just need to get the right pitch.The lyrics weren't so great either it sounded like you tried to hard on making theme go together.All in all this wasn't to great but a good attempt and I commend you for that.That's all I got to say so good bye and good luck with all the videos you make from now on.
DarkpaladinEXE 6 months ago
that fanart looks like something from a yaoi doujinka i tend to favour...
loppytaffy 7 months ago
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
KandiSOUL 8 months ago
you mumble at some parts lol need a better mic and you sounded like it was a bet for a dollar
MrRsmaster31 10 months ago
im going emo thats how depressing it is
loha701 11 months ago
Simon in the darkness?
TheGreatRuke 1 year ago
you should listen to shadyvox's version and then revise your own ..just saying
TheOutstandingMe 1 year ago
Too close to microphone.
BluSecDeputy 1 year ago
sorry but not very good wrong words tried to hard and emo
YouDaBunnyOctopus 1 year ago
YOU SUCK
donovan44446666 1 year ago
@donovan44446666 Shut up Don't be so mad
ILAgbg 1 year ago
the song is good as it is, dont ruin it by singing it like that, the song is originally Japanese, it is not meant to be sung in english
choasmaster71 1 year ago
You sonud Awsome! : D
karishadow6 1 year ago
Hi! I liked the version of the song, but I'd like to make some constructive criticism, may I? :D Next time you sing try to put the microphone not so close of your mouth and/or nose, because when you breathe it can distort the sound pf your voice. Also, don't be shy! When you sung this version sometimes it was as if you felt quite umconfortable when singing and that could be heard through your voice. I think u have a pretty voice, and next time try to use the full potential od your voice ;D hugz!
akane1255toya 1 year ago
I dont think her voice is that bad. It just needs to be stronger, and you need to sing louder.
Duesy20 1 year ago
@Duesy20
So in other words, alter her voice through editing.
SuperNightz217 1 year ago
@SuperNightz217 Sure.
Duesy20 1 year ago
The lyrics is not bad, but you don't hit the notes. Your mik is not very good, so try it with another one and try to hit the notes better, than it will be a nice fandub.
Cindy9527 1 year ago
its good but it would be better with a better mic that cant pick up breathing
messed2552 2 years ago
Its awesome =D good jobz =] c:!!!!
MECHAALIEN 2 years ago
This comment has received too many negative votes show
I like it....good job
extremeryu 2 years ago
before you find life's key, get in the right key for this song.
Dusty2050 2 years ago 20
roflmao
DPdustypaint 2 years ago
Man, the other one I watched was better.
TheHoodedGravy 2 years ago 4
kewl
Officalsammy 2 years ago
Couldnt really hear what you said but i bet it was awfull and depressing to make that because emos creates these sort of things. not fangirls :)
Mikita12131323213 3 years ago
roflmao XDDDDD
DPdustypaint 2 years ago
nice lyrics but as for your voice your ok but as long as you like to sing who cares you should listen to my fandubs
BlaakeChicaBoomBoom 3 years ago
o and its not I formed another side of me a side made in the darkness its from the darkness (yami ga mou hitori no) another me is created (jibun wo tsukuru) and also at the end its not and dont forget its make it lol u need to get a better source
chromzepher 3 years ago
@chromzepher
Use what ShadyVox wrote.
"And in the darkness it seems to me, that there's another me"
TheAzureKnighthood 2 years ago
Hmm... It's like you can't hit the higher notes and the lower notes.. weird...
bleachlover4 3 years ago
Uhmm.. Mabye you should get a better mike, so that wehn you say " Just walk a bit" Doesn't sound like "Just like a bitch" no offense I'm not making fun of you just saying.
dbzgtvaf 3 years ago 12