Nice original Ivan...you are master of the split screen! The only thing about the split screening though is I believe it forces you to be very precise on your phrasing so it seems like the song is being restrained by the technology. I would like to hear this with an unbridled vocal and just guitar to free up your emotion and put more soul into it. Nice writing anyway and well done!
Wonderful, Ivan! Enjoyed your song, the lyrics, the melody and all the instruments so very much! A beautiful, melancholy sweetness about it! Keep going!
Nice original Ivan...you are master of the split screen! The only thing about the split screening though is I believe it forces you to be very precise on your phrasing so it seems like the song is being restrained by the technology. I would like to hear this with an unbridled vocal and just guitar to free up your emotion and put more soul into it. Nice writing anyway and well done!
larosity 1 month ago
Wonderful!
fendermac 1 month ago
Wonderful, Ivan! Enjoyed your song, the lyrics, the melody and all the instruments so very much! A beautiful, melancholy sweetness about it! Keep going!
NAncy
nllleonard 1 month ago