Severance - Pilot Episode

[Ardenwolfe]

Man ... I hear a phone ringing and I get up to answer it.

D'oh!

This reminds me: What happened to Buddy?

Wolfe

[mastergunner99]

I'm sure he'll be back eventually. His wife was German and he was passing the time on YouTube until she was able to come to the United States. Now that she's here, I think his priorities have changed. However...I'm sure he'll return.

[nHisImage]

Great concept and great acting!

[DanHudson92189]

this is awesomeeeeeee!

[SparklestheClown]

Really good work!

[mastergunner99]

Thank you.

[tumerocamote]

I'm looking foward to the next one. Five stars.

[mastergunner99]

episode two's already been out. Episode three will be out very shortly.

[anticommon]

you do all the voices? lol. Pretty nice vid.

[mastergunner99]

Unfortunately, I'm not that good. I enlisted the assistance of a few YouTube buddies.

[skooterx]

good job

[poopsIingingmonkey]

Now I get it. I missed this because I was out of town that week. Ahh...ok so yeah, definitely want it to continue.

[panthyrr]

Who published the short story series? I'm intrigued. :)

[mastergunner99]

Mystery and Magic.

[orlinsky]

Hey, now that's interesting stuff. 5 stars for sure!

[pausebreak0883]

I'm looking foward to the next one. Five stars.

[midnyhtrydr]

lol, the interrogator sounds so cheerful, To be continued?!?!?

[mastergunner99]

Yes, it's already in the works. :)

[pdga3791]

Mark Collins?

huh, I thought your name was Shaun?

The plot thickens...

[mastergunner99]

LOL.

[Fizznfire12]

Yes! let it go on! That was great for only one actor :)

[mastergunner99]

Thanks. :) Though I can't just credit myself. Two other people helped out with this one.

[MsOpheliaPayne]

this is gonna be awesome, good job

[babygirllilsis]

I watched the impulse but ones. All three. Enjoyed them. Liked this one even better. Keep em coming and we'll keep watching.

[mastergunner99]

I'll definately do my best.

[jiggymas]

Harda22!!!u kno wat fack it!!!

[ElizaYah]

I had to laugh, this is so funny.

[rfxn]

Curious to see more, keep it coming.

[mastergunner99]

Episode 2 is in production now.

[SakuraElyse]

This is pretty damn cool. I like it, definite thumbs up. Five Stars.

[righthandgenius]

This gets better everytime i see it. I love the whole catch up scenario. Lets your imagination run wild.

[akapoopy]

nice

[komotoko]

i love your vids man!

[KaffeKrem]

Reminds me kinda of a Tom Clancy-book- And I love them.

[mastergunner99]

Oh, I'm a huge Clancy fan.

[KaffeKrem]

I just read "The Tigers Teeth" and reading "Divide And Conquer". Good to see that other people on YT digg T. Clancy

[hitman401]

this is great mate, you a really ccool guy to :) will whatch all

[mastergunner99]

I'm working hard on getting the next episode out shortly. I promise not to disappoint. :)

[paultinsel]

great clip

[LooneyTooneyGirl]

omg!!!!!! this is sooo interesting!!! I love this!!!!!! THIS IS REALLY SOME TERRIFIC WORK!!!!!!! I love this guy. lol.

[gh0ste]

how the hell do you make everything so damn interesting?

[mastergunner99]

Not sure really. I just make stuff that comes to mind, usually at a whim.

[rekoy]

freakin interesting

[marioko84]

Damm, nice one, well, i have never left a comment here on youtube, but... u made me write down the 1st one, this was awesome, keep em commin'.

[mastergunner99]

I'm flattered. I definately will keep the series running.

[gangstapranksta717]

You kept me very intrigued.

[amirshay]

wow, that's great!, liked it a lot, keep them coming!

[captaininsomnio]

hell yeah i want this to continue!!!

[PoliomanGamer]

goood work. keep it going

[Curtib22]

Keep em coming man, great stuff, 5 stars

[MamboDogFaceOne]

Hey, Shawn! Great work, I'll watch for more... love the suspense! Well done. A 5'er!

[musosf]

Great stuff, man. You'd BETTER make more of 'em, it would be downright rude of you to leave us all hanging with a barely-begun story like this.

[maplebroa]

gogo

[torpedofish]

Not bad. I'm gonna be honest though. You should hire some seasoned actors, even if the payment is Craft services. Most towns have local theater groups with lots of willing actors who'll work for cheap. You do okay delivering comedy, but you're no dramatist. And the guy off-screen should be excited, but it sounds like he is bored to DEATH. Don't give up!

[mastergunner99]

This was the my first attempt at doing something like this. I agree, there were a lot of kinks that need to be ironed out. However, as with the rest of my works here on YouTube, it'll get progressively better and more improved as we stride forward. Appreciate the input.

[ChristopherMast]

Holy cow!  REALLY good stuff man!

[speedyconkiwi]

Wanna see mooooore of that!!

[petuniabelle650]

Yes, please do more! Very interesting. Lots of possibilities. Good job.  And like I said before, you're the most talented Polish Mulatto Jew in the whole wide world.

[TheHyperRealFrog]

I only have one question:

What sort of mortar was used in the construction of the wall behind you? It's the little details that count, LOL. Keep up the great work. OR ELSE!

[Xelanderthomas]

Wow, you get better and better and more interesting all the time. Keep up the good work. I'll keep watching, that's for sure.

[wizkid2000]

Good Video! More!!!! :)

[SiPaQ]

More please.

[girlganja]

Looking forward to the next one.  :)

[Duckchow24]

Interesting. I say go for more.

One thing though: some of the dialog seemed to be spoken a bit fast, but maybe I'm just too picky.

[mastergunner99]

I do appreciate the input. Audio was easily the most challenging part of this whole video. I have Sound Forge, but I'm still a bit of a novice with it.

[MEj139]

Cool man go for it,tell the story.Also i have one more thing to say,PHOTOSHOP dude PHOTOSHOP don't fall for it!!! Great piece can't wait for more.

[mastergunner99]

I must be missing it. What do you mean by Photoshop? Is that something I should implement here?

[wpgpeanut]

She might not be dead.. even i got that.. lol

[MEj139]

That's one for the beautiful lady from up north.Thank you.

[MEj139]

No I was screaming at the character(like you do when you are engrossed in a great story) not to believe the picture.Not that the goverment would lie to you or anything.

[mastergunner99]

My goodness, I can't believe that one shot over my head. I was so focused on the actual creation of the video, that I was thinking you were referencing a special effect that could have been implemented.

[MEj139]

Well I have the luxury of just having viewed it and making a comment, Whilst you on the other hand have seen it several times in editing plus getting the other players pieces together and all other forms of The Bigger picture. It can't be easy to keep track of what the hell people are commenting about. I thank you for the interaction AND the great video.Keep shooting man. Later

[italianguyfromny]

Well done.

[mastergunner99]

Thanks.

[mastergunner99]

Up for a second episode?

[italianguyfromny]

sir yes sir!

[tommygun3]

damn, this is freaking awesome. you're going to get featured over this if you continue

[Poe1505]

you have me interested, lets see more :]

[bnessel1973]

This was absolutely awesome. And I absolutely suck.

[mastergunner99]

Thanks. And don't worry. You only suck on the inside. In this materialistic world, we never look past the surface. :)

[GeneticBlend]

Shawn! This came out awesome man. Really well done. Can't wait for more!

[mastergunner99]

Thanks for helping out with the V.O. Might need to call on you again for episode 2.

[GeneticBlend]

I'm in.

[tonyfamous]

that was good. 5 stars.

[Enkidutorix]

Suspense :O

[imaginecloud]

yes yes, more. : )

[TrueLei]

Very Intriguing, Great work!

[iheartslug]

Awesome! I look forward to the rest of the story.

[wpgpeanut]

I want to see more..

Maybe take off your shirt.. lol

[Brianj1234]

Man, every time a guy posts a video, he gets all these sexist comments! lol :p

[tommygun3]

thats because shawn is one sexy motherfuc....

[mastergunner99]

Maybe that'll be my season cliffhanger.