Jajaja, that was funny! You have some really good shots there, buddy. You just need to work on editing dialogue. There are long pauses in between the dialogue. You should start it before the next shot is shown.
And don't break the 180 degree rule which you did. Thats directing rule number 1. You might want to read into it because you really are just placing the camera randomly, Not actually directing...
we werent trying to go anywhere with this video, where do you get off tellinbg us we did a shitty job? you dont. our vids are still up (unlike yours) so again, your mother.
The little intro was neat and made me think that the rest of the video would follow suit. But it didn't...
Once again it was very awkwardly shot and it didn't flow right. The dialogue was very stale and just sound wrong "ball yes" who says that it was just dumb. Plus he got a newspaper that was a big let down. You could have been more resourceful and made it much more interesting.
Haha, this vid was awesome.
Funny shyt (felt bad about laughing at the "wish he'd bring back my mom" part, but it's soo freakin true that you just have to laugh).
Good job to all involved. ;0)
miraam2012 2 years ago
This is still my favorite out of all the videos ive been in...
Evadx5150 3 years ago
So funny! Good Job, I loved this!
octogirlpretty 3 years ago
Jajaja, that was funny! You have some really good shots there, buddy. You just need to work on editing dialogue. There are long pauses in between the dialogue. You should start it before the next shot is shown.
Nice ending. Made me laugh alot. Good job, bud.
Micco6 3 years ago
Oh that is so cool. Cute too. Haha.
5*
missupernatural 3 years ago
What did the kid's mom think about you making him say that?
NorseItalianStudios 3 years ago
believe it or not, she got a big kick out of it
thisolslacker 3 years ago
1. My idea.
2. My mother thought it was hularious, honestly, idk why....lol
3. Thatoldman22 likes the cock.
Hizzah.
Evadx5150 3 years ago
the second time you dissapear, whos in that photo. they look topless.
Nichwyto 4 years ago
haha close! its a poster for the simple life with paris hilton and nicole richie... see my other video "the Interrogation" for a better look at it
thisolslacker 4 years ago
This has a good pace and some witty dialogue. Keep up the work!
barondorange 4 years ago
that time machine...is so fake
YourVideoisFake 4 years ago
And don't break the 180 degree rule which you did. Thats directing rule number 1. You might want to read into it because you really are just placing the camera randomly, Not actually directing...
Thatoldman22 4 years ago
we werent trying to go anywhere with this video, where do you get off tellinbg us we did a shitty job? you dont. our vids are still up (unlike yours) so again, your mother.
balls yes!
Evadx5150 3 years ago
The little intro was neat and made me think that the rest of the video would follow suit. But it didn't...
Once again it was very awkwardly shot and it didn't flow right. The dialogue was very stale and just sound wrong "ball yes" who says that it was just dumb. Plus he got a newspaper that was a big let down. You could have been more resourceful and made it much more interesting.
Thatoldman22 4 years ago
who the fuck are you? this video kicks the shit out of any of your crap suspended vids.
your mother.
Evadx5150 3 years ago
O GOD! lol
ScottPatrick 4 years ago
i had a time machine too, but it only went forward in time at regular speed...
Deely153 4 years ago 2
ha wow....
scottydont0101 4 years ago