The Effects of Smoking

[MidnightAbsense]

im workin on quitting smoking man, and like, trampolines are fun dude. no chemical is worth trampolines

[adamal6256]

I CANT DO ALL OF THOSE STUFF ANY WAY!

I AM A CRIPPLE

SO I CAN SMOKE PEACEFULLY, ITS CANT BE WORST LOL!!:)

[BowrieMaterial]

My Father cycles everywhere and has smoked since he was 13 and still does and cycles everywhere...

I know what your saying but that cycling one isn't really true :L

[IAMKYLEIAMGOD]

smoking effects ppl diffrently i am stupid i started at 4 i was bum puffing my parents as they threw em out thinking it was right to do as my parents did it i am now 21 i started smoking properly when i hit 11 10 years later i can do all of them things still just prove's marijuana helps and slows down the process but good news i am quitting i am watching these vids to help it kind of gets a message across but quitting takes time

[Nadesiko85]

I really needed to see this. I´ve been smoking for 9 years (I´m 25) and you are right; I can´t do those things. I can´t even pick up my 2 year old nephew

[CsAnnihilationII]

wow nice vid

[NamelessBert]

Dead peoples lungs - dead people ahahaha

[brandon14872]

i like it, strait to the point, short

[guffey1234]

this video is full of bullshit lies.. thumbs up if u agree

[guffey1234]

this video is a fucking lie

[charmichanify]

I ride my bike every day rain or shine, up and down the hills of Yokohama. I smoke 10 cigarettes a day.

[fatalframer40]

I quitted from 10 years of smoking and I can still do a frontflip on hard ground

[Kelly123Lovely]

great video

[godkingRoss]

you lying cunt, i ride my bike 10 miles a day at least 5 days a week and smoke 20 a day.

Just stop fucking lying to people, mate....

[CanticlesInProgress]

Smoking definitely sucks - but please stick to facts. I've been smoking 20 years, still run 20miles and swim 5kms per week. There are smokers (and asthmatics) who run the comrades marathon.

Your heart is in the right place, but kids are observant and will disregard your entire video if the facts are even slightly off.

The main unquestionable issues are

- nasty addiction

- cancer

- reducing the totality of personal potential (health, energy, joy, freedom, hygiene, wealth, longevity...)

[gabyslim]

and now?  [good one]

[772Shaggy]

hey...if it makes you happy... then fuck it

[bigcheefnick]

Smoking definetly makes physical activity harder but not impossible

[fruitynutz]

i can still do all of that after 10 years. infact i can run 15km in the gym 4 times a week!

[madammanga]

@fruitynutz yeh, but you excersise, dontcha?

[fatalfury28]

common guys what the hell do you even get when smoking?? If you think you look cool just bcoz U know how to smoke, then Ur wrong, so stop smoking, and another thing, it affects the earth as well

[blazin408grass]

@fatalfury28 people smoke 4 many reasons, not just because its "cool" when nictotine enters the brain it can make people lite-headed kinda like a buzz, also some people find it beneficial cuz in small doses nictotine can improve alertness n short term memory 2 some people, some people can control it while others will b addicited

[toworship]

pray for me becuz i want to stop !!!!!

[jammardhee]

very true.. i remember runnin' two rounds at our school field that i almost fainted...l

[andiefish32]

JRoss- Evan I really liked this video. I think you did a very good job at making the point about smoking. I liked your ideas about the contrast between what you couldn't do because of... and then the reasoning. Well done and the information given was a tad gross but definitely got the point across. Again well done Evan and thank you for keeping it short and sweet!

[stec1523]

Very well done. The information was clear and the pictures were very descriptive haha. I learned a lot and it was serious which was nice.

[andiefish32]

It's a great perspective on the issue of smoking showing all the things you wouldn't be able to do if you started. The song set a good mood. The pictures had a strong and shocking effect, and discourage greatly the act of smoking. The humour about the dead people and their lungs took away from overall impact of the video.

-merryn

[andiefish32]

The length was slightly short for such a huge topic. The information was well put together, but slightly boring. I don't think this would appeal to the targeted audience. The editing and music was very well done.

Overall it does have room for improvement but good job.

-Kylie D.

[gameguy034]

too much just plan info you needed a skit of some kind

[andiefish32]

MH: This video was very good, i thought that the length and format together kept the audience's attention throughout the whole thing. The only improvement that comes to mind would be to give more research, like more defined as well like specifics. But overall this was excellent.

[floweribbon]

Angelica: very short but still really good. I like the added "in ten years" part. good way to show the affect it has! great job

[andiefish32]

I thought that this was very well done and the message was brought to me wery well. great job. curtis

[andiefish32]

This video was very well done and it had a cool camera angle which made me interested in the video. the facts were displayed very well and i thought overall it was great. curtis

[andiefish32]

The music was great Evan.

You took a broad topic and broke it down into small steps that could be easiy understood by people.

I think that you did a good job on all aspects. The you couldn't do this if you smoked section was very well done as it shows people that you can't do things and not expect consequences.

I think the entire video is very effective for its purpose,

AC

[andiefish32]

Good work Evan,

This one was one of the videos that had a broad topic. You did a good job of hitting all the key points about what makes smoking bad and how it can deteriorate your entire body. I thought the, you couldn't do this if you smoked, was effective because most people like to do one or two of those things that you showed which would turn people off from smoking.

Good work,

AC

[andiefish32]

Great statistics and very informative. The video was effective and the pictures were shocking. I didn't know that smoking would affect a person's ability to be physically active in such a short time.

-RL

[andiefish32]

Fantastic video. I loved the way you showed before and after, and the bike riding scene at the beginning made the video complete. It really got the point across and helped us understand and the fact that you said 2 people died in the duration of the video was scary and motivating. Great job.

-SO.

[andiefish32]

I think that this video was very well done and it discribed information about smoking and the long term effect that it has on you. Smoking is a serious problem and it does effect smokers lifes but people who smoke can oviously do the activities described in this video, they would just brethe and cough alot. over all great job guys.: curtis

[andiefish32]

Very good camera shots and editing. The pictures used to express the damage on the lungs after years of smoking was very effective and sent a strong message. The information such as "not being able to ride a bike or trampoline" should be fixed because after 10 years of smoking, smokers have pressure placed on their lungs which would damage their health but it still wouldn't make those sports impossible for them. Very good video but could use more information in general. - A.V

[andiefish32]

Cole Thomson: I thought the format of this video was very creative, but i don't think all of the information was fully researched. The point was put across to viewers fairly well, but i thought it could of been longer.

[timtamslam444]

The video was very effective by showing all of the things that could happen if one did decide to smoke. The scans and facts in between I found to be shocking and influential. However, it was kind of repetitive by using the same idea of "You wouldn't be able to do..." It could also be a bit longer, but other than that, this was a good one.

[andiefish32]

McKenzie T: good graphics used, set the mood!!! it was a little short and thought that if it was longer it would convey the message even better!! At around 30 seconds you showed a regular non smoking heart and then a smoking heart. From an artistic point of view the other side of the heart should have been on the right side instead of the left!! Good job overall!! I also think that if you used more information it would be better as well!! hope you take into consideration what i have said!!

[jake748]

I thought that this movie was not long enough, but was still made the point fairly clear. However the maker of this video has very little 1st hand knowledge on cigarettes themselves and the affect they have on the human body, after 10 years of smoking a person can still ride a bike or jump on a trampoline, they just tire easily due to lack of working lungs.

[andiefish32]

SR_ this movie was good but short. although it got the main points out length was a issue. i liked this movie because it had music that flowed with the whole thing. this movie makes me want to never smoke.

[andiefish32]

though this video was pretty short it showed information about how the smoking can affect you. i like how you showed clips of things you would not be able to do after 10 years if you smoked. this video over all was well done :P

-Amy M.

[andiefish32]

i thought this video was put together very well. it was interesting but i think there still could have been more facts about smoking. i was unaware that you can't bike after ten years, and im not sure if that is a true fact because my mother smoked for over ten years and quit but can still perform in athletics very well. i led the photos of the longs but would have added a couple more pictures on what smoking can do. - AR

[horsefreak8888]

I thought that the video was not very affective. "Your clogged arteries could not be able to carry oxygen to your mussels". While this is true you have to be careful because it sounds like smoking causes your arteries to clog which is false.

The picture scans were a bit too long and i think would loose the audiences attention,they were a good affect though.

Over all i think the video was well done but lacking a lot of information and was too short.

[crackinwindow]

I thought it was too short, although saying "you wouldn't be able to bike after so many years of smoking" would be surprising to most people, because it is exaggerated. The pictures however were very useful in showing the effects of smoking on your lungs. The fact however about 2 people dying every 1.3 minuets is accurate.