Not too bad. Good job on the voices.
TheRailwayIndustry 2 years ago
That was a great entry - and a great closing line! :)
CombineHarvester01 2 years ago
Thanks very much. Also Once I get my other camera working, and get a new Mic, I'll be staring my new model Series.
cybermurph04 2 years ago
i loved the "we'll blame the fat man for this"
Lol i laughed heaps for that :D
MITCHELLtheC17 2 years ago
Nice!
OffTrackProductions 2 years ago
We'll blame the fat man for this..that's a great line.
This entry has some really vivid colours, (color US spelling) and a great short story.
Thanks for entering and good luck.
leokimvideo 2 years ago
Thanks Very much, One I get my old camera working and a new Mic, I'll be begin my Thomas Model Series
Not too bad. Good job on the voices.
TheRailwayIndustry 2 years ago
That was a great entry - and a great closing line! :)
CombineHarvester01 2 years ago
Thanks very much. Also Once I get my other camera working, and get a new Mic, I'll be staring my new model Series.
cybermurph04 2 years ago
i loved the "we'll blame the fat man for this"
Lol i laughed heaps for that :D
MITCHELLtheC17 2 years ago
Nice!
OffTrackProductions 2 years ago
We'll blame the fat man for this..that's a great line.
This entry has some really vivid colours, (color US spelling) and a great short story.
Thanks for entering and good luck.
leokimvideo 2 years ago
Thanks Very much, One I get my old camera working and a new Mic, I'll be begin my Thomas Model Series
cybermurph04 2 years ago