Honestly, the way that you are spitting on this track is more impressive than on 'My Dreams' you sound all around better when you speed up your flow. I agree that you still need work but in one persons opinion if you stick to the style you are using on this track you will come out more successfull in the end. Don't let negativety knock you, let it inspire you and raise you up.
to be honest....you were better than i thought you were gonna be....you chose a hell of an instrumental to lace up....big shoes to fill lol. it wasnt bad tho man, keep at it!
hey man i love your stuff, i was wondering if youd be interested in a collab? i could send you an audio of me so you can see if you like my style, if your interested?
didnt get anything, remix was very very shaking, lots of volume variables, and urnot hitting a single beat man !! weak . lyrics were good though ... a few more years bro ...
Ya got a fan page on facebuk,Lemme know! I'ma share this link wif my buds,I bet they re gonna love it,this shit goes so hard man,stay to yo real shit xD
Ok, i did not think it would sound that good when a friend told me about you. this sounded natural, like it was supposed to be the song. great work keep it up!
"I guess the ink is the sperm that fertilizes the paper" - lol think i see some Pharoahe Monch influence right there, but ill line - nice lyrics and delivery! the only thing i could prolly say to improve on is to tone down the music a little cuz it was kinda hard to hear what u were sayin, but u put the lyrics in the description so it was all good! - keep it up!
@GhostWriterOfficial lol ahh my b - i said that cuz he says somethin really similar in Desire ("My book is a ovary, The pages I lust to turn, My pen's the penis, When I write the ink's the sperm...") - yw btw!
Holy shit dude wish I had enough money to get you a record deal cause you got the talent dogg! Stay with this dream cause everyone has dreams but not everyone can accomplish them but if rapping is yours then by all means chase it cause you will get your dream and become the next fucking P diddy! ;)
marry me ? <3
kamuflefan 2 weeks ago
You are awesome! this video must be atleast 2,000,000!
XxACEBadAssXx 1 month ago
only 7,000+ views-.-
daskittlez211 1 month ago
yo man from baltimore maryland: HOLY SHIT UR SO GOOD YOU NEED A LABEL!
Iamgueneapig 5 months ago
big this check ma page cuzzy
TheMlviper 6 months ago
this good man
iAmLASERS 6 months ago
Greetings from Poland You have a nice voice keep up the good work!
damon219999 6 months ago
holy fuck thats shits fucking tight dog
DjSkittlez4Life 6 months ago
You're really good keep it up!
crashman776 6 months ago
respect my man, thats very cool
NeroLior 6 months ago
damn bro this shit bang keep it up man
TreDdafukinwolf 6 months ago
this is probably the sickest rap ive herd in a while, you my friend, have some sick talent.
NoBudgetForUse 6 months ago
this is good
RememberingHerName 6 months ago
Honestly, the way that you are spitting on this track is more impressive than on 'My Dreams' you sound all around better when you speed up your flow. I agree that you still need work but in one persons opinion if you stick to the style you are using on this track you will come out more successfull in the end. Don't let negativety knock you, let it inspire you and raise you up.
nilla880 7 months ago
thats quite good, but u still need to work on ur voice, did u hit puberty?
Aalnasser1996 7 months ago
@Aalnasser1996
WHAA!?? are you kidding? his voice is good.
RememberingHerName 6 months ago
why wasnt this on the album? its dope haha
kingindustries1 7 months ago
where'd you get your mic set?
animeman10118 7 months ago
Mate this is awesome!!
iTzSTU4RTx 7 months ago
that was ill the first 3-4 bars went hard brother keep doing ur thang ,,, NIGERIA STAND UP
ThePoucholi 7 months ago
haa you got that Nigerian heat
sbright21 7 months ago
Where u from kidd?
oljerzbastard 7 months ago
@oljerzbastard im from nigeria but i live in baltimore
GhostWriterOfficial 7 months ago
@GhostWriterOfficial Word keep it up...
oljerzbastard 7 months ago
@GhostWriterOfficial I LIVE IN BALTIMORE :d
Iamgueneapig 5 months ago
@GhostWriterOfficial wow thats nice I am from Nigeria but i leave in georgia.. its good to know u representing...
TheTerryekos 2 months ago
@oljerzbastard MR LABEL!
SirGuettaX182 6 months ago
goooooooood
nice work man
alex19121995 7 months ago
@alex19121995 it´s true...GooD work
Alex124300 7 months ago
his good:D
SlimPL1 7 months ago
Better than original..
THUMB UP IF AGREE
reykaskus 7 months ago
yeah, that was pretty good. But dont spam people's inboxes with it.
TheSethcast 7 months ago
Baby voice !
selimos33 8 months ago
19 people aren't living life in the fast lane :)
thestarklover 8 months ago
okay im a huge eminem fan and wouldnt think any remix of his song would be good, but damn! i love this!
thestarklover 8 months ago
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Save any music on Mediaoutletonline. Just find it on Gooogle =)
SamathaAlcivar 8 months ago
Damn,i just love this! im still listenin' to this,ur awesome! :x
PuffyOfficialChannel 8 months ago
to be honest....you were better than i thought you were gonna be....you chose a hell of an instrumental to lace up....big shoes to fill lol. it wasnt bad tho man, keep at it!
happyfacekilla 8 months ago
good shit ;) keep em posted ..
crugo2010 8 months ago
oh my god you r amazing
GamesTracks 8 months ago
very good - Nothing compares to original though it was a legendary track and video but you did the beat justice - keep it up
YannikMusic 8 months ago
like it
SlimPL1 8 months ago
Damn epic lol liked it and i dont like many lol keep up the good work
bparedes210 8 months ago
nice work homie, this is my version of the instrumental, sick shit ;)
LyricalTv2011 8 months ago
new talent woow ^^
thank u so much
keep posting
and keep it up
yaz0a0no 8 months ago
sounds dope
smighty36 8 months ago
Greatt video!(:
It's legitt
Urseus17 8 months ago
19 people are complete idiots or deaf, maybe got the confused which button was which, but theres no reason to dislike this song, its amazing!!!
callieqw1 8 months ago
SO GOOD!!!!
callieqw1 8 months ago
SOUND GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!
SuperNELLY1999 8 months ago
moving around like you on crack
ksnab 8 months ago
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Serafim009 8 months ago
you already made quite a name dude, keep rapping dawg!
FRIGIN05 8 months ago
dude your pretty damn good
kendallbarnes6338 8 months ago
this is really good
u should get a white frend to make it offical
rendogy1234 8 months ago
hey man i love your stuff, i was wondering if youd be interested in a collab? i could send you an audio of me so you can see if you like my style, if your interested?
jballa0054 8 months ago
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holymoses12345 8 months ago
that was tight, keep rappin, u got talent
MokeRecordsMIC 8 months ago
didnt get anything, remix was very very shaking, lots of volume variables, and urnot hitting a single beat man !! weak . lyrics were good though ... a few more years bro ...
sidisbored 8 months ago
ur good dude i heard of u cuz i got a msg... keep on singing bro dont stop u can go far... keeep it up
4everIwillbeArocker 8 months ago
Ya got a fan page on facebuk,Lemme know! I'ma share this link wif my buds,I bet they re gonna love it,this shit goes so hard man,stay to yo real shit xD
VishamD 8 months ago 3
@VishamD yea, the link to the fan page is in the description
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
@GhostWriterOfficial I've liked the page and gonna suggest it to my friends!
VishamD 8 months ago
awsome man.
MultiMaster987 8 months ago
damn bra that was raw...automatic subcribe
BigJDogg12 8 months ago
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yo turn the beat down a bit coz i can just about hear you, good though
robbiec82 8 months ago
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wow, nice this. ive just done a rap over this track too. type in 'reza fast lane' and let me know what you think..
good work :)
KingRezaa 8 months ago
thanks for sendin me this! its sick!
DJFellows99 8 months ago
this goes pretty hard.
nice job
JonathanSJey 8 months ago
good shit bro
proplayaa1 8 months ago
This is raw. Keepit up.
Grayje27x 8 months ago
niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeess
TheNooooooo 8 months ago
@CollectorsMint download link is up
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
Pretty sick bro!
-B.Cash
Brent435 8 months ago
Pretty good. Could be mixed better.
YowzersNmyTrousers 8 months ago
you're good man
duyvip1102 8 months ago
Still listening lol I told you #1 fan!
empier79 8 months ago
this is really sick man!!!!!!!! u gonna be a star
ray8501 8 months ago
WTF thats fucking sick! Man, am i glad i clicked onto this video now! You've got a new Sub!
mynameisjamesj 8 months ago
THIS WAS AWESOME!! You have my support! ;D
UniQuEclectics 8 months ago
Pretty dopee
htothemtotheh 8 months ago
man this is good, would like to hear you rap a little slower too though. Sub
dacolts89 8 months ago
WOW this is real good!!! Subscribed! You Fucking killed it man...
brunobrazda 8 months ago
Damn, very good, subbed.
orkasteez01 8 months ago
Killed It!!!!!!! Ima Do My Own Versionn I Subbed
BigBenmusic1 8 months ago
u should team up wit eminem
Gambit2019 8 months ago
Good lyrics man but I think you could use some more expirience
raprules699 8 months ago 8
@raprules699 Get some more 'experience' with spelling. He's great, no need to knock him, he has got skill and potential.
mynameisjamesj 8 months ago
@raprules699 He is getting his experience right now man. And doin' it right
MrSullyTheKnight 6 months ago in playlist More videos from GhostWriterOfficial
this is tight!!!
6836644abc 8 months ago
yeah !
MaarcosDiaz 8 months ago
I wish you sounded more angry when you rap.. It just seems like it would suite you
KingBaje 8 months ago
thATS sick. i subed :)
arcakana 8 months ago
This is some decency! These covers are shit, nice to see someone wap there their own lyrics on it!<3
MrKiebo95 8 months ago
NICE U GOT SKILLED
TheICourageous 8 months ago
AWESOME!! Great job man! Keep this up ;D
And feel free to check out my cover of this song as well Ihinosen ^-^
UniQuEclectics 8 months ago
Ok, i did not think it would sound that good when a friend told me about you. this sounded natural, like it was supposed to be the song. great work keep it up!
8MileGaming 8 months ago
Great man, nice flow and lyrics. I got you if you need beats
SpliTSideZ 8 months ago
daaaum! tahts good!
XDkBsX 8 months ago
When i got a message in my inbox i thought this was gonna be shit but i was actualy impressed keep it up.
SuperDuperCedric 8 months ago
Dude, try hooking up with some famous rapper, maybe even Em & Royce, you got skill..
Proffesionallistener 8 months ago
Wow nice dude. Good job!
OxBbyGrlXo2 8 months ago
You move to much, In a famine way too.
Omgimsean 8 months ago
@Omgimsean But other then that, Well produced! If anything, I can make Videos for you.
Omgimsean 8 months ago
Reminds me of B.O.B. anyways good job.
ChriswithTalley 8 months ago
Reminds me of B.O.B. anyways good j b.
ChriswithTalley 8 months ago
yea is cool
lanzeroz05 8 months ago
This is true rap. Please make more! :D
SkyReceiver 8 months ago
is this a freestyle
MegaBlackk1d 8 months ago
sounds good man, keep it up ;)
niek691 8 months ago
keep it up your awesome
SuperDarksaid 8 months ago
This is the first time i looked at something someone sent me
sk8erinsk8 8 months ago
Niceeeeeeeee :)
zantam321 8 months ago
not bad
Extourmed 8 months ago
Nice flow! Punch out some hooks and concepts and you're good to go!
ChaoticKraus 8 months ago
Do you make your own songs? I don't mean your remix's I mean do you make your own?
empier79 8 months ago
That was sick dude nice job
AZDevilDog02 8 months ago
Damn that was tight, I just subbed.
ecwfan3052 8 months ago
@ecwfan3052 thank you very much
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
man,ur so good! awesome! <3
PuffyOfficialChannel 8 months ago
@PuffyOfficialChannel thanks alot for the support
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
#1 fan I have been listening to this all day!
empier79 8 months ago 2
@empier79 :D thats good too hear! lol
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago 5
@niddasa thanks
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
damnn your mad gud
shaolin374 8 months ago
@shaolin374 thank you!
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
@GhostWriterOfficial yo you shuld go pro. try to get someone to get you a deal. your mad gud. i would listen to you over alotta other rappers .
shaolin374 8 months ago
DAMN BRO!
n3570r1996 8 months ago
@n3570r1996 thanks man!
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
Keep on spitin' that shit bro
lprullzBG 8 months ago
@lprullzBG thanks for the support!
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
I enjoyed all untill after 1:57. >:(
ShinyScrafty 8 months ago
@ShinyScrafty haha, mabye i'll make it longer for the mixtape
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
AMAZING, keep it up :)
kingmiron 8 months ago
@kingmiron thanks alot!
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
That was a blazing rap you got some good flow, got your message then watched = subbed!
TheDannym2010 8 months ago
@TheDannym2010 thanks alot for the support man
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
@GhostWriterOfficial no prob's man!
TheDannym2010 8 months ago
amazin! good luck!
TheRbc53 8 months ago
@TheRbc53 thank you!
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
subbed
SpeedXXKiller 8 months ago
@SpeedXXKiller thanks!
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
keep it up someday youll be a legend
mrcharters123 8 months ago
@mrcharters123 thanks alot man
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
better than lil wayne
RAMM245 8 months ago
@RAMM245 lol i wouldnt say im there yet, but one day! thanks for the support man
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
"I guess the ink is the sperm that fertilizes the paper" - lol think i see some Pharoahe Monch influence right there, but ill line - nice lyrics and delivery! the only thing i could prolly say to improve on is to tone down the music a little cuz it was kinda hard to hear what u were sayin, but u put the lyrics in the description so it was all good! - keep it up!
GCrAcKa808 8 months ago
@GCrAcKa808 umm mabye lol i never listened to pharoahe lol but thanks for the advice and support man, very much appreciated
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
@GhostWriterOfficial lol ahh my b - i said that cuz he says somethin really similar in Desire ("My book is a ovary, The pages I lust to turn, My pen's the penis, When I write the ink's the sperm...") - yw btw!
GCrAcKa808 8 months ago
Dude you got IT! Im a fan instantly. I subbed :-)
randomstar87 8 months ago
@randomstar87 thanks for the support and sub :)
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
nice man u really got talent
alexander31562 8 months ago
@alexander31562 thanks alot man
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
awesome!!:):)
NishantVaidya94 8 months ago
@NishantVaidya94 thanks!
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
Niice, keep on :D
Mabo971997 8 months ago
@Mabo971997 thank you
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
Holy shit dude wish I had enough money to get you a record deal cause you got the talent dogg! Stay with this dream cause everyone has dreams but not everyone can accomplish them but if rapping is yours then by all means chase it cause you will get your dream and become the next fucking P diddy! ;)
empier79 8 months ago
@empier79 thanks alot for the support man, very much appreciated
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
your gona go somewhere
XxKONGxXxCLAN 8 months ago
@XxKONGxXxCLAN thanks
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
freestyle, what are you recording with?
MalcolmHeardSB 8 months ago
@MalcolmHeardSB mxl .007
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
man you got some talent
wolwarine17 8 months ago
@wolwarine17 thanks man
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
Not bad thats good
wwefan97981 8 months ago
@wwefan97981 thank you
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
This nigga fye :D keep it up bruh
gatorgoon352 8 months ago
@gatorgoon352 thanks alot man
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
i subbed and that was fu@$in amazin
TheScootair 8 months ago
@TheScootair thanks for the support
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
gj :)
DPricochet54 8 months ago
@DPricochet54 thank you
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
do you write your own lyrics?
TheNinjaCore 8 months ago
@TheNinjaCore yes, i write everything i make
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago
that was awesome
RAMM245 8 months ago
@RAMM245 thanks man
GhostWriterOfficial 8 months ago