I would put some - a touch more space between If I , and I would like to hear the street music of daily traffic/life a bit louder in back ground, it is to faint.... Otherwise I really like how the main word frames stay and the other words pop in and out and unfold the poem! Great job Adrian!
That's funny. Jackie told me the same thing about the "If I" and I forgot to do it before sending it to YouTube. Thanks for reminding me. I just fixed it.
At the Great White Throne Judgment of The Lord at the end of His 1000 year reign on earth and before we enter Eternity, all the lost will bow their knee, and proclaim that Jesus Christ is Lord. Why not follow Him now?
I agree that it should be "walk with me not" but I think the author can get away with saying "walk me not" because he equated God with "way" which means path or direction. You can walk a direction or a path. That's just what I think though. Thanks for the comment.
Wow, reelverse, not sure anything should be added. It's stark. As is, the video left me condemning myself.
How old is the poem? Maybe first frame could add "..written in YYYY", then video end: "how would He judge us today?" or better phrase.
I question the word "condemn": is it in the poem? If so you must keep it, but a better word is "judge". Post-salvation we are never condemned, but we are judged for not growing spiritually, i.e., Col 3:25, 1Cor3, Phili 3:18-19, Rev4:1 (Bema @Rapture).
Yeah, "written long ago". Maybe no question at the end or, "What would He say to me today?" allusion to WWJD. It's WWJT in my webpages, What Word Jesus Thought, What Would Jesus Think, but WWJD is better known.
The "to me" makes it personal?
Hence your videos are powerful, since you Just Focus On The Word Itself. When seeing this one, I think of 1Jn1-2:5, 4:12-17 & John 15.:)
Well, the problem is that the entire poem is in the first person, Christ speaking. To suddenly switch to second person seems disjunctive. Maybe others will think it works; after all, your goal is to reach people, and you already 'have' me. :)
That was a beautiful vid, nothing to be change in it.
And the street and children sound.... JUST LOVELY
JESUS IS LORD!
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Gvozdov 3 years ago
POWERFUL WORDS! Can Add also "Ye call me GOD, but Worship me Not".
Keep-up the Good works of the Lord.
audzter 3 years ago 2
WOW!
majesticguitar2 3 years ago
Opps - skip the making the back ground music louder, still waking up here as my volume was down lower then usually.. O'vie - skip that part...
kdcoronel 3 years ago
I would put some - a touch more space between If I , and I would like to hear the street music of daily traffic/life a bit louder in back ground, it is to faint.... Otherwise I really like how the main word frames stay and the other words pop in and out and unfold the poem! Great job Adrian!
kdcoronel 3 years ago
That's funny. Jackie told me the same thing about the "If I" and I forgot to do it before sending it to YouTube. Thanks for reminding me. I just fixed it.
reelverse 3 years ago
At the Great White Throne Judgment of The Lord at the end of His 1000 year reign on earth and before we enter Eternity, all the lost will bow their knee, and proclaim that Jesus Christ is Lord. Why not follow Him now?
AbaloneKid 3 years ago
I agree that it should be "walk with me not" but I think the author can get away with saying "walk me not" because he equated God with "way" which means path or direction. You can walk a direction or a path. That's just what I think though. Thanks for the comment.
reelverse 3 years ago
Totaly agree with Brainouty's coment
Again you did a excelllllent job..Adrian..
5 Stars!!!!!
Psalm 27:14
Wait for the LORD; be strong and take heart and wait for the LORD.
heltonlms 3 years ago
Wow, reelverse, not sure anything should be added. It's stark. As is, the video left me condemning myself.
How old is the poem? Maybe first frame could add "..written in YYYY", then video end: "how would He judge us today?" or better phrase.
I question the word "condemn": is it in the poem? If so you must keep it, but a better word is "judge". Post-salvation we are never condemned, but we are judged for not growing spiritually, i.e., Col 3:25, 1Cor3, Phili 3:18-19, Rev4:1 (Bema @Rapture).
brainouty 3 years ago
Thanks. I've been researching the poem and there is no listed author or date. I just get the words "old" or "ancient" but nothing with a date on it.
I agree with you on the word condemn but it's in the poem.
Perhaps I can write "written long ago" earliest quote is from 1930 and even then no date is ascribed to it.
Should I add the question at the end? It's hard compare then and now if I don't have the "then". Any suggestions?
reelverse 3 years ago
Yeah, "written long ago". Maybe no question at the end or, "What would He say to me today?" allusion to WWJD. It's WWJT in my webpages, What Word Jesus Thought, What Would Jesus Think, but WWJD is better known.
The "to me" makes it personal?
Hence your videos are powerful, since you Just Focus On The Word Itself. When seeing this one, I think of 1Jn1-2:5, 4:12-17 & John 15.:)
brainouty 3 years ago
How about this at the end of the video, "What do you call Him?" Is that too confrontational?
reelverse 3 years ago
Well, the problem is that the entire poem is in the first person, Christ speaking. To suddenly switch to second person seems disjunctive. Maybe others will think it works; after all, your goal is to reach people, and you already 'have' me. :)
brainouty 3 years ago
Interesting point. I didn't consider that.
reelverse 3 years ago