I actually like this quite a bit. The obvious symbolism in the necklace make it very relatable. I like how you showed the empty bench at the beginning and at the end. It tied it together. I liked how at the end she was just gone. You did not outright say that she died, but made the observer think. I'm torn on the music. I like the harshness at some points of it, but it is also a little distracted. All together a 9/10 in my book. Good job.
@MrTurtleyDude I like editing around music, so I choose that piece and arranged the clips to match it. I'm glad you caught on to the symbolism and meanings of the short. The idea with the last shot is that she was never really there to begin with and that it was in fact her ghost who had returned to the place of her suicide recounting that memory.
chris why were you mean to her? i used to ike you tat bette have been a joke.
zachmanrulez 8 months ago
thums up any way
Tman90100 1 year ago
sad face ):
joelhemingway1 1 year ago
You should have left the book on the bench, to add a creepy feeling.
CancelOutStudios 1 year ago
gud jub k bai
ToastyDaMosty 1 year ago
@Jewlion226 I did.
NeirFilms 1 year ago
I actually like this quite a bit. The obvious symbolism in the necklace make it very relatable. I like how you showed the empty bench at the beginning and at the end. It tied it together. I liked how at the end she was just gone. You did not outright say that she died, but made the observer think. I'm torn on the music. I like the harshness at some points of it, but it is also a little distracted. All together a 9/10 in my book. Good job.
MrTurtleyDude 1 year ago
@MrTurtleyDude I like editing around music, so I choose that piece and arranged the clips to match it. I'm glad you caught on to the symbolism and meanings of the short. The idea with the last shot is that she was never really there to begin with and that it was in fact her ghost who had returned to the place of her suicide recounting that memory.
NeirFilms 1 year ago
She is Hawt. I loved this video!
Moonwolf898 1 year ago
you did pretty good on this video.
roostermeow 1 year ago
wtf
grandgranadiers 1 year ago
who was that girl?
NightRyderFilms 1 year ago
@NightRyderFilms Liz
volzcrazy 1 year ago
@NightRyderFilms cmneir does has a girlfriend, he even features her channel on his. if its not her then idk who it is
lazernuke 1 year ago
@lazernuke It was me
CMNeirsGF 1 year ago
@CMNeirsGF i knew it! :D
lazernuke 1 year ago
...... Im kinda scared.
CountryDoucher 1 year ago
Im sure it was good from the standpoint of someone who is passionate about film, but I was sooooooo lost.
MrJustin0000000 1 year ago
aw kinda sad to watch
JTPri12345 1 year ago
I liked it :D you deserve a cookie and an A+
Randumguy69 1 year ago
Good
ownedbyomom 1 year ago
not the best editing, if thats what you were looking for.. the story was kinda.. wtf.. and yeah. i thumbed up anyway?.
fbibfiles 1 year ago
@fbibfiles We took our composition shots and put together a montage. Editing wasn't as prominent as the sequence, and timing of the shots were.
NeirFilms 1 year ago
Nice Shots :D :D Keep it up
IChopYouFilms 1 year ago
I found this pretty interesting. I liked it more without audio.
Towlie939 1 year ago
Beautiful.
CaptianPWN 1 year ago
also, awesome way to start the channel
hardshocker2 1 year ago
it says 1:01
dont know if thats youtube or not but the video itself is cool.
hardshocker2 1 year ago
@hardshocker2 Youtube adds an extra second
URreadingThis1 1 year ago