Spoken Poetry: "Used To Be"

[UselessAccountSquare]

i loved it but sometimes it's almost like your rapping

[IulesVa]

i really like it!



[WhiteLaceBlackRibbon]

i meant good sorry *

[WhiteLaceBlackRibbon]

really good poem, i liked the description for it too! goof job!

[evilpoet03]

I loved your poem! You did a great job. Check out my youtube channel I recite poetry as well. Would love to get some feed back from you.

[DwiteTheSpriteKnight]

I believe it would be better if you shortened your introduction, that poems have more impact when you don't explain them first.

[w2luvly]

Damn this was good every word was an excact reflection of my relationship.

[kokobellies]

Writing this like this sure can help you move on! NIICE!

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[livinginthepast3]

Nicely done! I love the honesty of this one.

[MURDERoneONone]

its spoken poetry, haters need to open there eyes ... for me i like it! and i can relate = / .. i wish some day we would speak to each other like this it would be awsome ! maybe is just a pipe dream lol keep writing best of lucks!!!

[polieoliee]

It just REALLY sucks that it's hard to hear; it's a shame :(

But I like ittt!!!! :)

[Analialmazan66]

its comes from with in which makes this poem good & truee ... i really liked it

[benjione1984]

Please watch and rate my poems the alcoholic and the dream that cries.....nice heartfelt poem :)

[ElyanaSP]

Woah! This was amazing. Your use of metaphors was astounding! : ) And you're so pretty. Keep writing! :D

[PoohPooh071]

its alright!!!!

[MrGrimezTheAntiHero]

Great energy from this poem.

Don't worry about the haters this poem is not sappy it's true to the heart.

Peace and many blessings!

Mr Grimez The Anti Hero

[meeemzsays]

@MrGrimezTheAntiHero Thank you so much. Really appreciate it.

[onelove0992]

lovely! love your words and how you used them.. i can relate.

[crisarg13]

girl that was awesome but sad i really like this poem good job. o can u comment on my poem tell me if i need 2 change anything cuz i am trying 2 be better thanks

[rhymingpoetry]

nice poem!

[seventy73three]

her lisp is ANNOYING as hell, good poem tho!

[meeemzsays]

@seventy73three I don't even have a lisp. Lol, I was hella sick that day so it probably fucked up my vocals. But thanks

[DwiteTheSpriteKnight]

@seventy73three What lisp?

[thxckbxtch21]

tell em girl;; i love this poem! love your vocabulary too =]

[Gregzepp1]

Very well put together thoughts, told a story and touched my heart. Great images, keep going, keep feeling, keep writing

[carlnellie403]

i like this .. dont worry about others keep writing what you feel ... someone out there feels like you do and this will help them ... i like it a lot ... sent to my friend and she cried .. keep it up plz

[greaval]

i like poetry but not when it's about love and relationships. that's just really sappy.

[meeemzsays]

@greaval

Meh, Honestly. I get that often, but it's whatever to me. I'm not going to let myself be put down for writing about how I feel. I don't pick my emotions.

[lea15469]

that was beautifull :) lovedd it

[sw3etsuffication7]

this is beautiful i <3 it .. you got talent keep it up

[adriana233022]

you are really good.

[ggsmiles]

This is lovely miel! :]

[killafonda]

i like this *