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  • nope never have to limbo this way i stand up I keep it simple and man up keep it true and hold trust dont cross me or the bullet will be the last thing thtat you touched.

  • A true DAWG, never Barks WHEN its ROUGH, WHEN theyre STUCK, cuz thats WHEN LOYALTY getsCUT SNEAKING around just to SEE WHATS UP so that in terms of knowledge they could sell you out just to make a fast buck perhaps a deal cause theyre cuffed or even a meal because cuz out here on these streets it is rough when your young but i still never cross the line i stay above.........

  • omg where is the bass lol?! make that bass higher

  • mind in a whiteout, cause an all out riot fightout, pull tha knife an dick niggas shy off, think they can buy me off in this industry fuckin lucky i didnt kick teeth, ima pussy, i am what i eat every week plus three, other mcs cant see me cause they lookin at a screen, so wat tha fuck who cares what they think, wont ever upstage me, no way theyll even try to face me, i kno i amaze thee, not a boast, jus tellin wat i was told, an that was that my flow was a type of cold gold, that of a pro-elite

  • can i use this??

  • I HOPE THIS AINT ON HIS ALBUM CUZ IT SUCKS-

  • So, one question, what's the fuckin album of this song?

    Thanks

  • This beat is more eminem than anything on recovery, em needs to use this beat

  • everyone trying to write raps.. lmfao for real im laughing right now you all fucking suck

  • @mattyb0942 It is all mother fucker, police, guns, drugs and women. I get a little fed up myslef I just want to enjoy the beat

  • @mattyb0942 haters, we love you

  • This world is obscene with its dark theme only to be seen as a dream to wake up with a scream with no one beside you, so extreme but what if its not a dream && you have no shoulder to lean what does that mean? how are we forseen? since birth we are made un clean cos two humans named adam && eve chose the wrong thing to believe thats how were percieved, juss humans so naive with great expectations to achieve but what if the life were living is juss a dream && what were waiting for is unseen
  • @issabella1117 lovin this

  • Growing up we all know what’s right and wrong. The golden rule always be nice to everyone. But somewhere down the line the devil crept in our souls. And break from our peaceful angel mold. We’re just demons our souls already sold. We start at a young age Being cruel and bulling Evil has already taking over everything lets start a movement. But unfortunately humans don’t want improvements. Were corrupted, mankind on the brink of self destruction. Whats our function?
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  • So much bullshit said wat ever

  • Thats Disgusting Dont Even Consider might Spark A Retalition, And Im Willin to take this Bullshit Cross the Nations State to State Its Time For yall To Put Ur faith In somthing Else and let It Guide Before i catch you In the Peripheral of My Eyes zero In On you I decide that i Let shit Slide For to Long Somthings Wrong when You Feel sick all the Fuckin time And your Nickname IS Prick someone just threw A Brick In through my Window its A miricle somone dicided to close the threats

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  • sweet! is there an extended version i can get?

  • check my beats smoking your best weed to understand how i made them

    thank you

  • I try to live life to the fullest, Sometimes I end up with a hardship, And someone makes a bad quip, Well then I guess I will have to bring out the whip, Strip you of your pride, Laugh at how you cried, I know how you feel inside, You feel like someone peeled your skin away, One layer at a time, Then they did it again rewind, Here is the lesson, Life is not kind, So keep in mind, There are always those wanna be thugs, Who are just bad cause they can't get hugs, They sell there life for drugs.

  • man i like this beat!

  • whats the point of taking life serious, im kinda curious but thinkin about it makes me delerious, personaly i do it for my own respect, so i dont end up like another reject, say something to bring me down it wont phaze me, sit down and listen to me itl amaze me, take a word of my advice and youl praize me,. the reason is in yourself, life is made of memories, even if it takes a centery, find your treasurey, and stay grazing for something to cherish, feel amazing nd never let it perish

  • my life history is all filled with regrets cuz I cant make the right decision so now I have to do something believe that I m gonna always keep trying u know that I aint a guy who give up that easily cuz I have guts u can call me nuts or whatever u aint stopping me cant u see that I m still breathing i keep inhaling strength exhaling weaknesses and breaking through everything that is on my way to success and I m going to forget what is relax cuz I already boost my self to the max ...

  • unforgetable

  • i must be dense like a masochist while you sayen the same shit with now a defense, nice attack in the beginning bt imma murder this bitch, o shit imitating his opening im gonna shit in his head, open a jar of fruit then piss in it, & say its lemons, its been sense 1942 *sound like old men* her name was katherine, & playboy magazines is now all i fuck with, bt u sending viruses on ur cputer,.....

  • @blood90snickerz your rhymes dnt makes sense nigga you must be dense if this wat you call offense then get ready to go back on defense A punk ass kid with no cents whining about his roommate skipping out on the rent keep talking and you'll be tasting the cement LOL at pussy from all ranges Im guessing you mean ages as in it must have been ages since you've last seen pussy besides from them playboy pages and tht old hag you've been banging Quit while your ahead i'll be the last one standing ™

  • @theboy230 .....masturbating 2 kate beckinsale at least i only made a mess then have a pop upfrom yo mom, saying not on the family cpu boy then you say shit, momma caught me in the act again..lol

  • @blood90snickerz lol that made no sense... um yeah im not gonna bother replying if thts ur best. Step Up Kid. Cause tht was garbage. the other stuff id thumbs up but tht was just nonsense and it didnt even rhyme.

  • @theboy230 awww its whatever dude,  i still had fun wish the shit was still poppen in the culture the way it should be though, this feestylen is the generic of rap, the type that justin bieber nor drake can produce there whack, but props to ya men

  • @blood90snickerz Agreed men, its all about money, cars and bitches nowadays.. im getting sick of hearing some retard talking about how much money he has and how many girls hes fucking.. its been over used

  • @theboy230 all this shit making riches, "imma be cruising with bitches" got me questionen the world that we live in, so poisoned by the media and the hysteria of truth being swept under the rug, kim kardash mad cuz she aint married at the age of thirty yet, when north korea is attacking the south, but that is hardly broadcasted. someone help me see, help me except this reality, so much tragedy, Afghanistan and middle east.... crazy men

  • @blood90snickerz smh You started this. so here I go.

    I Said Id tear you a new ass, so you best get ready with a gas mask, the rhymes I spit are straight toxic, breath em in and get your lungs sick you write like you fucking dyslexic so I suggest you pick up a lexic. LOL At you calling me a fag knowing the only pussy you ever had came from tht 80 year old hag watch your words bitch or they'll be finding you in a bag.. Now I dnt want this shit to drag so start waving tht white flag

  • @theboy230 im waving a flag a bloody hat that came 4rm a horse that opened ur ass, toxic manurer i throw u n a trash can burn the bag,yea i raped that hag, she knew wat she was doin unlike ur girlfriends ass 2 bad i waisted that magnum, its thrown in the trash,u said ud tear me a knew ass, no wonder ur a fag,i get more pussy 4rm all ranges is no wonder i had that hag,u must like putting shit up yo ass, imma stick my hand up yo crack end grab yo teeth pull u insideout make u look like kim kardash

  • @theboy230 there we go...lol

  • @blood90snickerz look kid how ever old you are dnt go around the internet sending out threats. I aint gonna waste any time tryna "Battle" your lame ass. who gives a shit if I have 60 views? the fact tht you took the time to look at my profile shows how much of a failure you are at life. Now dnt make come back here and tear you a new ass

  • @theboy230 men why so serious lol, bt if it sounds like its his shit, im not spittin a verse that i think was related to it, but my words i spit are truest me getten through it, little bitches like room mates saying they gng to pay and stay for only three days and find that florida law says ur lease dnt mean a thing even if there name is not on the page and then them people tryen to sue u for just being generous, lol, if its sounds like em, well my bad, bt i only spit shit i make...

  • @theboy230 thats where i go off saying that, at first they go a praising me at first then turn around and say shit about me etc, its whatever men, lol imma do what i do, and u do what u do...

  • @theboy230 and O...FAG!..lol

  • @blood90snickerz Eminem Beautiful: "Just as soon as I walk in, it's like all eyes on me" You: "i look around the room, why is everyone tryen to b like me" Very Similar. Eminem Beautiful: "I don't need no fucking man servant

    Trying to follow me around and wipe my ass.. etc" You: "i feel like a fool but people is a praising me, then try and say shit about me".. SAME FUCKING TOPIC BITCH. And seriously you wanna start a rap battle?

  • Pour my self another drink while im staring at the sink, damn i cant think... too much sauce in my brain for me to maintain my focal frame, need some glasses or need to be sober whichever it is its far from closure, im about 50 bottles down and i think ill just have another round, too late theres no going back now, is that my tv or am i staring at the ground? i think its time to end this clown cause hes drunk and hes not funny, no money, no honey... hes a failure a no life helpless drug seller

  • look my life took me up took me down where am i now stuck under ground but babe u brought life light it was dark now filled with light ima hold you tight through tha night i cant give u much but i can give u such love we cant take love it'll never end life it'll break and bend we'll be together to tha end be together forever we'll be better and we'll never ever be wtih out each other i cant even tell u how much i love her so much of her is nothen like another my only lover ya lite the fire

  • Where can I download this?

  • Yea, he's aimin for the top, writers block, he feel's it, vibes to the beat, want's to get on the mic and kill it, he want's to let the world know the real shitt, and drills it, in his head, enough said, he's got it locked down like a dread, all the bull shitt lie's he was fed, he's on the med's, now he's messin with the fed's, runnin from the 5 O, cuz he's fucked up in the head, now he needs a ride home, he's got a wound in the leg, he's digging himself in a hole, he's outa control ~

  • listenin to a beat like this brings out the worst in you, wishin every verse wernt true, but ya gotta make it though the verse thats true, blurry vision curves the hue, just got socked, sportin a new black n blue, worse than that no more money in the shoe got robbed fo ya money but they call it dues I have to represent your responsibilities. Remember all that cane you blew you stupid fuck u dint think theyd come for you, we fuckin running, where we gunna run to, shit they just gunned you. h.a.

  • check the flow

  • nothing could stand against me and my girls, it would be terrible to see me in a coffin i have a life to live and im not stoppen so i pick up a pen start writing and the lines is the only way to vent, a kid in the corner worken his words up its all brought up from the abuse marijuana and the life he didn't choose, we pick our parents and i had pick you,

  • u tryen to live a life like mine its embarrassing i look around the room, why is everyone tryen to b like me, i feel like a fool but people is a praising me, then try and say shit about me, what did i do, i cant say things to say thngs when i say thngs its truth with each door i opened i closed, i dn't wanna hurt no more but my daddy wants me 2 hurt some more, go 2 a liquer store buy an oz of tequila i drink it up i fall 2 the floor, i need some help with each pill i pop, these beans 4 the world

  • @blood90snickerz wow just copied eminem word by word. this might be an eminem style beat but it dnt mean you should copy his lines and add to it

  • @theboy230 how many times have u seen him say how he looks around the room and and everyone is looking 2 b like me, my words that i spit u wanna think that i copied a famous MC, re read them words before ur life ends in a R.I.P. coax me n a battle and ill find a way to pee on ur face with ur body thrown in the sink. pissed little bitch trippen cuz he got 60 views on his youtube page, u asking y am i starten shit but im defenden my lyrics taking the offense, nd cutting ur tongue nd feed to ur cat

  • every beat has a life line/when i write rhymes/i close eyes/now picture what you might find/in a life like mine/ people like you never believe in people like us/ if you have no legs you shoudnt run/ if you have no hands then just get hit when swung on/and if your stronger than someone you scream come on/you seem to see right in wrong/ but tonight i might be the wrong one/cause tonight the mic is like a lit wick of stick dynamite/and im kinda like flamiable so dont heat me up alright

  • i'm listening to this and i realize what should i say to captivate

    this poet is more than a man, more than a father

    a giver..fuck appearance i'm no shakira

    my hips don't lie but i rhyme to the times

    time to unwind these pleasant rhymes on stand-by

    i can multiply and divide a rhyme and give you the square root of ONE

    ME,,...PEace...

  • Don’t know where I’m going to But if I make It trough Than you might know What I did for you I don’t wanna wake up And be fat anymore It’s a door slammed in my face The greatest disgrace Of the entire human race Discriminating people Cause they’re not what you like It’s like me on the mic That you not like But I rap till I die Won’t spit a lie
  • weve all got sorrow, i pour mine through this pen dad died man ill never be the same again a memory, hes gone that it yea bro fuckin lifes a bitch gotta find that strength to get through this dad your gonna be missed but im moving on, im done thats it no more grief im sick of this shit im done now goodbye farewell fuck man ill just visit next year ill bring flowers to your grave just like we did for ma but this time its just me man it feel like your so far. away..
  • @TheFamousHipHoper  Great,mate!! I'll wait for it till you post it on Youtube.

  • aye if you liked my flow i posted, go check the video i posted as a response. need some feedback.

  • BEAST!!!!

  • haley think bout u daily i losen my mind im losing shady so be my honey and make shady sunny ....u fuckin dummy stoppin the pills why cuz if i dont i cant the bills now get real pull the peel and find the fruit inside try to choose a side but i cant decide left or right either way seems out of sight when your lifes consumed with fright each and every night so shine your lite down but god aint there so what i frown get down no i get up on my feet flat give religion a slap but what good is that

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  • life is nothing but shattered dreams tell me can you hear the fucken screams

    words that i put into a rap everybody knows might be nonsense or just a bunch of crap

    life is getting harder and harder by the day

    situations changing at any minute

    my patience is reaching its limit

    talk to me god this pain is killing me tell me whats what i still got tell me if you are feeling me

    sorrounded by darkness my heart darkens im loosing my mind

    im bein left behind i beg you put me back on my grind

  • When my heart beats feeling like a death knell sned me straight to hell seems the devils not the only one throwing coins into the wishing well. looking like a man feeling like child i'm so lost in this big big world. i wonder sometimes if i could ever make it out feel like pulling the trigger and letting my brain run out. holes in my haert no love could fillin hatred in my eyes every shade of red fillin. i gotta wonder if another father could fill in those years you left to sift in.

  • this minipulation causing fcking fustration im lost in consideration about rap lost in that rap nation i cause distruction im born mefunction now lyric distruction i rip the papper n pen like a seductionim im in no ones memory im wasting my energy but im in someones memory her name is jillian friends till the end its strang then how it allways ends with tha girlfriends cant chang it then now i pretend she wasnt even my girlfriend no even a friend ima dick then hip hop its all irealy got my shot

  • @colt13543 This is horrible

  • @theELVISdoctors Just like ur mom in bed ;)

  • @colt13543 Hey nice one..Your taste in beats matches your sense of humor. I could take a sample and loop 4 seconds of it over and over again also, Fuckin scrub

  • @theELVISdoctors Thank you ELVIS

  • @colt13543 Post your best beat and i'll post my worst, I'll destroy you

  • @theELVISdoctors ur threaten me to threaten u weak pussy

  • @theELVISdoctors screw u bro so what if he used a loop its dope not everyones a fuckin proffessional producer so suck a dick bitch. i actually think this beat is dope

  • listen to me..yeah spittin it free...on a mission for peace in these streets but these police wont let me eat so i gotta beat creeps down for they treats..on these beats im an honest beast..yeah honor me..u wanna be's...one of these...motherfuckin m-16's is goina squeeze..and best beleive we on ya like a swarm of bee's..yeah born thieves..from the hood robbin em for they goods

  • walking on the sidewalk wit a spliff in my hand asking god questions like why'd he put me on this land. im askin what? did i do something wrong is it my fault my brother shot my neighbor on his lawn, maybe not maybe its just my paranoid state or the fact that nigga got laced with a q45 in his face. god forgive me for my sins but it rains everyday i want to meet you someday and i wanna discuss my fate

  • What is the name of this Song??????

    pls teeeelllll meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! D:

  • I still have yet to find a download this shit is so dope

  • Where can I download this version? It's hella sik

  • this beat is really great, man. check some of mine out when u getta chance...

  • So I'm blessed yet again by the tough obstacles God lays out before me repeatedly So to keep my sanity I believe that God is only testing me not to see where I break but only to see how much I can take So the path I've led this far isn't mistaken I have my heart and courage that I'm taking and praying that one day he'll let up but until then bring it on, I WILL NEVER GIVE UP!

  • One thing always leads to another can't live life running for cover live life to discover hidden potential turn it out and make it suspenseful make people guess what's coming next if it's a deal you're desiring treat your dreams as a seed and turn them all into plants keep the sun shining on them and water them till full bloom this American Dream is all anyone should consume even when the plants seem dried out from a sorrow filled drout re-route and ask yourself What is this all about?

  • where the fuck can you download this? I'm sayinn..

  • Ever since I was a kid I had the belief I was gifted

    All the trouble through the years made me believe my belief needed to be refitted

    But I wised up Was I surprised, YUP! I took it to the school yard and hit them books upNow I'm distracted from a paper typing these words upI think the lesson is you need to only live it upPrimarily taking action when it's time

    Sitting back in the meantime just letting the sunshine in

  • No em did not use this song on his album, but it does sound tight though.

  • i love this beat.

  • eat shit biatchhhhhssssssssssssssss

  • Sometimes are tough, And things get rough, But when you look up, You find faith and luck, Reach down inside you, Way down inside you, Things get hard, But I'm still beside you, Till the end of the world, Hey little girl, What you cryin' about?
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  • coooool

  • did eminem use this?

  • I can kinda feel ya but not completely gibson, see my ma was kinda yound when she had me didnt really know what to do with me. she just kinda still wanted to have the young girls life at the age of 19 and i was always left with my grams never really got to see my dad cuz he was an irresponsible fuck an i never wanted to be like him, even now i feel abandoned livin with my step dads cousins, sometimes i wonder why this had to happen? but fuck it, it doesnt matter this shit just makes me stronger

  • Have you ever smell the taste of a dead body ?

    Causet his is wat happen when Dride's on the write(...) - Must be the write time - To split a great time - Light a spliff and jut roll back - What would you be you'll mind - You will shine - Id like a Royce wit my white house - Ill over painted these walls - I can see red Rose - Its moving behinds - Let the body hit the flow - I think im loosing my mind - So I am ready to go , for a ride - Following the sun till im bored , 16 remaining -

  • Fake and gay.;..

  • @ramirezz101

    asshole or hater

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  • got my ass kick even tho i got jack shit . i was siad my life would be fine. lets check imma put my life in rewin, first. cut from the back feet down. legs fucked up. cant even walk on solid ground. they say i gotta believe , but my heart just tells me to leave. theres gotta be some way to achieve.

  • Lifes been hard life's been tough but I just cant seem to get enough been through a lot shits been rough but I just gotta make it through this stuff mom passed away, when I was just two rest in peace ma, I really miss you wish you were here, and I was with you but its just shit that I gotta get through see ive been through shit that most people havent but instead of crying, I just sit and rap it and thats you'll probably, always find me laughin even though this shit shoulda never really happened
  • @TheOnlyGibson

    Great words respect the flow.

  • @TheOnlyGibson very nice mann, I especially liked tha part about your mom. .very flexible

  • @TheOnlyGibson nice verse

  • @TheOnlyGibson wow shits tuff bro

  • @TheOnlyGibson nice verse hope itss real, and if you want youre self to sound beautiful dont make it rhyme every line, let it flow, keep it up rap from the heart and not the mind.

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  • @TheOnlyGibson

    best youtube instrumental rap verse/comment ive read dude. its killer

  • @TheOnlyGibson yo this is dope homie good job mad props

  • @TheOnlyGibson u rhyme way to simple to make it

  • @iniestaone check my new freestyle i've been workin on my shit

  • @TheOnlyGibson that was dope man!

  • @iniestaone newer shit is even better

  • gangbang police on the streets

    looking for blood on the beat

    with weed gangs on the other side with ak47's

    dont trust them or theyll send u 2 heaven

    the foolish thugs carrying mugs, with guns saying we have no buns

  • amazing beat...where can i get this?

  • right here right now

  • Fucking hot shit!! This is the shit! Man I love this beat, it strikes straight to my heart. I can imagine Eminem rappin on this. I can imagine this in a movie. This is fucking awesome!!

    P.S. Can I use this in my movie?

    P.P.S. This is not ass licking

  • I swear it's like I can't win I take a shot of vodka and do it again I'm new to this shit Yet fluent and quick Wit full clips pulled quick To cut thru all this bull shit I need a different hobby Rapping ain't doom nothin for me They just tryin to stop me Tryin to drop me Rap games a door And I can't get in Rap games a whore Playin these grown men
  • DOPE!

  • my intelligent is evident

    never quit

    been dropping heavy shit ever since

    I ever spit anything

    Mom says I was spitting

    before was even sitting

    pretty much ballin

    as soon as i started crawlin

    now i'm a lion, yeah i'm mauling

    like fuck it i go all in

  • this beat is the bomb

    to bad they only use it

    on weak shit like money and hoes

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  • looking like a million bucks pulling up in hummer trucks tryin to get ur gurl to give it up and if she gives in im getting sucked shes getting fucked ill lick her butt just to get my fucking nut she licks it up she needs me bad so when i sent her back to u she b so sad in this booth i get so wicked i go so fast i need a tickit then i pay her to lickit show u how i live it cuz when u rich ther really is no limit

  • this beat woulda made a badass track on relapse, too bad most of the songs on it suck. eminem is still the best though

  • when my verse releases i speak a dicallect you couldnt teach through ant thesis the skill increases still the peaces come together foreveer i will bring with this clever shit endless evidence to whby i should be reperesented kid i reppin with the upmost influence i cant flip on a track without my senses binding to the instruments i rip intense but then i calm it down my flow is stress relief so best believe i drop a theraputic sound
  • wow theo.. u killd it... i went to freestyle and your shit ruined it.. lol tight!!

  • wats the word?

    you neva heard of this so take a second

    interpet this and put it in your own persective

    my minds connceted let the record go

    so i can teach u how to flow

    wen my mind is like a tv show

    proceed to pull a gravity

    or actually ill blaze a l cuz either way im out reality

    and if your doubting me then u cannot be soroius cuz u jus delerious like me in class first period

    it certain that i let this funtrack of paragraphic raps sum up my nastiness cuz wack mcs will foever be so

  • damn that was hott bro... nice rhymes

  • why are you guys putting your rap here

  • One of the very best instrumentals / beats I've ever heard. Pure Genius I would say.

  • part 2>

    bodies beenin found, cuz we aint doin nuttin but jus lettin dis shit happen

    some days i feel like cockin bak on da magnum put it 2 my head nd pull bak da fuckin trigga, but den i wake up nd i see my daughter, nd dats da reson dat im here is 2 b a good father, so i quess there nuttin dat i could do but change da way dat i lead my life nd treat others, bcuz b4 u decide to change da world u must change urself

  • yo, i look up to da sky open up my eyes, pray to god, give me a sign the reason y we here trying 2 survive every day until we die der gotta b a betta way, shits insane

    but no 1 is to blame except 4 ourselfs 4 all da killin nd da stealin, jus give me a reason y r we diein quick like all the fuckin seasons, im here bleedin from my eyes from my heart dis shits rippin me apart, seein all dis fuckin madness, kids cryin cuz dey got no fuckin moms parents aint around kids left to fend der ground

  • I have never heard a beat more fitting for an epic Eminem comeback track than this. Too bad he wasted his comeback on Relapse.

  • True dat

  • one of the best beats ive ever heard

  • wow you should submit this beat to the website thats taking beats for eminems relapse 2 but it has to be submited like now because it ends on the 15th i think

  • wow dude you need to submit this beat to the website the eminem has going for his album relapse 2 there taking submitions for it

  • real nice beat love itt

  • im beyond my limits, to be calm feel like a privalege, to distants from the shits get gets his-releaf, the release felt when his weed gets twisted up , buy ziggies by the sheets, like a stock holder now they just sendem to me...no sensai my pen sends it to me..taugh me how to be so naughy outta be , consider wit the best, but i get my foot in the door to set up for the test....

  • i reck wat they check to this, yes it is, insain like shootin cane to ur neck...

  • haha if EM really got on this, he would rip it but his subject matter would be something we heard before, so i think someone else should do there thing on it.

    but if he did get on it, he should take the same route he did with his Feature Verse on 50's "Dont Push Me", know dat would be dope shit.

  • ok attention kids, stay off da drugs and get on dem benjamins, i thought it was hard but i said listen ric, so i thought of new hobbies and finally got it, started spittin flow and it came out atomic, i said did i got fed my niggas said naw beyond it, so jus know that theres so many skills u got bottled up inside, u jus gotta find the time, to go deep in ya mind, find em then use em to shine, theres always someone who dislikes my shit, but i stay up and continue to pimp my pen,foreva thanks AMEN

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  • just admit that u pretty much said any word that rhymed together. that was fuckin awful

  • lol agreed.

  • wow u suck

  • im sorta like em you can call me shady two twin ladies in that black mercedes so dont play b, cuz my bitches get crazy start spittin in the direction you standing i'm holdin one in each hand'n, they hit wit a force like a cannon they love dancing but they never jamming crammin sixteen meals in they body n they get hot when they start to party keep em right by my waist, only bitches i let sleep over at my place they give you a french kiss how that taste as your soul they take
  • wannerbe rappers :P

  • haha i remember this, i realy tought that it would be on Relapse, or i hoped it. if Em will use this beat he would make the best song ever and not just in rap.

  • could come out on the Relapse 2 later this year

  • can hope so

  • This is just awesome! 5/5!

  • this is nice =]

  • nice beat but only one problem it aint of the king mathers album

  • where can i download this one ?

    sounds awesome

  • I spit on this track believe me this shit aint wack Im coming to kill better believe it cause its for real Im havin ure guts spilled as I take a vicodin pill Im havin ure brain drilled for me its a thrill to be killin at will Ive been on manslaughter all over the globe next stop brazil im to crazy like having ure throat cut with a phone bill causing a major blood spill and on top of that bunin ure face with boiling coffee still im just doin the devils will

  • If he would have spit on this beat, it would have been fire. This one would have been real hard to mess up, hes very good at messing up his songs with the accented voice, but I don't know how possible it would be to do with this beat.

  • I swear im ex'hausted'

    so much shit in my 'closet'

    I'm fighting still, but my writing skill, I swear that I 'lost it'

    down the road, when I was trying to im'press everybody'

    Fuck all those fuckers, dont need to 'address anybody'

    Dont care if you people doubt me, im the 'best and im nutty'

    so in'vest in it buddy'

    Or just fuck off motherfucker and just 'mind your business'

    kill your best friend, and then you'll have to 'find your witness'

  • man fruity loop is so freakin hard to use =( i wud neva know how to make beats like this OUTSTANDING 1

  • thought this was for shadys new album

  • Hey how do u get a image and add the beat in the backround.

  • is this song even gunna be on tha relapse

  • Iwouldnt be goin though this misery my eyes have been clouded so i cant clearly see.

    I still dont understand why this happened to me Since i was a kid all theres been is pain wheres the savior who took pain i dont think it was in vain but where is he now?

  • I love youtube rappers, always makes me almost piss myself laughing.

  • I agree.

    Lol @ whoever gave you a thumbs down.

  • they always crack me up too rofl always these wack lyrics

  • im tired of my life i fell like endin it all with a knife ive thought of it twice im sick of hearin advice but i think im payin the price for my sinsim sorry if what im sayin is an offence but ima bout to cross a gatewith what im about to saysee back in the day nothin was grey and if only in that way it would have stayed