[Short Story] The Day My Family Died

[blazerboy123456]

Sad

[FineMays]

crying...



[TheGreenapple3s]

Sad

[rachelcerrytop]

Soo sad

[TheMrCatz]

I cried watching this..sob..sob..sob

[Lover0fFantge]

Omg this was so sad that I was crying!! But good video

[vediogirl12345678910]

sooooooooo ssssssssssssssaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa­addddddddddd i try not to cry but failed....

[AdorableShihtzu]

no tears today...no tears today...no tears today...no tears today...no tears today...no tears today...no tears today...no tears today...no tears today...no tears today... aww what the heck... waaaaah!!!! soo saad!!! nooo u u fcking kill dude?

[SuperLeeTaemin]

OMG!! *sniff sniff* i was crying when the dad and the bro die.. UUU F**K U BOY WHO KILL THEM!! ILL KIILL U WHEN U GO OUT OF JAIL!! :'(

[AlyseRoseSW]

The end is so sad ;( I liked the song at the end... Kiss the rain <3 Me and my bff was watching this.. I came to tears. Nice movie though. I Love it. I've been watching this 9 times so far.

Commented & Rated.

[marinahXfifi]

I tried my best not to cry .. But I cried.. :,(

[mg1266]

im not gonan cry im not gonna cry... IM GONNA CRY well done in this vid i love it. stupid boyfriend

[ByiscuteMinecraft]

:_(_______________________

[melodywaveofppl]

this really made me cry so sad.

[MrZoo889]

36 people were dads like this.

[sutdip]

PIXELS MADE ME CRY

[rebecca54322]

so sad makes me cry alot i love can u plz make another video like this thx

[beajrstar]

You're brilliant! This made me cry!

[drewerin100]

Very well done..is it true? If its not it's very good script made tears come to my eyes great job

[KamrinLily]

I'm laughing and crying at the same time (BAHHAHHABAHHHAHA!!!!) I do this when I'm sad.

[KamrinLily]

HERE COMES THE WATERWORKS!!!!!! BA

[SpringieeHeart]

So Touching



[zc53001]

@SpringieeHeart i know right

:'(

[soulbalde99]

That stepdad is retarded

[XxCookieBetchxX]

D': aw man tears

[xoxSammyxoxo1]

Me:I can watch this without crying or talking about ma family.

After...

Me;DAMIITT!!! THE STUPID TEARS!! THE TEARS

[ilovemydog7777]

thats so sad die step dad!!!!!!!!! -___-

[TheJiamy]

That mother and her boyfriend are dipshits.

[rainbowgirl50]

D: soooo sad

[kzikle]

i would get a shot gun and kill that guy!!!!!

[sorryforyourlose21]

This the story of my friend guys he lost his family just like this

[CupcakesGirl09]

sad

[ectomoshi]

I got some weapons for christmas ( throwing stars ) and i am good with them so i would kill the " boyfriend "

[animevampire34]

If i was her i would say:nooo!!!!JAKE!!!!!!-gun is pointed at me- im here dammit kill me.-gun shoots before the cops come and thinks- Jake...dad...im coming

[KamrinLily]

Me: *tries not to cry*

[KamrinLily]

I cried and cried and CRIED... Now my house is flooded.

[ThePyschoMovieMaker]

I cried and cried and cried so hard

[ReiYukia]

Me: dont cry dont cry dont cry... *starts crying*

Grandma: SUJI U WOKE YOUR BABY BROTHER!!

Me: BUT BUT *sputters*

[hiakru22]

how do you make these i cant make the

[SwagFashion]

another sad story sigh thx alot u guys but it was good story hope ppl learn a lesson in what this means

[retartedawesomness]

This was sooo sad I cried my eyes out I showed it to my friend couse something like this happened to her I fell so sorry for people who have to go. Through this

[CuteBunnyKiss]

O_o the dad is soo short and he look like a kid.....,.

[XChezzyXx]

Is this a real story??

[dragon11363]

I hate the mom and the little faggot the moms boy friend is a faggot

[12450mimi]

-;O ugh I hate the moms BF he should be DEAD but very sad story i wouldn't do that to my family even if it cost 10000000000000000000000000 dollars

[XxMarkAuzaxX]

Super Sad Story :(



[iLudosx]

I cried too sad (even tho I'm a boy) :(

[mamalollypop28]

I cried during it soo sad :.(

[mimilittle1]

IM cring I luved ur story  :))!!

[HipieGirl1786]

the boyfriend just doesnt like them because they arent his :(

[blaze200x]

Don't worry you know that thats what my real name story its about the me

[NikkieVoTR]

But really the mother should have stay with her family, and the new boyfriend is a child abuser D:-  that guy is the even a caring person

[NikkieVoTR]

Omg I'm freaking crying right now it's to sad I will feel the same way if that happen to my family T^T

[XDcupcakegamer]

•^• T^T i started crying it was so emotional

[Rachel20026492]

If my mom had a boyfriend I don't care who he his I would just call him you a fat stupid fucking bitch!!!

[Nikiluvschu]

Omg... Epic fail. I tried not to cry, but I did.

[motionX1000]

luckly i war with girls

[chaisue1]

I HATE THAT MOTHER SO MUCH!!!

[softtball7]

aww im so sad after watching this uhh that damn bf uhh!!!!!!

[143lmorales]

god... i started to cry..

[WinterxStarz]

i would do some 'o' my karate moves on that stupid boyfriend. Poor character...

[ilovepets4]

so sad Dx i wanna cry over and over Dx

[TheMasterpieZ]

So sad :(

[gkartnoob]

Suck the mother

[SummerTimeLuvinGrl]

that stupid boyfriend i just wanna go right up to him and punch him in the face then destroy him!!!!

[SuperMouse50]

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! CANT STOP CYRIN!!!!!! WAAA

[WyattWolfie1of5]

i hope this isnt ture

[bklp311]

This is amazing, You can tell that because if you are crying at the end you have grown a connection or likening of the member of the story within 7:26 ....

[RizeMeteor]

Sad story... i was looking for a song.. cya :D

oh btw, you should become a writer... accept you need more dialog XD and a bigger plot... O.O

[dorumonfansrule]

WAHHHH IS THIS TRUE,

I hope nit?!!!!???

[maplehead2]

poor little sister now alone with no brother,nofather,NO FAMILY!!!

[MrMaplestory1234]

i know why that mom left her family... her new boy friend was rich. wata idiot mom

[JackyTVK]

How come the boyfriend looks strong? If I were Jake, I would have use my karate skill and finish him off. == He is so skinny and ugly. Obviously he is a porn star and a gangster.

[pinkshadow1011]

this shoud be on who the (bleep) did i marry

[Jazumine1]

I'm still a little girl ....but....why did their dad have to go to jail can't they just tell the story of what happened and how they suffered child abuse?!?

[Fireace1000]

like= Jake and the Girl, Dislike most the = mum the mums Bf boo!

[ReiYukia]

My Eyes a Red Right now My Tears are Rolling Down my Face im Sniffling... Im Crying Hilariously... I Cant Believe There Could Be Psychos Who flirt on someone already Married and KILLS That Persons Family..

[annoyingorange12able]

Omg i cried straight for a WEEK

[cindypeace1904]

u fucking bitch mom if i am there i would kick ur ass

[Chuwei0531]

Why is the mum always wearing the same clothes?

[lillypop0707]

what is this website?

[scarletkitty1999]

the moms a dumb bitch and the boyfriend can go die in a fire

[maywana11223]

omfg im cryingg :(

[xlilgirlrockx]

I CANT BELIVE YOUR MOM DIDNT EVEAN GRAP THE GUN FROM HIM.THAT MUST BE THE WORST MOTHER EVER !!

[drakal98]

whats the back ground suppose to be? box head? sry, cuz i know that that background is seriously not maplestory

[StarzPeril]

Mother broke her promise

[skydog12364]

tearz :(

[skydog12364]

its so sad :(

[hanahgirl2001]

THE FUCKING BITCH DIDNT PROTECT HER FAMILY THE FUCK I WANNA KILL THAT SON OF A FUCKING DAMN BITCH MOTHERFUCKER! >:(

[fuzzykittens101]

i cried at the end

[XxxAmuletxHeartxxX]

i cried watching this

[vipanda12]

I had tears :(:(

[kittycup7171]

So sad

[loppyjordan]

That boyfriend is a faggot and I want him dead. maybe it would be from the little girl

[totodog1999]

awww

[annaburt77]

If someone did that to me and tried to kill me if i were saved after hes like tied up or something id woulda kiked the cr*p outta the guy and HANG him

[22carmen2]

.... mother fu*ker stupid mum!!! WAHHH!!! ='(

[MsPokemonlovergirl]

Retarded mom.

[RuvyGrace]

its an sad but good story, and the music makes it more sad xd, but its fantastic i nearly cried but the vid was done when i was going to cry :c

[ILoveAnimals71727]

This made me cry so much :'(

and i almost never cry

[Draconian54]

Really and seriously , this is so so sad and touching !

[Niwahawa]

Wahhhhh ! :[

30+ people's tears were covering their eyes, they accidentally clicked dislike.

That stupid boyfriend. He's an ugly asshole... =___=;

Man, I swear I will kill you one day until though you're in jail.

AND GOSH YOU WOMAN [Mama] YOU NEED TO LEARN QUICKLY!

Poor little girl... :[ I probably wouldn't even want to live after all that's happened if I were her. She has a lotta strength... :' ]

[Eudoraify]

I`ve seen lost of those love stories about ROMANCE.. But this is the best by far.. :')

[jessiestarbabe]

OMG.....this made me cry so hard D:

[weimingsky1]

her mother's boyfriend was a total BASTARD how could him killed someone and wanted to shot the girl!!!

[Charisse651]

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA­AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA­AA='( ='(

[Koala321K]

i felt like crying who ever felt like crying or did cry thumbs up :P

[Megan199Productions]

I litterly cried

[123roundface]

I love this video. I watched it a lot of times and everytime I cried.

[krazy4koreankimchi]

:( Crying...

[Lilmisslillyiceburg]

WTH If i was the mom i'd take that gun and shoot the boyfriend and be like

TAKE DAT NIGGA! NOBODY BEATS UP MY KIDS OR KILL THEM!

[juliyanaStarz34]

So touching ...

[MsMaplestorylover]

T---T IM 11 im crying what a awesome video i cried when i saw this

[khiara04]

I closed by eyes while crying.. Me -----> T.T

[crazycomputerXD]

i  cant stop sobbing DX

[MrIcyShooter]

Fucking asshole larh the mom and the boyfriend think they what rich can do anything?Fuck off larh sure get beat up these kind of sohais

[Edius8888]

Ok I mean WTF? The mom is a stupid ass that allowed her boyfriend beat her kids up and the guy is a retard that likes to beat children up for fun. O.o

[babegirl844]

I made a big puddle in my room T n T

[Matttran007]

i cant believe im crying...........

[Matttran007]

so sad................. T.T

[angelina78781]

i cried.....

[catsrul333]

It's so touching *sniff sniff*

[Skyler6627]

sooo fucking sad

[iSandraa63]

this is sad, i nearly cried :( your really good!. :')

[PokeyTheGummyWolf]

I nearly cried. ; n;

[Ju5aKid]

Pew pew pew.

[sbfungirl]

I can't stop crying cuse I can almost relate to this

[xCartoonHerox]

:( i jsut cried a bucket of tears :(

[MrRRProductions]

WTF his dad was at work?

[DollydarlingLvNaruto]

This is not short at all but i still i like it alot :)

[PicklesTheTurtle]

awww love it <3

[IceyOcean231]

WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH THAT MOTHER?!

[BBoyable]

The mom is a total jerk, same with her boyfriend.

ROT IN HELL. >.<

[BBoyable]

@BBoyable I don't want to swear, that's why I said jerk >.<

[JackyTVK]

if i were that brother, i will nv listen to that new boyfriend. if he beats me up, i will take a bottle of beer and knock him and rofl loudly as i could even the police came.

[DAPHNENINJA]

one of the saddest ones beside a happy family?

[iceyauau]

So sad "sigh"T.T that was so sad I cried :'(

[rosalina4u]

I cried soo hard even though I tried not to cry but i did

[MegaChicken30]

omg i acually started to cry in this video!

[XxcrystalestradaxX]

ican't see the keyborad cuz im crying but somethign like this happend to me so i can relate to wat this girl feels like......

[katieducks]

@101maplestorydude THATS RIGHT! >;O

[WiskMe]

at 3:44 if i were the little girl i would kick the mom's woman boner and run off with my brother T_T

[K3cwalk]

@k3cwalk nvm just read description

[K3cwalk]

I usually never cry in mmvs but this one was the one that made me cry I don't want it to happen to anyone is this a true story to u?

[chillyhobo]

....-sniff- bravo..great vid...so emotional..one day my dad and dog that was like a brother to me died...i was super dpressed...-sniff-

[SchoolAnnoyence]

so god dam sad I'm crying tho i'm a boy... xD

[Cicisun456]

so sadddddddddd

Im teawring up.

[Sicowkaksin]

program?



[xoangelacutiexo]

the mom and her boyfriend are FUCKING SHIT ASSES

[FantageAwsome1004]

WAHHH! I cried a lot and i still am.

[juliennexyriel27]

I was hurted, :( I was crying right now !!

[ChocolateCookie325]

aww im was crying cuz of this =( this was so sad btw the mother looks like my stupid maplestory mom or how she used 2 i guess she realy does hate me n my brother lol

[misscaitlynmar]

WAAAAA IM CRYING!!!!!!

[Mattjade11]

Did this really happen

[nastyax0]

im crying too

[xJtsMariax]

omg i cried

[SuperAhmed1234567891]

MOTHA FCUKIN BOYFRIEND!! THAT BOYFRIEND IS SO SO STUPID HE KILLED THE DAD AND BROTHER EVEN THE MOTHER STUPID MOTHER SHE DIDNT SAVE HIS BROTHER FROM GETTING SHOT BY HER FCUKIN BOYFEND I WISH IF THAT BOYFRIEND DOESNT COME TO THEYRE HOUSE EVER AGAIN



[aujingting]

That was so touching!!!~~~ ;(

[Fyreflight1998]

30 People Got A Gun And Killed Somebodys Dad And Brother

[iCookiii3]

At the end tears were just pouring from my eyes. I cant believe that happened to her.

[ForTheLoveOfAwesomee]

@iCookiii3 Same. It's The first short story to make me cry.. T.T

[butterflyprincess852]

i cried SO much

[XxashipopsxX]

oh god ...i cried, i havent cried for 2 years! motherfucking (literally) boyfriend! IMA COME TO UR HOUSE AND KILL YOU

[Stephen6115]

U made me cry so much if only that stupid little boyfriend of hers didn't come thank you for this video

[halofan1905]

30 people have no hearts

[yuki1254693]

@halofan1905 make that 32 people

[Kidzrule1000]

5 stars that was a touching and great video. it really touched me.

[valerien525]

so sad i cried thumbs up it seems so real

[finaltenshou7]

i would have still loved her but i would be very cold to u

[aisyahtihani96]

its so sad to watch his i was crying really hard

[aisyahtihani96]

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[wolflover8875]

this story made my cry god it was so sad at the end!

[alemracgd]

I AM LOOKING FOR A GOOD SAMPLE OF SHORT STORY WHEN I CAME ACROSS TO THIS ONE OF KIND SHORT BUT A VERY EMOTIONAL STORY... TRUE... I WAS CARRIED AWAY BY SUCH REVEALING PLOT. I WILL USE THIS IN MY NARRATIVE LESSON. THANKS.