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  • THAT WAS SOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • :') it was awesome!

  • INCREDIBLE! :)

  • INCREDIBLE! :)

  • I love itt!

  • That really touched our heart!! Some grammer mistakes but defently worth six minutes!! Sooo nice, hey maybe u can do Selena and Nick or Taylor lautner :)

    Essm girls

  • Loved it and also loved what the future holds for us I even download it to my iPod touch which I am on right now

  • beautiful!

  • u cant see me right now but im smiling really big and i almost cried! that was so sweet! & you got way more than 100 comments!! :)

  • this is way too awesome

  • omfg!!!!!!!!!!!!! made me cry:(..but so guddd:)

  • I liked this one shot (:

    oh my gosh, you're a Hedley fan?! Ahhh that's so cool! I absolutley love Hedley (: They live in the same city as me

  • dha best ive eva seen

  • OMG i love this!!!!!!

  • This was freaking amazing!!! :)

  • wats the name of the song? it was amazing!!

  • The first one was Broken hearted girl by Beyonce

    and the 2nd one was :

    For the nights I can't Remember by Hedley

    :)

  • omf.

    That was fucking amaaaaaaazing!!!

    UR SO TALENTED!!!!!

  • Love it <3

  • Great!(:

  • woah! powerful loved it!

  • wow! Awesome

  • OMFJ(oh my fuckin jonas) its sooo sweet im crying sooo hard luv da storie wanna b friends

  • wow!!dis is a gr8 idea, reading,watching and listening, dat way its not boring..and i luv all ur Stories so much!!! Gr8 Work!!!

  • round of applause b/c this is awesome and the songs go w/the one shot...i luv the second one by hedley ure rite they r an awesome group i luv this song by them

    and ya it is worth waiting for

  • aww..

    the ending was soo sweet.. :)

  • thats so sweet that i bet it doesn't happen in real life :P haha nice as always (:

  • ahh. holy crap.

    so, i finally got around to watching/reading this, and uh, yeah. i absolutely love it. but that's no surprise xD

    your writing style is simply perfection.

    i lovelovelove all the detail you put into it.

    you truly, truly have a gift for writing.

    looking forward to all your other one-shots <3

  • aww so cute! you should definitely make more one shots!

  • You are AWSOME!!! I think you should write a book or something!!! I LOVE IT!!!

  • OMG! So good!

    First I though he was cheating! :o

  • Amazing!

    I love it!

    I want more xD

  • i have watched this over and over and over and to tell u IT'S MY FAVORITE JEMI ONE SHOT EVER!!!! Seriuosly it's so going in my ipod because every nite i always watch this b4 falling asleep it makes me cry and it makes me smile! ue so talented keep writing!

  • Awesome it was sooo cute i loved it great job well done

  • omg is this a true story!!

  • Really kl whats ur next one-shot couple gonna be? :)

  • that was amazing.. :) you should make a book!

  • haha. i love it!

  • this an amazing one!!!

  • woot-woot !

    hedley !

    hahaha.

    im canadian.

    hate it here but love them <3

    there coming to my province in april and i want tickets !

  • aww really cute

  • weird

  • same here...

  • you made me cry.... :)

    love it....

  • Really good! You should do some more of these

  • amZING!

  • amazing

    almost makes me cry:D

    love it

  • i wished they would go out in real life and he would say that about demi! make more!

  • lovweeeeeeeee

  • that was sooo sweet..i loved evry second!

  • amazing :) ♥

  • This was so sad, but still so cute :)

  • wow that was really good!!! awesome story. And great ending.

  • Awe that was really cute and sad but realy really good

  • poor Demi..

    but we all know that Joe loves Demi no matter what..

    still happy ending.. :)

    I wonder how's their stay in Dallas now..

  • awwh that was amazing. <3 poor demi at the beginning then joe comes and says he loves her. almost made me cry. what a great video to post for my birthday! (:

  • Wow your an amazing writer you put lots of detail in your writing i loved it.

  • woow that was really good

    amazing <3 :D

  • AMAZING!!!!!!:D I loved it!!!

  • wow....

    this is like the sweetest cute little love story that is short ever!!! it made me think of things its cute i loved it!

  • That was amazingly beautiful. :)

    You amaze me.

  • great!

  • Stephanie Meyer? aww that's very sweet thank you.. you have no idea how much that means to me.. even i know i'm not that a great writer myself :)

  • This was amazing! I loved the second song too:)

    Is it For the Nights I can't Remember by Hedley? I just want to confirm the title so yeah.

    Loved it!

  • Thank you :) and yes your title is right..

    you should also check out their song

    Perfect.. it's my favorite :D

  • Sure, I will:)

  • omg tht was so beautiful, it actaully made me cry

  • poor demi!

    awe i love jemi so god damn much!<3

    this was really good! :D

  • love it i cried!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Simply Amazingg. :)

  • I really loved it :D

    I'm not a jemi fan but its not about the couple its about the writing, and your writing was really good.

    I like the plot.

  • I cried.. I LOVE ITTTTTTT.

  • that was so stinking cute!

    I loved it!

  • its beautiful!!!whats the 2nd song?

  • ahh that was soo cute! love it! :]

  • that's terrific!

  • that was so sweet i loved it

  • OMG! That was so amazing!!!

  • that was so good.

    had me about to cry in the first couple of minutes. haha

  • Aww, this was so cute Alyssa!! I like your one shot Videos, they make me cry, but the make me cry in a good way!! -Shelby

  • You know you should really be a writer .

    I just can't beleve how great your writing is. You surely have a gift . So do all you an with it and shine while you can ..

  • awh that was adorable!

    poor demi.

    glad joe got some sense knocked into him :P

  • That was the CUTEST thing ever! Make more One Shots Please! I Loved it!

  • aww your writing seriously blows me away i have no idea how you do that.

    i love the way your put all the details especially how they feels you capture the story so greatly, very impressive :)

  • amazing

    made me cry too

    really awesome

  • I LOVE IT!!!!! ibwould have cried but I'm full of energy so it's happy happy me

  • WOW!

    I have tears on my eyes... and my heart is... wow I don't know!! but you touched me!

    I loved it!

  • It made me cry! ;~;

    Oh my gosh! Amazing! <3

  • That was beautifuly written <3 Nice jobb ;D

  • &^#$ i loved this sooo freeakkin much.

    your writing skills are amazing

  • love it

  • that was so good! cant wait till you post

  • omg this is amazing

    im in tears right know :)

    i loved it so much i

    totally felt for Demi!!

  • OMG!!!!!! This was totally amazing!!!!!

    haha it was beautiful!!!! haha

    loved it really!!!

  • Amazing(:

  • made me cry.....

  • Aww love it

  • aww how beautiful <3

  • unbelievable! it made me cry

  • aww so sweet.

  • your writing is always amazing!

    this was a great oneshot! i loved it!

  • AWEEE.

    x3 soo amaziing!

  • i love your one shots.

    ur such a great writer

  • its so beautiful o.o

    i love it, youre an amazing writter ! :)

  • omg loved it!!! hope ur makin this into a series!!!

  • Aww,in the beggining it was making me sad,like,i was about to cry,sad.lol..sad right?Ha..but it was so cute(:It was sappy.

  • it made me cry :P

  • AhMaZiNg! I loved it!

  • i luv it

  • that was awesome! it made me cry :P gosh i'm a sap but it was really good :) thanks for posting this!

  • that was incredible! I loved it.

  • THAT WAS AMAZINGG I LOVED IT!!

  • I ♥ it ☼

  • That was soo cute!

  • that was amazing!

  • love sucks but u make it seem so beautiful! GREAT job ur a fantastic writer!

  • loved it!

  • beyond amazing...

    you seriously ROCK!

    Peace out ♥!

  • beautiful :)

  • That was soo sweet! and amazing!

  • amazing.... it made me cry

  • Happy ending :D

    Awesome!!!!!!!

  • thats so cute :)

  • This was just simply amazing.

    It's one of the cutest things I have ever read/watch.

    Congratulations on the subscribers, you deserved them hun. :)

    I just wanted to let you know that you are a HUGE inspiration on me so I hope you continue writing these wonderful stories of yours. :)

  • wouah , its amazing!

  • Im crying here haha

    This was seriously one of the best Jemi stories I've watched/read.

  • awee yay great jobb!!

  • wow!!! amazing!! It almost made me cry!! :)

  • amazing!

  • that was amazing!

    It was sad but in the end everything turned out right a happy ending :)

  • amazing!

  • That beautiful :) I'm speechless...

  • AMAZING i loved it :D

  • Aw, that was so sweet!

    Amazing, Lyss. Just amazing.

    You always blow me away with your writing skills.

    You should write oneshots more often ;)

    And congrats on the subscribers, you deserve every single one of them =)

  • absolutely loved it!!

  • it will take me forever to comment on how much i love this so i keep it simple..

    Simply Breathtaking :)

  • you should make in to a series :D

  • just like all of us ;)

  • aww very sweet, i love Demi's character i love how she waits for him to come home,

    she don't argue with him even he forgotten about her. i guess good things come to those who wait. Thank god Joe realized it at the end

  • :O its so beautiful!its awesome! :')

  • aww...I felt so bad..for Demi..it's awesome..that Joe could saved all of their love--before..it dissappear!..ur writing keeps getting better & better...=)

    it's growing up..!haha!

  • that was amazing, but sad at the same time

  • Just too awesome!! I love it! ♥

  • That was amazing! Your truly an amazing writer! That was one of the best one shots I've read! =)

    //Peace.Love&&Jemi'

    - Addie

  • OMG ... i got goose gumps :D AMAZING ...How can you write those amazing stories ????I´m jealous ...you´re so talented you deserve all subscribers an i hope you´ll get more of them in the future !!!! Can´t wait to read more :D :..Kathi<3

  • love♥

    i like you little one shots.

    there so lovely♥

    ps-i like the things you write at the

    end too(:

  • I'm glad Joe realized what he was doing wrong before it was too late

  • your one shots and stories is too amazing can you write a book already?

    i'll be the first to buy it..

  • I never thought it was worth it, you know waiting for your love, and then I felt your kiss, I could wait forever for this

    that ws an amazing quote you put out there. i'm glad at the end it was a happy ending :D

  • fantisic love more more more of the one shots please

  • Very well written it was sad at first i'm really glad i subscribed to you, your writing amazed me everytime you never fail i love Demi's Character :)

  • aww Love is Blind but at the end it is worth it, you proved it in this story i love how Demi believed that he's going to change and he did wow i'm crying well not literally crying but it's beautiful!

  • Follow me @Amna1994 xD

  • OH my freaking Amazing! wow i thought it's going to be a sad ending but it's not

    wow i'm speechless. i'm glad Joe realized that he's being a jerk lol

  • OMG!wow Love it<3

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