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  • You left me with nothing to read nooooooo these are the best

  • i think im addicted to ur stories u r definetly my fav. I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!

    :)

  • ;D Im Certified OBSESSED With Your Stories !

    && Be Patient Talent Takes Time =)

  • Awwwwwwww poor Sierra and Dustin scared me for a sec cuz i thought i was going to kill her, but he didnt :) and Awwwwwwwww Jackie knows she likes Carnell she's just denying it and OMG Carnell just told her he likes her!!!! lol :)

    LOVE IT :) <3

  • Please finish take it to the floor its been like a year!!!!!!!!!

  • woahh love it!!!!!!! 5*****

  • Dang Dustin!

    Poor Sierra.

    Was there a confession from Carnell?

  • Nexxxt Chapter

  • who sings the first song ? trust issues!

  • OMFGG YO HURRY WITH TEH NXT CHAPTERR

  • Omg i did NOT want this chapte to end ! geeeeeez...ohhhh this was soooo good i want more lol wow and you chose some good music to go with the mood of the scenes :) FREAKEN AWESOME !!!!

  • omg loved it! 50000000*

  • OMG I Love It <3

  • Love It

  • eatin ma popcorn , finna read it again. sierra need to calm ha self down n realize that kelly is there for ha, she need to stop cuttin ha self n get a tetanus shot since she bin cuttin ha self wit iron/steel. welll...... a so life go mi dear

  • Chelsi will get it together now.

  • Dustin feels lost.

    Chanel is confused.

    Kelly's tryin to help.

    Sierra's too scared.

    Carnell's just confused.

    Jackie loves Carnell.

    Jessica's a whore.

    RIP Cameron.

    Loved It.

    i need chapter 8 :)

  • dustin done lost his damn mind.

    and kelly and carnell really need to get it together.

    sierra really needs to let kelly help.

    and jackie and carnell just need to gon head and get together lol.

  • Dustin Is One Crazy MxthaFxcha : He Was About Tah Kill That Girl .!

    Dang : Chelsi Really Loved Dustin .

    Sierra - Kelly Is Just Tryna Help : Let Him .!

    I Knew Carnell Liked Jackie And Vice Versa .! ! :)

    HaHa : LOVED IT .! :)) <333

  • Dustin U Crazy U All Most Kill Her!

    Wow Chelis Really Loved Dus

    Jackie Wow Ur Ma Just Did That

    Carnell Al Up On Jckie

    Kelly Listen To Carnell

    Jackie U No U Dont Want Him To Leave U Alone

    Sierra His Just Tryinq To Help

    Wow Carnell

    Lovwe It

  • iLovedd it :) Great Chapter!

  • Dang Sierra really needs to get some help :( & man Im so annoying in this story lmfao Carnell & Jackie really need 2 get together.& Chelsi does need a good guy in her life now.Loved it!

  • Finally they amit it i knew it i knew they liked each other!!! lolz Dustin yuh.... yuh have some anger problems my friend but at least he let go before he killed her Sierra needs to let Kel help her like seriously n Jessica i think i wud have went off on her bcuz she seems stuck up n i cnt go i dnt see how Jackie just sat there we wud have been fightin loved it 10*s

  • I can't believe Dustin choked Chelsi. That shit was crazy- and he got her pregnant, and she had an abortion?! SMH. And I realllllyyyy wish Sierra would stop. And Carnell and Jackie like eachother, which will definately piss Jessica off. If Jackie and Jessica fight, I want Jessica to get her ass beat, cause she's stuck up and I dont like her. lmao. ANYWHO! That was a great chapter (:

  • Loved It Next Chpt Plzz

  • Dxmnnnnnn !

    iLoved it(:

  • Ooh Shidd! Sierra need some serious help real talk! Chelsi & Dustin....SMH :/ Carnell & Jackie shud start qoinq out!

  • Oooh Lemme Get My Popcorn & Read It Over !!

    Lovedd It !! =)

  • LOVED IT TONES! 5*****

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