"Oh Clarion call" like it is is an expression of grief. It's melodic inversion would be an expression of accusation. So you would have a process from accusing to grieving, if you used the inversion.
I think it would sound better (you might try, if you like) if the first "Oh, Clarion Call" would go down from "Oh" to "Cla", then stay there for "rion" (or move slightly up again) and then go up beyond the level of "Oh" to "Call" - a melodic inversions of the theme, that is.
That's the best I can contribute, hope you like it, I did like your work overall.
Beautiful! Great Work! Art will lead the way and the hearts will follow! Your singing is the perfect medium for the subject matter and the images are potent. Will be looking forward to hearing more!
Powerful! Fantastic voice, and haunting orchestration!
ronmarkhooker 3 years ago
As an addition to the previous post.
"Oh Clarion call" like it is is an expression of grief. It's melodic inversion would be an expression of accusation. So you would have a process from accusing to grieving, if you used the inversion.
I like fanciness, I guess.
EinFremderAusElea 4 years ago
Nice work, lovelymess.
I think it would sound better (you might try, if you like) if the first "Oh, Clarion Call" would go down from "Oh" to "Cla", then stay there for "rion" (or move slightly up again) and then go up beyond the level of "Oh" to "Call" - a melodic inversions of the theme, that is.
That's the best I can contribute, hope you like it, I did like your work overall.
EinFremderAusElea 4 years ago
I'm impressed, "musical drama" indeed.
I'll listen again later and see if I can find a "Wagnerian" connection
kazakhman52 4 years ago
Thanks for listening.
I owe a great deal to Wagner. He was a huge influence on me as a younger composer.
At the same time however as a Mexican-American there is something always warm and Latin about my melodic choices.
In this cycle I was striving for the economy of Vivaldi with a Wagnerian emotinal impact.
Cheers and thanks again!
LM
lovelymess 4 years ago
You have an AMAZING voice!!!! I had no idea that I have such an extraordinarily talented co-worker!!!!
Thank you for sharing!!!
FELICIA
feliciarb2 4 years ago
Beautiful! Great Work! Art will lead the way and the hearts will follow! Your singing is the perfect medium for the subject matter and the images are potent. Will be looking forward to hearing more!
Peace.
jointheopposition 4 years ago
Thank you so much.
We are humanists. Let that which is animal in us: violence, anger, misunderstanding and strife, be converted to art, so that it can become beautiful.
No more war anywhere!
lovelymess 4 years ago
Very nice video and especially beautifull music.
AndreasvanHaren 4 years ago
Thank you so much.
The next section is called
"Lady Liberty Goes to War" and is about the jingoism that followed the tragedy of 9-11
We should have it filmed by the middle of next month.
lovelymess 4 years ago
Beautiful video, cant wait to see the rest!
36burrows 4 years ago