Story monologues are always a bad choice because you're talking about a moment and not in that moment. You're entrance was very weak and didn't even give us a chance to get to know you because you rushed it so much.
That was really good! Its really a beautiful monologue! Just a tip When You said "And BAM! they cant even remember you!" I feel like that needs more feeling more anger and sadness. But really wonderful performance :)
Story monologues are always a bad choice because you're talking about a moment and not in that moment. You're entrance was very weak and didn't even give us a chance to get to know you because you rushed it so much.
ladybuglover95 1 month ago
That was really good! Its really a beautiful monologue! Just a tip When You said "And BAM! they cant even remember you!" I feel like that needs more feeling more anger and sadness. But really wonderful performance :)
RasberryLove10881 6 months ago