If there's one piece of advice I can give you for the future, it's to have cleaner fight choreography. The only gripe I've ever had with your fics is that it's so obvious when you make edits. It's easy to tell when you just repeat clips. Alot of choreography just doesn't flow. Edit so that everything looks natural. Edit so that only tenkaichi players can tell you've made edits.
I don't know why I never told you this earlier, but keep that in mind. I guarantee you much more success with that
If there's one piece of advice I can give you for the future, it's to have cleaner fight choreography. The only gripe I've ever had with your fics is that it's so obvious when you make edits. It's easy to tell when you just repeat clips. Alot of choreography just doesn't flow. Edit so that everything looks natural. Edit so that only tenkaichi players can tell you've made edits.
I don't know why I never told you this earlier, but keep that in mind. I guarantee you much more success with that.
I have to agree with Sprawlers. Sorry Lil you made so many great fanfics but just gave up and started a new ones. You are a great fanfic creator Lil. I salute to you.
If there's one piece of advice I can give you for the future, it's to have cleaner fight choreography. The only gripe I've ever had with your fics is that it's so obvious when you make edits. It's easy to tell when you just repeat clips. Alot of choreography just doesn't flow. Edit so that everything looks natural. Edit so that only tenkaichi players can tell you've made edits.
I don't know why I never told you this earlier, but keep that in mind. I guarantee you much more success with that
2008Flame 8 months ago
wats the name of the song at the very begining?
gwaga56 3 years ago 3
If there's one piece of advice I can give you for the future, it's to have cleaner fight choreography. The only gripe I've ever had with your fics is that it's so obvious when you make edits. It's easy to tell when you just repeat clips. Alot of choreography just doesn't flow. Edit so that everything looks natural. Edit so that only tenkaichi players can tell you've made edits.
I don't know why I never told you this earlier, but keep that in mind. I guarantee you much more success with that.
Spralwers 3 years ago
In the end though, I had fun watching your stuff :)
Spralwers 3 years ago
I have to agree with Sprawlers. Sorry Lil you made so many great fanfics but just gave up and started a new ones. You are a great fanfic creator Lil. I salute to you.
AquaProduction 3 years ago