A Matter of Engagement

[dardrex777]

Watch that cut at :28... a bit jarring.

The acting is a bit forced from both girls.

It also didn't make sense why the girl would sensibly hear her out when she barges into her home and such.

I didn't quite understand the music choices.

Now for the good things. The twist is decent, your cinematography and editing for the most part has improved a lot, and your pace was good.

Keep it up man.

[BrisOwnWorld]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA MATT