Watch that cut at :28... a bit jarring.
The acting is a bit forced from both girls.
It also didn't make sense why the girl would sensibly hear her out when she barges into her home and such.
I didn't quite understand the music choices.
Now for the good things. The twist is decent, your cinematography and editing for the most part has improved a lot, and your pace was good.
Keep it up man.
dardrex777 4 months ago
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA MATT
BrisOwnWorld 4 months ago
Watch that cut at :28... a bit jarring.
The acting is a bit forced from both girls.
It also didn't make sense why the girl would sensibly hear her out when she barges into her home and such.
I didn't quite understand the music choices.
Now for the good things. The twist is decent, your cinematography and editing for the most part has improved a lot, and your pace was good.
Keep it up man.
dardrex777 4 months ago
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA MATT
BrisOwnWorld 4 months ago