Save the World - Paper Tree

[esean3645]

As fellow musician im saying that the music is quite good, the only thing i might add is that you should get some vocal lessons.

[danielria]

Not bad! Like the sound! Nothing like people being critiques when they don't even play an instrument!  lol

[Shakedoctorsblues]

Opening sound is like old Lonnie Mack, you should check him out if you haven't. Lonnie was a hero of SRV...for good reason.

[killercrabman]

can't believe the nice comments for such a bland tune no offence.. might work for hollyoaks sound track

[Memorex996]

Voice sounds off. other than that its really good. We need more music like this these days. Good stuff :)

[420GuitarShredder]

How is this not on the radio?! ...man if you were alive in the late 60's and did this tune.. it would be heard all over the radio.. i know it

[420GuitarShredder]

Any one know the chord progression? or some tabs would be dope

[killercrabman]

@420GuitarShredder its like two chords!! ur name is guitar shredder and u canT work out something this simple? if ur 5yrs old I'm sorry but if not PRACTICE U DOUCHE!!

[420GuitarShredder]

@killercrabman Its people like you that make the world a horrible place...grow up.

[SgtNachos]

Very good and If you continue to make good music despite money snd fame then people WILL support you

[annd10001]

Thanks for the invite to listen. What a great surprise it was to hear something this good.

[libertine39391]

very grungey



[libertine39391]

pretty good

[TheSaadiix]

Freaky Good :P

[number9train]

i agree with hurdy72

[hurdy72]

i like it guys!!!!

[Callahooman]

JUST STELLAR period. Best new song in the last 20 years bar none.

[Durotomee]

This is the first video I have been requested to listen to that is actually decent. I agree with the other post regarding the vocals. There aren't bad at all, but there is raw and then there is this. Some slight effects and general mastering and they would be spot on. Great track.

[STRATCAT101]

I like it,how many people are in the band?I would add another guitarist,i always liked the idea of having 2 guitarists it gives the band more power and having rhythm and lead guitarists gives them more freedom than just one.

[nodaysback]

rock-on bro.

[Callahooman]

Your response to one comment you had on your JIMI cover was AWESOME when the guy said try something original not a cover of a song that was done 40 years ago and you said politely to check out your original work, just perfect ( in my humble opinion ) my friend !!! These original works of yours and your mates are some of the best I have ever heard period. If you ever need to talk or discuss ANYTHING ever just so you know you can count on me. I have no alterior motives just to qualify. PEACE

[Vincy177]

bellissima condivido subito su facebook =D ^^

[420GuitarShredder]

im diggin it

[caveman735]

Not Bad!

[busheepoo]

It's ok, but I like Rap and music from the '70s and '80s, along with a few select artists from the present day.

[JimmyMarshall27]

Not bad. Vocals need some work, but guitar work is cool.

[4everColReb]

Great instrumental work. The vocal track's not exactly my cup of tea, but....vocals are most usually liked by your target audience. Even mainstream vocalists miss the mark with acceptance issues. So, once again, look for that critique from within your core target group. Thanks for the invite, though. Best of luck while following your dreams.

[fatboymachinegun]

good music :)

[versyficator]

yea its cool. \\

[marsouiccgg]

I like the voice, it's "garage" a bit and i like it. :)

[robin56]

I think you need to EQ your voice track a bit. Maybe try smiling when you sing. I know, I know it sounds wierd but try to warm up your vocal track. Peace.

[sawboss17]

Very cool tune!

[crustlessraptor49]

its pretty good. after listening to mudhoney these vocals sound pretty good.

[1512735]

I"m a blues,R&B guitarist,vocalist myself and I must be too old,I don't get this,music to me is about a vocalist first,everybody could sing back in the day.

[kashnijha]

Music is nice but i don`t like the singer.

[SweetWilly666]

honestly , i dont like it .

[Nnekakurt]

Man that's amazing :O Your band is amazing ! Something it's a little bit like The Brian Jonestown Massacre for your voice and it's greaty ! Love your kind of feeling!

[Nnekakurt]

Men that's amazing :O Your band is amazing ! Something it's a little bit like The Brian Jonestown Massacre for your voice and it's greaty ! Love your kind of feeling!

[TnEoNnGn]

New band ?

[madambuttahfly]

hey, I can digg it

[taminsari77]

Not bad!

[guitarjoe32]

this is nasty the good kind

[7Saburo]

Fuck it, I'm using this on my next road trip

[7Saburo]

I like it! pretty good music ;)

[Qrayon]

Mighty fine, but no way am I going to anyone's facebook page. Facebook is way too creepy. MySpace, ok, but Facebook, forget it.

[STRATCAT101]

@Qrayon i agree,i dont like facebook either.

[TheSchlager1]

Respect! Shared with some friends!!!

[MilesTheMusicDude]

i like it but the drums are a bit weak.but it kinda sounds like hendrix.its really goodg

[BillyDeeee]

Drums are weak man. Bang those things out.

[rahxonator]

nice! Subscribed

[vissenekku]

Not bad at all. Interesting tags thou..

[UPLINKADICT]

Subscribed.

[jenklefritz]

I like the name that's for sure, cool groove so far, I wonder if you would consider covering some of my lyrics I think it would be a good fit. I like your musical style for sure. I liked and tweeted and I'm adding to my playlist.

[sk8freak3000]

like on facebook :D dude this shit sounds so old school props for great guitar playing

[VikingPhobos]

It sounds very Old school, I like everything about it to be honest. Well done guys.

[tacitus2244]

not really my cup of tea but it doesn't sound bad

[yugang08]

Pretty good. U could improve on your vocals in singing and the clarity of the words u say in your lyrics but thats my only criticism. Pretty good overrall tho. Keep perfecting your craft and keep on making music.

[jimiguitar100]

this is good

[CyprusCY61]

kinda reminds me of nirvana... keep rockin its good stuff

[ranchuboy7]

@CyprusCY61 and Nivarna just copied Jimi Hendrix this is Jimi with different vocals

[oldschool70s]

Honest opinion here. I think you have potential to put out some great tunes. have your drummer put in some double beats and break it a little. the guitar is great, more of that maybe some solo. Clear up your vocals and do it till you feel it's right. post it if you do and I would be honored to hear you man. peace and don't let go!!!

[xxxkitten2554xxx]

cool beans.

nice job... it's not really my type of music though...

[tomoulevou]

I really liked it! I don't know why, but ur music remembers a lot oasis but with more guitar focus, and thats good!

[Metalmorphoziz]

guitar is good, singer try talking more clearly nobody knows what your saying.

[MegaBob77777]

Not bad. Guitar riffs are cool. But something with the lyrics need tweaking. They dont stand out??? Overall its good IMO. But it has too much of a C&W sound, and the lyrics need some work. Thats my honest opinion.

[motokev]

yeah, I like it. seems like the music is a little too loud compared to the vocals. 

[k9a2g6]

Sounds very good, good beat and the I really dug those lyric's, the only part I thought could be better was the very end of the song, anyway Keep on Truckin'

[kaptainbastard]

nothing new.wouldnt buy it.but good luck.



[tacomann07281995]

Im not into indie but its good

[facubarca]

yeah



[petercriscuola]

i dont like it.

[odiumimbues]

nice roots.

[MetalNineteen1984]

sounds good keep it up

[tsccsacs]

it's ok!

[sla8tful]

nice man...i got your email and this song is preety good...its not perfect but keep going.its great!

;)

[fatboymachinegun]

great music :)

[xhyio]

Not bad. Sounds a little bit like Nirvana mixed with some Dylan or Hendrix. Keep working on defining your sound and you guys could really go somewhere. Keep at it bros! You guys rock!

[jimihendrix19999]

good song!!!!!!

[irishben15]

good song

[albatross7677]

Not Bad!!!

[imaginerie1]

je n 'aime pas ce genre de musique .merci

[gamerzVEVO]

good

[ezra4no1]

Not bad... Though the the guitar is a bit loud and competes over the vocals, bring it down a bit. Sounds good.. good luck.

[workinghands789]

Hmmm needs salt. How bout a pre chorus elaborate on the verse, one less chorus and I think it would taste pretty good.

[theripper9]

louder bass and drums its in tune !!!!!!! more than i can say about most people on here keep it up dude !

[theripper9]

it sounds ok ive heard worse

[straybeat]

Pretty cool! 3 thumbs up!

[EricTheGreat87]

lol wut?!?!

[robin56]

really really good. clean up the production a bit!

[robin56]

Thanks for your note. I like this!

[twohandtap]

Itsa great man, good job!



[muzicfrst]

You remind of Bob Dylan. Great lyrics & message. We R the universe having a HUMAN experience...........thats FACT not fiction. You have a very catchy tune. Love has created everything not a unknown God! Thanks for asking for my opinion:).

[threeby8887]

This is a pretty good song with good instrumentation. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work folks.

[stephany101586able]

not some thing i would ever listen to again but that's just me.

[Imtomkat4u]

The Guiltar has got that grove think Im goona get laid to night... in his bro the guy singing has the Ashbury from The Cult....go on and pay tour dues yall sound like you for are worth it....

[marbleheadband]

sounds good.....like to hear the drums more out front & stronger bass (production) but sounds like it should be on the radio

[theripper9]

@marbleheadband  you nailed it !!!!

[superduey53]

sounds good to me

[stomachlining]

good hook.... great git tone

[caveman735]

I like it

[slpplexi1969]

I like how it sounds like a '60s song but higher quality recording. The guitar sounds like it was influenced by Hendrix and Cream, and the singing is just like a mid '60s garage band. Cool bluesy rock song.

[megadethifyify]

Nice

[indigorenk]

This is a very good band in my opinion

dont change a thing

[myjanuary151987]

Nice one.

[allstargum99]

Well, I have nothing to say about the instrumental. But maybe the singer's shouting a little too much ? Just my opinion.

Keep on playing my friend, this is a promising beginning !

[rufuskran]

Good rock and keep it going.... Try playing with some Lynyrd Skynard, Blackfoot, Almond Bros, Outlaws, etc. I'm a 58 year old and good rock never dies. Reinvent, recreate, restructure..... You have a great knowlege base to work with. Thank you!

[nomadtraveller100]

you rock!

[esraretin]

ur a pro

[musicfreak1967]

"Save the world" - three words that should make our world today, politicians too energetically own time instead of us always to put off a lot of promises and lip service. We do not need weapons of war, which only bring death and destruction. Rocks with a super strong psychedelic impact how you got to hear him from the mid-'60s by bands like The Who. Love this sound very much and hope to hear from you to be even more. All the best for 2012 - keep on rockin' from Germany.

[gerthie]

cool sound you don t have to save the world just keep rocking

[hippiedp]

VERY GOOD. YOU ROCK.

[mdelair420]

Great track and love to write poetry my self...I dont play well but i can write good poetry..Peaceout..

[mavericknoone]

Nice riff, it's really groovin. But i've got a little constructive criticism :P

The rhythm guitar on the track is a bit too loud and the bass and drums are kinda "beneath" it. Idk if this was intentional or unintentional due to the recording gear but nice song anyway :)

[blueridger28]

Its cool i checked it out . Now check out my up-right bass demo pointers are appreciated. im piss drunk Ol'Crow

[TaterThao]

nice riffQ

[jonharkulsykkel]

really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!sfgsfsfd

[jaxbeachguitars]

love the groove that this song has...

[kermicheo]

the overall style sounds more like zeppelin. but great groove dude! and how bout that, My two favorite artists are hendrix and nirvana too. go figure. too bad you probably already have a band right?

[Vulnavia69]

Cool song!

[TheUntouchableEric]

Are you inspired by Hendrix or Zeppelin? It's a really good song!

[M1t20]

sounds great. Can't get enough of that guitar

[M1t20]

sounds great. Can't get enough of that guitar

[daydreams4rock]

so excellent - much fineness in one song - am so happy to hear awesome vocals n music

[CrushinRuSSian27]

it sounds extremely seventies with a modern touch of groove style

[1Guug]

cool song, but it is always the same!

The Voice is great! never heard a voice like that, but the melody is not that good.

[MusicProness901]

Great Job!

[boganlessons]

badass

[badabumbadabing1]

1st good tune that anyone has actually sent me. Keep up the good work.

[Xapple09]

Very good vibe ,like the guitar lick ,good skills kid

[diego59x]

it's good!!!!!

it has that 70's feeling to it and that's pretty much all i listen to(my generation has shitty music so i listen to old music)

how did you record this????

[evanjonsey]

This is really good! I was expecting it to be one of those spam letters people send you to try and watch their stupid videos, but this was good. You might want to work on your vocals though.

[TheJacksonMaster]

Very good !!!! Keep making music!

[dooalittledippsy]

Right on!

[cumulo25]

another good one

nice job

[WestsideArtMilitary]

really cool

[allloodie]

i like this track it's ok, good guitar sound.

[itnow]

this is more like UR song

I would add some bells and organ

[VikingPhobos]

I don't understand what people mean about changing the lyrics, they sound great just keep doing what you're doing. Experience will kick in. Really good sound. It reminds me a lot of Nirvana in some parts.

[Ridiciliculous]

It's like the Tragically Hip meets the Black Keys.

[STRAIGHTAHEAD1970]

Sounds really great ! Soo 70´s :))) But still something freash !

[627257stingray]

happenin groove,ditch the vocalist

[Trainwreck1415]

Sounds good man. Change the lyrics a little bit and its a winner :)

[Rainbowsixoperator1]

An effect on the vocal track would make it better. Other than that I'm digging the sound!

[andydude30]

Awesome man. Love it.

[TheJediRabbit]

That's some good stuff. The lyrics are not to my taste, but the vocals weren't bandl. I can hear a bit of Nirvana influence in there, as well as some 60's-70's classic rock. You've really got something going, and this song is really cool. Keep rocking!

[TheFiyahfly]

I like it bro. I do hear the Nirvana flavor in the vocals. Don't listen to the people saying you need to get another singer, obviously these people have never heard Nirvana, The Black Keys, The White Stripes, The Ramones etc...basically shit with feeling and raw energy. Tasty guitar work too. Keep it up and don't change a goddamn thing.

[Ulysses447]

Love the music man! Love the solo as well. Not too crazy about the vocals though. Keep coming up with these awesome ideas.

[TripleHTheBest78]

i really liked it, nice 

[FIREGET]

good music !! but the lyrics arn't htat good

[Norocmorth]

its good but if you had some keyboard and better vocals it would be great!!

[ReeseMac]

I've listened to your other tracks as well and honestly...I think the band kicks ass. The vocals could be better but , overall, I think that you really got somethin' there. Love the instrumentals.

[Obyth2112]

Black keys, cage the elephant... Two things I thought of while listening, the guitars good and the vocals are scratchy. I like it keep it up!

[ReeseMac]

@Obyth2112 ...check out their song "Open Door". Its just instrumentals.

[KingPecan]

Drop the Nirvana element, and see how it is. Personally, I think it would be better.

[EVERYTHINGELECTRON1C]

nice! i enjoyed the sound, it had a nice grove to it!

[DRR4BBIT]

my ears were like "cool"

[THEFLYINGREDNECK]

better than 99% of the dog shit thats being produced today

[TVBarlinek]

Vintage Power. I like it.

[PrestonDowMusic]

i like it. the guitar reminds me of hendrix. the vibe is somewhere between jimi/black keys. i think the vocalist is fine, but you might wanna treat the vocals or something. clean it doesn't really work. maybe put some light distortion or something. I liked it though

[Spumini]

very impressive, i like the riff and the old spirit of ROCK

[NADYAKOST]

Cool!

[KillBaddBugz]

I got this vid sent from you. I like the music but not vocals; no offense. Best wishes.

[PeterBullOlsson]

Good work....PBO

[c7i6abc]

Ok, I was impressed with the music, then the singing began, it doesn't seem to compliment the music at all. You asked for my opinion, this is it. Great music, but find a singer.

[NICOLENPOP]

good one

[MultiShades]

Really like it but feel a different voice would make it better on this song anyways.