Bad Fanfiction Reading 5 - Sonic The Hedgehog Darkneess aprouchs

[devindude1]

BLAZE TEH CAT!11111!!!!!

[heeropat]

lol the music in the back ground

[star3catcherSEQUEL]

You actually do a really good Sonic impression.

[ShootingStarz4ever]

Sadly fail to the extreme. I'm not sure if I'm happy the writer stopped writing, or worried because I have no idea if they improved themselves. O_o;

I mean:

-Blaze the cat... was not even in the story....? Why the heading? XDDD

-Why would Sonic freeze up, and why would the arm kill him?

-Darkness is a Stu. :(

-Author notes should not be IN the story.

-grammar/spelling massacre.

-Eggman isn't that dumb.

-Chaos is at PEACE.

-"Don't worry" must be most fail consolation for Sonic...

[ShootingStarz4ever]

-Where did Tails even come from? Why wasn't he helping before?

-Why would one extra emerald produce mega forms? Why would they need mega forms when Chaos can be defeated with super form?

-Chaos doesn't need to be killed just sealed in the master emerald.

-If he's dead, why would Knuckles need to take care of Chaos if he's dead? Why would Chaos even get sucked into the emerald? Where did the Master Emerald and Knuckles come from and why weren't they HELPING BEFORE?

[ShootingStarz4ever]

I'll just stop there. *Shot* Anyway, great fanfic reading TheGoldCrow! It was epic, despite the story itself.

[vampirehunterXD]

FAIL!

[HeadInjuryGamesPro]

Where do you find this awfully bad shit dunked in piss and blended with oil and cyanide, then thrown in the microwave, then additionally blended with that cat from the time that Dr. Kleiner's teleporter experiment failed?

Anyways, you should take a look at the Half-Life 2 fanfics as well, horrid storms of shit there.

[SirSomeguy]

That does it! This has to be a parody of fan fictions! There is no possible way that someone could write a story this atrocious and think it was good!

[SwerveStarEx]

I kind of want to try a fanfic reading... I would probably be really loud and stuff if I did.

[icegem738]

BLAZE TEH CAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think I have a dent in my forehead from the amount of facepalm. Also SUDDENLY BABYS.

[EpicToaster200]

@icegem738

HOW IS BABBY FORMED

[CheeseYoshi]

OH GOD I NEVER THOUGHT A SONIC FANFICTION COULD BE THIS BAD.

[TakoshidaEpikShinxz]

Quadruple facepalm. Oh dear, here comes my lunch. That is how fail this fanfic is.

[Gindelbi]

This is fucking horrible. Hahahaha

[SkieBluFox]

OH GOD YES A MARY SUE RECOLOR FANFICTION. I just might have to read this now. :V

[spinkick21]

Wow, this is too hilariously awful.

[8BitEpicProductions]

Watch the video OMG MOST ORIGINAL FAN FIC IDEA EVER.

Then watch this.

You will feel pity.

[ZEROEVILDARKCOOL]

...I THINK YOURE A BIT TOO META TO BE SINKING BAD FANFICTION. USUALLY ITS FROM OUTSIDERS WHO KNOW NOTHING ABOUT THE SERIES BUT APPRECIATE THE STORY FOR WHAT IT IS. I ALSO DONT LIKE THE BACKGROUND MUSIC AND NOT THE VOICES TOO MUCH. OR MAYBE ITS JUST BECAUSE WHAT I ENCOUNTERED FIRST I DONT KNOW. YOUR REACTION IS PRETTY LACKLUSTER TOO.

[IncandescentInsanity]

I can understand why Sonic was sad. I mean, because Tails.

[JonnotheHedgehog]

So basically Darkness is a green Shadow?

[Flashandvidkid]

My forehead hurt from all that facepalm

[EpicAgentBlaire]

BLAZE THE CAT!

Lol, that fanfic was hilarious.

[haircub]

Mary sue fic, this is one.

[Meganeo5]

I just cracked up at BLAZE THE CAT!!!!

I mean wth and that random romance in the middle and what not. Gosh, this fanfiction wins for the LULZ.

[xxScenePalkiaxx]

BLAZE THE CAT!!1!!!!1 XDDD

lol and I thought my immortal didnt had plot.

andwtf he just met amy and had two kids in .05 seconds?!?! wtf XD

[EliteCake]

ORIGINAL CHARACTER DO NOT STEAL

[darkjak144]

that was bullshit

[EdtheBlueNinjaYoshi4]

The writer should kill himself. I'm not kidding.

[blacktigerpaw1]

@EdtheBlueNinjaYoshi4 I know even worse authors.

[blacktigerpaw1]

Sonic was sad because Tails.

WRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY~~~

[Pizzafication123]

oh and don't you just LOVE how ppl kill tails because they wanna be sonics best friend and sonic just automaticlty forgets about him?

[baahhhFATALITY11]

BBBAAGGGHGGHH man fanfiction is SOOOO retarded, I love how BLAZE THE CAT comes out of knowhere....btw, whats the name of this song...??

[milo201]

lolwut?

[MRIStudios]

Who wouldn't want revenge after someone destroyed their adopted village?!

[GaseousNobility]

Wow, Darkness was such a terrible Gary Stu in such a horrible stupid fic, I'd have to say this fic fails so much that it wins. And I thought my fanfictions were terrible.

Also, BLAAAAZE THE CAAAAAAT!!!!!!!

[sonicrocks7543]

you should've put in sonamy!!!

[ih8makinusernames]

oh noez durkn3ss is aprouching! Lol people really need spell checker.

[MoonShadowWolfe]

@Immafurrycat Keep in mind that it was probably written by a six-year-old, and no one had the heart to tell him it was shit and he should keep it off the fucking internet.

[ShadowFlame7546]

"Sonic was said because Tails" LMFAO

[Gaomon752]

Darkneess's backstory sounds like Bludshot the Hedgehog's story

a rocolor ripping off a recolor

[Pizzafication123]

annnnnd..........sonic jus forgot about tails i guess.

[blackburningdevil1]

lol terrible

[FranticDarkness]

This fan-fiction is horrid.

[AzureClarity]

What would have made this story even more epic than it already is would be if the one part where Knuckles gets the Master Emerald back went, "took the emerald back to his place and fucked it."

[Turbosonic98]

This is awful!

[DinahoftheRailroad]

XD I know... amazing FF.

[DaftBrian]

this is what its like to go to an anime con.

[PenguinCinema]

How can you READ that?

[Tacom4ster]

This Fanficiton is so awesome

it should be read by Patrick Stewart of someone impotant

[GothChilde6969]

lmfao this is so fail its a win!!!

BLAZE THA CAAAAT!

[DrMario3866]

this is some of the most retarded fan fiction ever made haha

[DinahoftheRailroad]

"I think you're cool."

"...Yeah."

LOL

[Dark42Raine]

BLAZE THE CAT!!!

lol

[SimonXGeorge]

I love Darkneess' voice. It's so very batman.

This is fantastic. I lol'd.

[zwarrior1]

You know whats sad, i used to read shit like this when i young and stupid and like it. Thank god I grew up and realized how much of my life i wasted.

[WritersBlah]

For their sake, I hope whoever wrote this story was younger than 8 years old. This is THE perfect example of what is truly poisoning the Sonic community.

[C102y]

A crappy recolor Marty Stu who just happens to have an undiscovered Chaos Emerald and to be related to an official character, a totally unnecessary death, and to top it all off the Stu becomes the main characters best friend and marries one of the other main characters. How could anyone make a fanfic this bad with this many cliche and not be doing it on purpose!?

[Kukadin]

I refuse to believe this was not bad on purpose.

[C102y]

I have to agree. I mean, this fic has every cliche in the book!

[Driku12]

FFFFFFFFFAIL!!!!

[NicholasOnimura]

"Darkness hugged his kids Black and Smoke then kissed his wife Amy"

Wait, so did the recolor Gary Stu marry Amy and have two kids with her in the span of a minute? The hell?

[MrFreedeath]

i think this guy just makes these horrible fanfics on purpose. if u read his other stuff its fuckin hilarious

[DinahoftheRailroad]

Wtf....

[TheAdamKyleChannel]

lol I love the spelling "airers".

[ShadowtailsST]

Wow; Sonic just tossed Tails to the side for Darkness? What a whore! And speaking of whores; way to jump from one man to the next Amy. I think the writer of this fanfic should send it to Lifetime TV; I could actually imagine it becoming a Lifetime movie. Evil clones, cheating, death; it all fits!

[Kukadin]

Although there is a lack of rape.

[Robomorons]

Say, I forget. Why was Sonic sad when Tails died?

[Tairine795]

Epic storyfail. XD

I almost died laughing at BLAZE THE CAAAAAT!

[Temascos]

Love this reading! This must be where the "Most Original Fanfic EVAR!" got it's ideas, it's almost exactly like this. How not to write Sonic stories! :P

[TehRejectedIdeaYT]

*head explodes from the logic of the story*

[MRIStudios]

STORY FAILURE

[DarkTemplarKain]

sounds like this guy took GRATUITOUS AMOUNTS OF meth before making this story B:

[penquin12500]

lol best story ever! (yeah no)

[3FrogBrosCartoons]

yeah, least obvious comment ever! (yeah no)

[messysmitt]

Wow, i really dont want to meet the person who wrote this. I looked up almost every YouTube video of what not to do in a fanfic and i saw it all right there

[luvtehcomix]

'kay, i'm not even gonna make a clever joke here:

wow... just wow... this actually has EVERY single thing wrong with fanfics in it. i'm honestly impressed...

[SIXTEENCINEMA]

"Now that my long-time best friend Tails is dead, you can be my new friend; screw that fox" WTF???

[IAMBLUDSHOT]

My story is more original.

[ShadowNeedsAHug]

BLAZE THE CAT!!!! 8D

[RVDandSabu]

are you listning to His World

[Michaeldragon800]

The only part of this story that really does'nt make any sence is why did it say BLAZE THE CAT!... She did'nt even appear in this story.

[Michaeldragon800]

Unless... what if Blaze is telling the second part of the story!... maybe.

[BROOKLYNRAGE80]

wheres that damn 8th chaos emerald

[SIXTEENCINEMA]

Here's a review I found on that story: Magnificent, a masterpiece. The stroytelling, execution, style and pace were all sublime and were consistent throughout. The characters ACTUALLY stayed in character throughout the entire fanfic. I could see the characters develop and grow. They grew on me and by the time Tails died, I could feel tears welling up in my eyes. With the addition of astounding grammar and spelling, this is the best piece of literature I have ever read in ever. Flawless.

[Aargh14]

Win scarcasm is win.

[SIXTEENCINEMA]

This fic must be some kind of joke.

[thesacredbeast2000]

oh my god people are even using cheap recolors in writing XD that had crappy fan comic written all over it i cant wait till the squeal when darkness decides hes better than shadow and stomps on him then sonic dies so that darkness can take over the story

[BROOKLYNRAGE80]

that story was worse than the next gen sonic story.

[twilightstationrocks]

Sonic mourns as fast as he runs

[SupahLuigi64]

Where the crap did darkness's kids come from? Blaze wasn't even in this story either. Have people ever heard of proofreading?

[thesacredbeast2000]

someone screamed her name that's all that matters... lol im just kidding this is terrible writing the author should have just made a 3 page comic where his shadow recolor shows up to kick sonics ass to proove hes better and then rapes amy and the end because he would get heckled to death pretty much what every other stupid fan boy who recolors a sprite dose hes except he wont make a red sonic and call it zonic and its sonics son no this time its shadow

[CaptainPichu]

It's amazing how a recolor can get a kiss and become friends with just one word.

[AxleChain]

...wtf was that?

[Pikachugirl1992]

Gary Stu... MAJOR Gary Stu... An Eight Chaos Emerald? Not until Sega Confirms it, and there's no way Sega would give it to a character to wear around their neck and they would never have Amy suddenly love another character, it's NOT gonna happen... ALSO, how about the fan fiction writer learn a little thing I'd like to call "Spelling" and "Grammer"? They really need someone to proof read their fan fictions before they post them on the internet and waste someone else's time.

[HobbesandCalvinFan]

I laughed my arse off at how crappy this pile of sh!t was.

[ZombieBuster007]

wheres that damn 8th chaos emerald

(hope most of you get it)

[r13xas]

shadow the hedgehog ref. =D

[NaruhinaXSasusaku]

Wow,these little kids really like death in their fiction,right?

[Edgemaster000]

They also love illiteracy.

[soracrazymau]

XD That made no sense.

[shadowhasacookie]

The way you read this just reminded me so much of Half-Life Full Life Consequences. XD Nice job.

[firelulz5865]

A totally awesome original fan character insertion. I also like the random out of nowhere BLAZE TEH CAT.

[slashermaster28]

"Amy forgot being in love with Sonic and fell in love with Darkness" That, along with a bunch of other stuff, came COMPLETELY out of nowhere. This pretty much tells me this kid has a little too much pride in his character.

[slashermaster28]

Oh yeah, the ending pretty much tells me that this kid must HATE Tails. Good god, he made Sonic sound like a heartless jerk.

[thecardboardbox13]

And all of the sudden Tails dies :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDd

[HedghogAlert911]

...................

[fatboy2555]

crap crap crap crap crap get the fuck on to it

[AlchemyNme]

leiek omg thsiss sotory is so good! dik why u all r ferakin g out yo

lol

this makes me laugh...I don't know if the poor kid wanted me to laugh...but I did.

[lillylivers]

ORIGINAL FAN CHARACTER IS ORIGINAL.

[dansnephew]

BLAZE THE CAT!!!!!

[dansnephew]

they flew to chaos and kill him by killing chaos control him

[SuperShadowSpeeds]

LOL! LOL! LOL! SHITTIEST STORY EVER!

[Snaaaaap]

How old is that kid? Seriously. XD

[CigaretteHolderSmoke]

Since WHEN has Eggman become a serial killer?

[Ulldot]

lol thats why sonicfancharacters arent good enough.

[ShadowSpark220]

I smell a Marty Sue! :)

[Ulldot]

Lol sad

[therealhomor]

isn't the name was Gary Stu?

maybe Bobby Lue?

[VaultOfMisfortune]

Whoever wrote this is extremely talented and creative.

A character that looks like Shadow only with ONE colour difference? GENIUS!

[TehCalvinator]

In the kid'd defense, they're brothers.

[VaultOfMisfortune]

Wow. That's a real shocker.

[JudgeKazejin]

That was excellent.

BLEIZZ THU KAET.

[DFLOODyeaa]

wtf?

[bean82]

Chaos 2 and killed him by killing chaos control him

GREATEST FICTION EVER MADE

[LMNTX]

BLACHZE DA CEAT

[BiskeTheBeast]

That was like, the best story ever told.

ROFL. XD

[TehCalvinator]

BLAZE THE CAT

[allie7794]

wow this story sucked lol

or should i say sukded XD

[CaptainSilentheFox]

Who ever wrote this is a dickhead

[dragonlor01]

Alot of spelling errors O.o

And if u made this, im srry i saidz dat.

[dragonlor01]

I think you are really cool" said Amy "Yeah" said Darkness, so they started kissing????

and Tail went to try to fight Chaos 2...but it killed him. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO TAILS???

wow its so stupid but funny too, and its original :P

[pepperzonic]

thats the worst fanfiction ive ever heard in my whole life....I can't believe i used to like these things....

[RoadToDawn51]

ROFL His kids: "Black" and "Smoke"! xD

But did Sonic blooded his face off yet? :D

[BROOKLYNRAGE80]

LOL

[xJadex13]

LOL that was funny XD

[Mastergames22]

Lollll im sorry but its to rich lollll

[Kirbydreamstar]

BEST FANFIC EVAR

[rockfootfootfoot]

lol nice

[ConkersPLAYTHROUGHS]

lol finla

[TheWickedHaveMoreFun]

More touching than Austin! Better than Hemmingway! A true work of great literature! How does Squall Strife do it every single time?!

[AdamRoxxorz]

This story touches my heart.

If he threw in a, "da stars da moon" it would be the perfect piece of literature of all time.

[SpongePore]

Simply astounding.

[kingkremlingrool]

Such amazing literature.