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From: xsweetxsuperstarx
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  • Oh my god thanks SO much guys.

    elleisforlovee- thanks. honestly. to have someone with your talent come and read MY story is just, amazing.

    joyfulforest- That's AWESOME. I've written before, on another account, but I got tired of the story, and I just wanted to start over and get new readers:) Thank you!

    heysugarsugar- your new series looks AWESOME!. It looks so interesting how it'll work out&such. It's gutsy to go & write something like that. I'd get confused. :p

    Thanks again, guys. :))

  • I definitely agree with the other comments!

    You're really talented :)

    I don't have many stories I regularly read, but I think I'm going to like this one!

    Keep them coming!

  • Ooh yay!!

    A story from the point of view of someone who isn't a superfan! I love it!

    You also spell everything right, which I love!

    I also love Peyton already! You have a very strong narrative voice!

    You're a good writer! Lots of people write these stories, but only a few are actually worth reading lol

    I'm subscribing! You're great! :) <3

  • Honestly, I've read a lot of stories for a bunch of people and most of the time they're not that great but this isn't half bad. I actually didn't mind reading it, so kudos to you! I love how the girl isn't this peppy, cheerleader and such. She has emotions and character, which is evident and awesome! The dialogue could be stronger but that'll come. Think of how you talk to your friends. Also, amazing having the balls to do an original plot! I really like it girl! :]

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