i think it's good and you have a nice idea :) but personally i think it's a little slow, and if you're going to hold notes that long make sure your voice is really strong with them. but maybe try playing/singing it through, just twice as fast? just my two cents. good job :D
Its good but the guitar is toooo loud
MaddieTights13 1 year ago
@MaddieTights13 Thanks! i do strum loud. :D
motoshorty323 1 year ago
ha this is good i just uploaded another video u should go look
randomrebels33 2 years ago
thanks!
will do!
motoshorty323 2 years ago
fantastic original song
charitynotclarity 2 years ago
THANKS! :D
motoshorty323 2 years ago
Very Cool !! Keep the Music Alive !!! Good luck on your musical journey Little Sister !!! PEACE JIM
jimiller7 2 years ago
Thanks for the comment, and for subscribing!! =))
motoshorty323 2 years ago
great song! very talented : )
Jugador12 2 years ago
Thanks! =))
motoshorty323 2 years ago
What do you mean by, "You saw me " watching Shane dawsons video?
Kati3Mari3Monro3 2 years ago
there is a thing ( i think down at the bottom) that shows who's watching the video that you're watching! lol..
motoshorty323 2 years ago
my pleasure :) keep the passion alive..
teymusic 2 years ago
moto
at your first chord, I could notice you had your guitar perfectly tuned.
It's the first thing I pay my attention for...lol
Your music is great and your voice as well...
this song was meant to have a huge arrangement, even if just electronic. ...maybe you imagine it like I do...
5 stars!
Brazilady 2 years ago
Thanks sooo much!
and I'd like to do it in a studio sometime semi-soon. lol
motoshorty323 2 years ago
thanks for sharing
teymusic 2 years ago
Thanks!
especially coming from you!
You're sooo amazing! =)))
motoshorty323 2 years ago
Awesome work
5 stars
kennymelodica 2 years ago
THANKS! and for subscribing! =))
motoshorty323 2 years ago
really good job on this....you have a very nice voice and play guitar well...keep going and good luck <3
guitarrx3girl 2 years ago
Thanks soo much! =)))
motoshorty323 2 years ago
hw old r u???n ur really gud=D
creepingfear13 2 years ago
Thanks! and I'm 15! =))
motoshorty323 2 years ago
i love y0u so much!!!
randomrebels33 2 years ago
aww! Thanks!! =))
motoshorty323 2 years ago
thats really good
joshsnumber1fanlilK 2 years ago
Thanks! =))
motoshorty323 2 years ago
you aree pretty good!
milkrocksnet 2 years ago
Thanks!!!
and for subscribing!!
awesome possum! :P
motoshorty323 2 years ago
love the song i really get it keed up the good work.... it will pay off in the long run
eraytee 2 years ago
Thanks! appreciate the support!
..Please subscribe if you haven't and you'd like to! =))
motoshorty323 2 years ago
thankyas! :D
motoshorty323 2 years ago
i think it's good and you have a nice idea :) but personally i think it's a little slow, and if you're going to hold notes that long make sure your voice is really strong with them. but maybe try playing/singing it through, just twice as fast? just my two cents. good job :D
variousfruit 2 years ago
thanks! I really thought about speeding it up, but when i did, it wasn't as sad souding.. know what i mean?
motoshorty323 2 years ago
Pretty nice Shorty!
Keep it up
912kidd 2 years ago
justin?
and Thanks! =))
motoshorty323 2 years ago
nice song but i think it would sound better if you were to tone down your guitar a bit...... i agree with them though ^_^
waabawaba 2 years ago
it's actually tuned differently than normal.
like this:
E- C#
B- G#
G- F#
D- C#
A- G#
E- C#
soo.. everything a half step, then 6, 2, and 1 are down another whole step. im learning another song in that tuning.. and it inspired me. lol.
Thanks for the comment! =))
motoshorty323 2 years ago
:) np n im looking forward 2 ur vids :)
waabawaba 2 years ago
Thanks! =))
motoshorty323 2 years ago
yep its pretty good.
Stevnson123 2 years ago
Thanks Steven! :D
motoshorty323 2 years ago
Good job.
erthghst 2 years ago
Thanks! =))
motoshorty323 2 years ago