You´re great dancer... you can share your passion for bellydance and that´s awsome... even more when you quote the source of the choreo this actions is so ethic and every dancer should do it if we dance something that is not made for our own intelect right?! excellent example of everything!!
Overall pretty good. The two things that I noticed that could be improved are:
~Watch your hands. Control them more, so they aren't flipping so much.
~Don't anticipate the music. Since you know the song well, often you are doing a movement about a second before that beat in the song actually happens. (It is a common thing.) This can be prevented by making sure that you are staying in time with the music, rather than doing the choreo on "autopilot".
wow ur good =)..but theres one thing thatreally destracted me: since ur face is perfectly on display as everything else. the problem is that ur face expressions are so extreme, I had real trouble to concentrate on the dancing because ur face was doing so much at the same time...it's good to smile but I wouldn't put to much emphasis on the facial expression...I'd keep it a bit more gentle. But anyway the second time I watched it I actually looked at the dancing part and that was extremely good =)
Thanks for the feedback! I was an actor before a bellydancer, and a cheerleader growing up, so sometimes it's hard to remember that when I'm dancing, the focus should be on by body more than my smile. Also, to be honest, dancing really makes me happy, and I tend to let that show through, even when I'm doing a serious part. Thanks again for the advice, i truly do appreciate it! :) ~Tavi
Never stop your dancing, your going to the stage next!
Fishermanfred1 1 year ago
girl you are AMAZING
thecolorado11 2 years ago
Love that face. Love that smile. Love those arms moving. Love that hypnotic tummy. Love it all!
Dancingartichoke 2 years ago
you are moon zappa and i claim my five dollars!!!!
dekekyo 2 years ago
this is great!
kristinelizabeth23 2 years ago
hey!!! its great how long it took you to learn this ? good job
puerto787peter 2 years ago
Girl you have a great smile! Ive been bellydancing for 9 years and ive gotta say, you take the cake! You go girl! ^_^
SynCity13 2 years ago
You´re great dancer... you can share your passion for bellydance and that´s awsome... even more when you quote the source of the choreo this actions is so ethic and every dancer should do it if we dance something that is not made for our own intelect right?! excellent example of everything!!
Saludos From Mexico!!
LiLConstantino 2 years ago
You are a very good dancer. Love your enthusiams and energy. Great video.
thornhailweb 3 years ago
You did good!
gcsugirl 3 years ago
Bravisima chica. You have a ton of energy and talent, wonderful to watch!
simplicitykitty 3 years ago
Very nice! ;)
Tinica1 3 years ago
My critique:
Overall pretty good. The two things that I noticed that could be improved are:
~Watch your hands. Control them more, so they aren't flipping so much.
~Don't anticipate the music. Since you know the song well, often you are doing a movement about a second before that beat in the song actually happens. (It is a common thing.) This can be prevented by making sure that you are staying in time with the music, rather than doing the choreo on "autopilot".
mom2raiandjas 3 years ago
Thanks so much for the feedback! I started out as an actor, so I understand creative criticism and I appreciate when I get it! Thanks again! ~Tavi
GypsyTavi 3 years ago
wow ur good =)..but theres one thing thatreally destracted me: since ur face is perfectly on display as everything else. the problem is that ur face expressions are so extreme, I had real trouble to concentrate on the dancing because ur face was doing so much at the same time...it's good to smile but I wouldn't put to much emphasis on the facial expression...I'd keep it a bit more gentle. But anyway the second time I watched it I actually looked at the dancing part and that was extremely good =)
MissManiacTheMad 3 years ago
Thanks for the feedback! I was an actor before a bellydancer, and a cheerleader growing up, so sometimes it's hard to remember that when I'm dancing, the focus should be on by body more than my smile. Also, to be honest, dancing really makes me happy, and I tend to let that show through, even when I'm doing a serious part. Thanks again for the advice, i truly do appreciate it! :) ~Tavi
GypsyTavi 3 years ago
prefr this ova Jillina's, cuz this took a year to make... wait`n 4 ur new vid c`ya nxt yr...lol
GILIGILI9 3 years ago
good job!!
i would say modify some of those facial expressions but it was really good!!
do you have the dvd?
jade401 3 years ago
hola! no nuevos videos? ¿Qué haces? ....bromeando
GILIGILI9 3 years ago
buena expresion facial me encanta! sigue asi! nice shimmies too!
irmeva 3 years ago
NICE SHIMMIES!!
inpeace777 3 years ago
wow...your great..I love this song...and your dance is fantastic..how long have you been dancing?could you send me this song, pls?great job!!!!
lindushkal 3 years ago
I think it was great! very cute!
yameyameyame 3 years ago
How can you say it's not great?? Your dancing is wonderful and you look as beautiful as ever. In my book, that makes it great.
GinXYZ 3 years ago
How can you say it isn't great?? Your dancing is wonderful and you look as beautiful as ever...in my book, that makes it great!
GinXYZ 3 years ago
your hot and love that smile!
GILIGILI9 3 years ago
wow, mesmerising!
doodiewhacker 3 years ago
sexy belly button
rickymayo 3 years ago
That was very nice, thanks for sharing it with me!
Shahlah 3 years ago
;) buscando caliente
amor tu sonrisa....bravo!!
GILIGILI9 3 years ago
Very good. I love how bellydance so beautifully. U are a sexy and cool bellydancer. What is the name of the drum solo that U are dancing too.
SAMCINNIS 3 years ago
How can you say that's not great?? I think you did an awesome job and you look as beautiful as ever!
GinXYZ 3 years ago