No problem. ^^ The art stinks, but it gets better as it goes along. Just letting you know beforehand so you don't look at it and go "what's this crap?!" Lol.
Hey how is it going i am still looking forward to when you are going to be done with the story. I hope you will let all of your friends know the moment it is out. So talk to you later. bye. oh please let us know what you are up too.
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if you made this you would reuin the orional, there is no need for a second one, also the idea seems a lil boring he comes into her dreams and then she finds out it's real and he has to decide to go with him? < seems a bit of an amature story line and not very intresting sorry jsut my opion but making a seccond one would be a big mistake. even though i wudn't mind seeing david play jarth again lol, but yh no.
I am going to have to agree with you on this. It is a very over used plot line. I DO write fanfiction and actual stories and am trying to get a book published. That plot line IS kind of amature. I'm not saying that you shouldn't do it or anything of the sort. All I am saying is that the plot is over used. Nothing more, nothing less. I did enjoy the video though. It was very well put together and organized. I enjoyed it and it's so going into my favs.
Not yet. I wrote this fiction about 5 yrs ago and well the first 5 chapters have played vanishing act on my computer so I have to rewrite them which is hard to do from memory. Hopefully it will be up soon and I will PM you.
hmm, I love refreshing and new! This plot is nicely different from all those JS pairings. Though Jareth seducing his daughter might be a little too new, if you get what I'm saying...
AWESOME not fair tho..I would love to contribute a song. If you ever do more and need a song go to acid planet dot com check out MARK MOFFRE and listen to NO LONGER STUPID.
Yeah I had a couple of people state that I'm usually a sarah/Jareth shipper, but for some reason its been done so many times I thought I would try something different. Of course Jareth didn't know Baylynn was Sarah's daughter until way later in the fanfiction (she had been protected by Hoggle and the rest of her mother's Labyrinth friends). But I see what you mean, but I think it is kinda cute and a new twist on an old tale.
I think you video was very well edited and the music was also very good. The only thing that I don't like is that Sarah is death because I'm a Sarah/Jareth pairing only. I couldn't think about having Jareth/Sarah not together. Having Jareth trying to seduce Sarah's daughter is likeks like incest to me.
Awesome vid Tim burton might be remaking labyrinth and johnny depp would be jareth how cool
Labyfan 8 months ago
This looks like it's going to be a really great fanfic! I can't wait till you have it up!
cuddlebear992 1 year ago
I would really love to read this ff :D
What movie is 1:07? ._.
Schattenbluete 1 year ago
what is the last song name?
Russiangiant 2 years ago
@Russiangiant Requiem for a dream by clint mansell
bluelionpilot 1 year ago
1:22 what movie is it?
SashalovesErik 2 years ago
so did this ever get posted? Because I REALLY want to read it!!
StacyVorosco 2 years ago
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me too let me know if you find out if it was
1beingacrossstars 2 years ago
cool vid
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stardustqueen8 2 years ago
hi its beth from sms
stardustqueen8 2 years ago
I want to read this. Where is it?
foreverhopeful21 2 years ago
this is super! Here in holland we never knew there was a part 2. Who mcan help me with this to find it on dvd????/
Biek74 3 years ago
it's a fanmade trailer! There is no actual part 2!
isabeauluv 3 years ago
Actually, there is, but it's a manga. :) Look up Return to Labyrinth at your local bookstore...
Gosh, I sound like a saleswoman...
HollowGroundsInc 3 years ago 2
haha so there really is a manga? didn't know about that but thx for the information anyway :)
isabeauluv 3 years ago
No problem. ^^ The art stinks, but it gets better as it goes along. Just letting you know beforehand so you don't look at it and go "what's this crap?!" Lol.
HollowGroundsInc 3 years ago
what is the url for this fan fiction
starhalliwell 3 years ago
Cool!! So is the story posted yet? I'm interested and would like to read it
let me know please!!
StacyVorosco 3 years ago
Okay, sounds wonderful! I must read this fanfiction of yours! Please post it someplace soon, and let me know!!
SydneyBristow447 3 years ago
I am definatly reading this. :)
nitemareshadows 3 years ago
bravo!!! bravo!!!
redmustang13 3 years ago
Hey how is it going i am still looking forward to when you are going to be done with the story. I hope you will let all of your friends know the moment it is out. So talk to you later. bye. oh please let us know what you are up too.
margrette4 3 years ago
OMG YOU should recommend that. i seriously believe that you get this made. I would do whatever it took to get this made. i really like it.
margrette4 3 years ago 5
AWESOME I WISH IT WUZ MAAADE!
HelenaXRose 3 years ago 3
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if you made this you would reuin the orional, there is no need for a second one, also the idea seems a lil boring he comes into her dreams and then she finds out it's real and he has to decide to go with him? < seems a bit of an amature story line and not very intresting sorry jsut my opion but making a seccond one would be a big mistake. even though i wudn't mind seeing david play jarth again lol, but yh no.
amzyx1111 3 years ago
I am going to have to agree with you on this. It is a very over used plot line. I DO write fanfiction and actual stories and am trying to get a book published. That plot line IS kind of amature. I'm not saying that you shouldn't do it or anything of the sort. All I am saying is that the plot is over used. Nothing more, nothing less. I did enjoy the video though. It was very well put together and organized. I enjoyed it and it's so going into my favs.
KagomeYukiNiwa 3 years ago
Wow! This looks really cool! Have you posted your fanfic yet? And if so, where can I find it?
lost2darkness 3 years ago
HA I LOVE THIS SONG!!!!
HeartofFlame 4 years ago
well the first song, by Krause
HeartofFlame 4 years ago
Yeah its one of my faves also I used to play it in my son's nursery when he was a baby. Krause's voice just makes everything so relaxing.
sheymom 4 years ago
beautiful and original!
tiralira88 4 years ago 2
Thank you!
sheymom 4 years ago
this sound great! have you started to post the story yet????
kristinsinha 4 years ago
Not yet. I wrote this fiction about 5 yrs ago and well the first 5 chapters have played vanishing act on my computer so I have to rewrite them which is hard to do from memory. Hopefully it will be up soon and I will PM you.
sheymom 4 years ago
Very well edited! It almost looks as if it could be real. Great job! And good luck on your fanfic too!
redraven24 4 years ago
hmm, I love refreshing and new! This plot is nicely different from all those JS pairings. Though Jareth seducing his daughter might be a little too new, if you get what I'm saying...
Anyway, the trailer sounds promising. Good job!
LittleKaori 4 years ago 2
I don't think that sheymom meant to imply that it was his daughter...so there isn't anything freaky about her plotline :)
redraven24 4 years ago 2
ah, damn, you're right ^.^Don't take anything for granted...
LittleKaori 4 years ago
Yeah Jareth is NOT Sarah's daughter's father. Nope her father is human.
sheymom 4 years ago
Send me a PM when you post the fic? The trailer looks great!
And I LOVE Kristin!
kirstanne 4 years ago
OMG!!*jumps up & down* I'm sooooo gonna read this! I love the trailer! :D *applauds*
SoulRythm 4 years ago
Wow, that looks really good. I can't wait to read it. Great job on the video!
kisatiger 4 years ago
if and when you finish that fanfiction i'd love to read it
your video was wonderful
bowiejenn2 4 years ago
I really like this, it looks very cool, please tell me when the fanfic comes out, oh and what were the songs?
SilverDrama 4 years ago
The songs are in order
You Be My Ain True Love by Alison Krauss
Sober - Kelly Clarkson
Requiem of a Dream(Summer Dream) - LOTR
I will send you a pm when I finally get the first chapter up, along with anyone else who requests it.
sheymom 4 years ago
AWESOME not fair tho..I would love to contribute a song. If you ever do more and need a song go to acid planet dot com check out MARK MOFFRE and listen to NO LONGER STUPID.
UTBESUX 4 years ago
Yeah I had a couple of people state that I'm usually a sarah/Jareth shipper, but for some reason its been done so many times I thought I would try something different. Of course Jareth didn't know Baylynn was Sarah's daughter until way later in the fanfiction (she had been protected by Hoggle and the rest of her mother's Labyrinth friends). But I see what you mean, but I think it is kinda cute and a new twist on an old tale.
sheymom 4 years ago
I think you video was very well edited and the music was also very good. The only thing that I don't like is that Sarah is death because I'm a Sarah/Jareth pairing only. I couldn't think about having Jareth/Sarah not together. Having Jareth trying to seduce Sarah's daughter is likeks like incest to me.
AngelaScarlet 4 years ago