That's really cool dude, Is that you singing? Your voice is very calming i can tell you that. The lyrics look hard. But, ya did a really good job! Anyways. AWESOME JOB!
One thing you might want to work on is things like "About" to "You". Just be careful you don't end up merging them and getting "Aboutchoo" rather than "About You" Same thing for "Want You" and "Touch You"
Also maybe add a final word at the end just to add a sense of finality rather than leaving it hanging. "Fall into your...Dream" or something like that.
Other than that, it's absolutely amazing. You have such a beautiful voice.
your so good at writting lyrics :) its sooo amazing :)
shadowkitty101 6 months ago in playlist lullabys =)
amazinng
hinatasfan45 1 year ago
That's really cool dude, Is that you singing? Your voice is very calming i can tell you that. The lyrics look hard. But, ya did a really good job! Anyways. AWESOME JOB!
BlackVampireGoddess4 2 years ago
I love it!!!! i really understandd you when you say that making the lyrics is hard
FVIDlover97 2 years ago
awesome!
milkshakes864 2 years ago
i love it kawaii!!
Sakurachick317 2 years ago
cute voice
vampyteen13 2 years ago
cool.
DemonlordKoraru 2 years ago
LOL! I thought this was from Hotel 626
KATVANDO184 2 years ago
Your voice is different, but I love it, it sounds realy nice! and the song was pretty. ^_^
Paralyzedhearts22 2 years ago
wow. x
MiK3i 2 years ago
Hotel 626..Theres title called "SING ME A LULLABY"
Cr1ptlord 2 years ago
woah, i really liked it!!
jobrosista111 2 years ago
beautiful
7wolfs 3 years ago
Beautiful song..thank you
FLUTISSIMA 3 years ago
love song to the world *****
indianxpaintbrush 3 years ago
Thank you Danny...beautiful.
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joanlagoy 3 years ago
strange.
monkeymmc12 3 years ago
Beautiful! I really love the chorus.
One thing you might want to work on is things like "About" to "You". Just be careful you don't end up merging them and getting "Aboutchoo" rather than "About You" Same thing for "Want You" and "Touch You"
Also maybe add a final word at the end just to add a sense of finality rather than leaving it hanging. "Fall into your...Dream" or something like that.
Other than that, it's absolutely amazing. You have such a beautiful voice.
Shadowkitten 3 years ago
i like you can go far
elev8chick2011 3 years ago
Very nice I liked it very relaxing.
archsimmusic 3 years ago
Dedicated this song to Naqi
Sleep pls
ff8yuna 4 years ago