Wait a minute! We use the same Roland DAW. Interesting.
I think you let the instruments take over a bit too much. I would have put some reverb on your voice too. I think there's a problem with too many voices (instruments and human voice) sharing the same frequencies at the same time. Sometimes you have to pull down some frequencies of various instruments to let the voice stand out better. It was a good attempt.
@lancethrustworthy Thanks so much for taking the time for a listen... Your comments are appreciated.... Agreed.... It was just a sketchbook recording so i didn't forget the parts. The vocals were scratchy so i sunk them down. Turns out the meaning behind the song became to personal for me to RE-record it for the album. So, it now lives forever on the shelf of past ideas.... (and youtube....hahhah). Thanks again for your time.
@xSmilesGoMilesx I haven't gone down the iTunes path as yet.......BUT..... i will be for the Album/CD which is due VERY soon.......Please stay with me, 2012 shall be exciting......Muchluv.
I love the song, the music is so relaxing and calming. I think I have another bed time playlist to fall asleep too, or when I'm upset and need to relax. :}
@chusma0 Thank you so much Chloe. Your kindness means the most. I hope people can see a measure of growth to once i have a finished product. Thanks again for your support. Muchluv.
This sounds very good and showing the various steps involved in writing and making this song is a nice touch. I don't feel that it is amateurish, at all.
@TheGuitarjerry1126 Jerry, Thank you so much for your kindness. It's funny how if you mess around with things at home how it can spark the idea for such a BIG project. Look forward to sharing the (Studio) Album with you all soon. Thanks again for your support.
Nice song, Phisha! I don't find the vocals weak at all... fit the mood very well. I do hear the improvements in guitar you made in the meanwhile though :-) looking forward to your album, man...
@TSmusicology Thanks greatly for your support. Yes, guitar has made some progress. So many influences need to be credited for that. There is so many GREAT players out there. My goal was to incorporate the lyrical content on top of the guitar "instrumental" side of things... Hope to share it all on the Album soon. Thanks again.
Another step through time, a road well traveled only to realize and allow creativity to reach it's full potential of these sonic journeys to take place. Well Done Comrade!!!
@luke22tranaquastudio Thanks man.... Im sorry do i know you? You sound familiar....hehe. Looking forward to Dec matey.....The sooner it's done the sooner i can stop release OLD junk..
I hope this finds you smiling (and getting better).
This is beautiful...perfect outpouring of emotion through the greatest of the arts--and the only one capable of expressing the feelings we have inside.
@dafProduction Raw, like Sushi!!!! Thanks for your kind comment mate. Yeah, it's as rough as can be....it's not the song it's the story behind it. A pivot point if you will. So now the Album can be compared to this and, noting stages of progression, i can smile again. I hope this finds you well matey. Catch up soon.
this is a really great song...hope see more. <3
famousgirll77 1 week ago
@famousgirll77 Thank you sooooo much. YES, more on the way indeed. CD shall be landing soon. Head to FB to keep in touch. Hugs to you.
Phishamusic 1 week ago
YOUR REALLY GOOD
djmasterjones22 1 month ago
@djmasterjones22 Thank you so much for your kindness.....p.s.- I LOVE CAPS LOCK TOO!!!!!!......hehehee.
Phishamusic 1 month ago
Wait a minute! We use the same Roland DAW. Interesting.
I think you let the instruments take over a bit too much. I would have put some reverb on your voice too. I think there's a problem with too many voices (instruments and human voice) sharing the same frequencies at the same time. Sometimes you have to pull down some frequencies of various instruments to let the voice stand out better. It was a good attempt.
lancethrustworthy 1 month ago
@lancethrustworthy Thanks so much for taking the time for a listen... Your comments are appreciated.... Agreed.... It was just a sketchbook recording so i didn't forget the parts. The vocals were scratchy so i sunk them down. Turns out the meaning behind the song became to personal for me to RE-record it for the album. So, it now lives forever on the shelf of past ideas.... (and youtube....hahhah). Thanks again for your time.
Phishamusic 1 month ago
KEEP GOING
NICE
thecopy21 2 months ago
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√> beautiful music :)) thank you
rudazrudy 3 months ago
@rudazrudy Thank you so much for your support.
Phishamusic 2 months ago
this finds me smiling:) its a great original!!
singwithnothing 3 months ago
@singwithnothing Good to hear... Thank you for your support and kind comment.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Great You Are
JenniferHARARAH 3 months ago
@JenniferHARARAH Thank you so much for your kindness. Muchluv.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Very well done, congratulations and thumbs up.
zelflorizel 3 months ago
@zelflorizel Thank you so much for your support. So glad you liked. Smiles.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Oh, and will there be a link on iTunes so I can buy it? :)
xSmilesGoMilesx 3 months ago
@xSmilesGoMilesx I haven't gone down the iTunes path as yet.......BUT..... i will be for the Album/CD which is due VERY soon.......Please stay with me, 2012 shall be exciting......Muchluv.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Beautiful. Vocals are still amazing. <3
I love the song, the music is so relaxing and calming. I think I have another bed time playlist to fall asleep too, or when I'm upset and need to relax. :}
xSmilesGoMilesx 3 months ago
@xSmilesGoMilesx Thank you so much for your kindness. It really does mean the most.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Great song and video! I enjoyed this very much. Thumbs up!
teteroom 3 months ago
@teteroom Thanks so much for your support. Smiles.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
nicely done!!
tyetygon 3 months ago
@tyetygon Thank you so much for taking the time for a listen.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
excellent!!
soundproof714 3 months ago
@soundproof714 Thanks for your kindness and for taking the time.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Amazing!! It sounds incredible :D So glad you recorded it to share with us!
dancingqueen823 3 months ago
@dancingqueen823 Your most welcome. Glad you liked......More to come....CD not to far away now. Thank you so much for your support.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
EVEN OLD MUSIC, HAVE YOUR special charm! THE VOICE IS NOT BAD AS YOU SAID, YOU ONLY MUCH BETTER!! A VERY GOOD JOB!
Warm hug,
ROSANGELA D'ORO
rosangeladoro 3 months ago
@rosangeladoro Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the listen. Smiles.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
very good song :D :P
pplebelge 3 months ago
@pplebelge Thank you so much. Smiles to you.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
this is such a pretty song-very touching!
pianokeychickadee 3 months ago
@pianokeychickadee Aw, Thank you. Good that people can "understand" it. Thanks again for your support.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Thank you for shaing.
many blessings and peace to you, my friend,
CG
kathmandau 3 months ago
@kathmandau Thank you for taking a listen. Smiles.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Wonderful!
KristinSpradling 3 months ago
@KristinSpradling Thank you so much for your kindness
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Nicely Done! :D
musicaltoy 3 months ago
@musicaltoy Thank you so much for your kindness
Phishamusic 3 months ago
very nice
mariapatajko 3 months ago
@mariapatajko Thank you so much for your kindness
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Love this song!
krassip61 3 months ago
@krassip61 Thank you sooo much for taking the time.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Very nice songs and arrangements, My Friend Phisha.
Congratulations!
Cheers
NAUDORDS 3 months ago
@NAUDORDS Thank you so much. Smiles.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Nice tune, would make a nice soundtrack for a movie!
fngrpkn06 3 months ago
@fngrpkn06 heheh... That would be cool, i would definitely want to re-record it then. Thanks so much for your visit and comment.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Fantastic tune. Wow, I really like your style.
Excellent guitar and nice voice.
Stay awesome
geogreg27 3 months ago
@geogreg27 Thanks so much. Glad you were able to take the time for a listen. Appreciate your kindness.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Great job for be an old demo!! :)
VDJFRI 3 months ago
@VDJFRI Thanks so much for the listen. Smiles. Studio CD on the way......stay tuned.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
nice song ,,, like the tones
drizdmm 3 months ago
@drizdmm Thank you for your kindness and for stopping by for a visit
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Amazing :)
KristieBonnycastle 3 months ago
@KristieBonnycastle Thank you for taking the time for a listen. I hope this finds you smiling.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
You did a really good job on this song. The production value of you video and audio is excellent. You're performance was spot-on too.
dankoch2010 3 months ago
@dankoch2010 Cool, thanks for the comment. I hope you will stay tuned for the Album work then. Great to keep in touch. Smiles.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Muy bueno.
charly1344 3 months ago
@charly1344 Thank you so much.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
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Very nice Phisha...it's good show people where you are coming from...it helps us to understand the now...
Chloe :)
chusma0 3 months ago
@chusma0 Thank you so much Chloe. Your kindness means the most. I hope people can see a measure of growth to once i have a finished product. Thanks again for your support. Muchluv.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
very nice:)
amandawooning 3 months ago
@amandawooning Thank you, i am glad you liked. Smiles.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
hi phisha!
wonderful music and very good arrangements!
best regards
thomas
anmeinersaite 3 months ago
@anmeinersaite Thank you so much for your visit. I greatly appreciate the support. Smiles.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Hello! Wonderful) Very nice job) Thanks and love you)
Valeri171 3 months ago
@Valeri171 Val, Thank you so much for your kind words and support. It really does mean the most.
Muchluv and Hugs.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Very nice video.
aaaa7777aaaa1 3 months ago
@aaaa7777aaaa1 Thak you so much for taking the time. Muchluv.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
@Phishamusic You're welcome!
aaaa7777aaaa1 3 months ago
This sounds very good and showing the various steps involved in writing and making this song is a nice touch. I don't feel that it is amateurish, at all.
~ Jerry
TheGuitarjerry1126 3 months ago
@TheGuitarjerry1126 Jerry, Thank you so much for your kindness. It's funny how if you mess around with things at home how it can spark the idea for such a BIG project. Look forward to sharing the (Studio) Album with you all soon. Thanks again for your support.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Super fine job Bro. Very heartfelt...Cap....
TheCaptFlashback 3 months ago
@TheCaptFlashback Thanks for the listen, glad you liked.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Nice song, Phisha! I don't find the vocals weak at all... fit the mood very well. I do hear the improvements in guitar you made in the meanwhile though :-) looking forward to your album, man...
TSmusicology 3 months ago
@TSmusicology Thanks greatly for your support. Yes, guitar has made some progress. So many influences need to be credited for that. There is so many GREAT players out there. My goal was to incorporate the lyrical content on top of the guitar "instrumental" side of things... Hope to share it all on the Album soon. Thanks again.
Smiles.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Great job
Sting575 3 months ago
@Sting575 Thank you soooo much for your time in taking a listen. Smiles.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
@Phishamusic Your welcome I hope you have a great weekend May God bless you & your well being
Sting575 3 months ago
Thanks for sharing man! Great job! :) Keep up the good work.
Rizzo12388 3 months ago
@Rizzo12388 Your most welcome.... Thanks for the listen. GREAT to keep in touch.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
i like it a lot, god job my friend, pls more of that music, ciao -Ed-
PianissimoEd 3 months ago
@PianissimoEd Thanks Ed, Yes, more to come indeed.... Album on the way...
GREAT to have your support.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
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Pe☮ce.L♥ve★.Erblina..★Bejta♥★
PrinceshaKs 3 months ago
@PrinceshaKs Thanks so much for your creative comment. Muchluv.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Another step through time, a road well traveled only to realize and allow creativity to reach it's full potential of these sonic journeys to take place. Well Done Comrade!!!
Cheers!
luke22tranaquastudio 3 months ago
@luke22tranaquastudio Thanks man.... Im sorry do i know you? You sound familiar....hehe. Looking forward to Dec matey.....The sooner it's done the sooner i can stop release OLD junk..
I hope this finds you smiling (and getting better).
Phishamusic 3 months ago
This is beautiful...perfect outpouring of emotion through the greatest of the arts--and the only one capable of expressing the feelings we have inside.
MrCampy123 3 months ago
@MrCampy123 Thank you so much for your visit and kindness. Glad you enjoyed. I hope this finds you smiling.
Appreciate the support.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
awesome:)
Melissa11rocks 3 months ago
@Melissa11rocks Thank you so much
Phishamusic 3 months ago
LOvely - pulls at the heart strings :)
MizimoMusic 3 months ago
@MizimoMusic Thank you so much for taking the time for a listen.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
awesome song man!
CMCSpector 3 months ago
@CMCSpector Thanks so much friend. Hope this finds you well. Thanks for stopping by
Phishamusic 3 months ago
cool song man..Peace..
DEVINEHAZE 3 months ago
@DEVINEHAZE Cheers, I hope this finds you smiling.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
nice one^^
Chricido 3 months ago
@Chricido Thanks soooo much for the listen.....
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Good work my friend !
ChannelCroNew 3 months ago
@ChannelCroNew Thanks for your support.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
So glad you posted this. I think it's a wonderful song! ~Anna
AnnaJohnsonMusic 3 months ago
@AnnaJohnsonMusic Thanks so much Anna, given your Feature Vid, i'd say we're coming from the same place.
So much love for your work. GREAT to keep in touch. I hope this finds you smiling (now). Hugs.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
This is raw.. and would be so great live or re-mastered. Love it!
dafProduction 3 months ago
@dafProduction Raw, like Sushi!!!! Thanks for your kind comment mate. Yeah, it's as rough as can be....it's not the song it's the story behind it. A pivot point if you will. So now the Album can be compared to this and, noting stages of progression, i can smile again. I hope this finds you well matey. Catch up soon.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
love your music and video. thank you for send!!
55tallon 3 months ago
@55tallon Thank you so much for your support. GREAT to keep in touch.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
really nice! Kind of haunting... i really like it!
AliciaPileggiMusic 3 months ago
@AliciaPileggiMusic Yeah, im sorry to bring the mood down.....haha. I hope that your smiling now.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Sounds great.
0421Steppenwolf 3 months ago
@0421Steppenwolf Thanks for your kindness.
Phishamusic 3 months ago
Sounds nice, I like it - Best Wishes - John
Ajohn13 3 months ago
@Ajohn13 Thank you so much John. I felt a funny putting this one up, because it's old an amateurish.
But, it sort of tells a bit of a story....That for me....Had to be told. Glad you enjoyed.
Phishamusic 3 months ago