Esalen - Torn Apart

[novanine9]

The clean vocal part, needs to have a break down feel in the insteument section. Half time Straight 8ths on the bell dome of the cymbals, sustained gtr open clean arpegiated chords, and spooky walking bass lines...for sure, get rid of the guitar melody playing over the lead vox. The song needs dynamic mix up and your chorus clean is, really, a break down type refrain

[aurasmash]

Sounds really nice. The only thing that sounded really cheesy and surprisingly bad was the clean vocal sections.

[BRANSCOMBEx]

nice work jak

[Paripovich]

Please tell me you're not a satanist...

[foxxymomma82]

I hope u guys make it big this is so awesome!!!

[junklobster666]

I'm the guy doin the shitty VoXxX.....

[TakTheAxeKid]

Hey I like it! :-)

Rough or not, it's a good take.

There are moments where the singer sounds like Bruce Dickinson... You probably wouldn't be complaining about that though, eh? lol :-p

[feartheringhand]

Im gona take your mac away from you sammy.

[Hetriani]

As always this is mind blowing!!! You are so awesome!!! Great band!!! Can't wait to hear more 5* and faved!!! \m/ you so rock!

[jorgesguitar]

super nice  obviosly with zedshadows everything is grate

[ramsesbringerofwar]

not a fan of your vocalist... but your music's super awesome :D

[Mejdenovac]

nice......:)

[zedshadows]

Thanks =D

[maryo94]

Is that You on 0:35? :D

In my opinion it's allright but it might be more melodic, y'know.. In the other hand I don't wanna be unkind about you, so I'll say: go forth and compose more and more and moreee :D Up the Esalen :)

[zedshadows]

Haha yes it's me at 0:35 lol

We're still working on the songs, this is rough, but thanks!