One Step - Hickle-Dee-Pickle-Dee

[super7climbing]

A moving and informative short film. I love the way that it highlights a marginalised and stigmatised group of people who are suffering from one of the cruellest diseases. I hope that this film inspires a greater appreciation of senior members of society. You can learn a lot from someone who has been on this planet for over six decades.. Well done.

[miltmerm]

Oh yes, and maybe the text at the beginning could linger longer/move slower (or not roll at all) for better absorption.

[miltmerm]

Okay my inexperienced opinion: Really like the vibe, concept & sound track,if I have to criticize - the editing seemed just a little faster & busy than necessary (maybe I'm just tired) but as someone said before a slower 'weight;ess' vibe might be more effective still. I love the foot coming down at 1:20 :) ding! boosh

[avalckenhayn]

abgefahren, gut, sinnvoll, schönes projekt, anrührend, aufrührend

hinrich

[LibertusServices]

I love it!

It works really well in reference to the footage of the moonlanding.

The features, skin and movements of the performers really reminds me of the airless space.

[WalkingGusto]

i too think the idea is great! but less special effects and more patterning and rhythm of edit would have amplified rather than clouded the dementia. some of the shots give a lot of information already about dementia and the repeat blurring of dissloves just made me aware fo them rather than the dementia. i liked the sound. well done for getting it done so quickly!

[thinkystinky]

well done sabine - it think its great - but wech makes interesting comments - and a re-edit might be worth the effort - you are onto something strong happy to help through a phone call if that helps

mike

[MsGitti]

nur weiter so.... es macht auf das nächste video nur noch neugrieriger....

[wech13]

weeellllll,,,,, i find the idea stronger than the execution. the overlaps of video and audio don't make me think of memory loss, but rather final cut. i would have rather seen and heard more of the performers with less not-so-special effects. sorry to put it down - the idea behind it is quite wonderful!

[CreationEditor]

Thank you! Any feedback is appreciated!

The audio suffered quite a bit under the compression but it forces you to listen harder.

[peteroy1]

ambivilent.

[SmileyMinusPlus]

Fantastic!!!