I like the idea of utilizing vignettes; yet the problem with doing so within a 5 minute piece is artistic leeway and plot development. I felt for you characters; but I want to know them better. Understand them better. I'd love to see you try this again one day with less of a time restraint.
How it stands, however, the film is good. I wish you the best of luck!
I like the idea of utilizing vignettes; yet the problem with doing so within a 5 minute piece is artistic leeway and plot development. I felt for you characters; but I want to know them better. Understand them better. I'd love to see you try this again one day with less of a time restraint.
How it stands, however, the film is good. I wish you the best of luck!
MBBarnett 3 years ago
yay Shahira what a hottie
jackiezweig 3 years ago