Jay-Z Instrumental - Dead Presidents by Next

[briancangri25]

thats was nice man. good shit. besides i dont think you need punchlines when your rapping a song about life. so lay off

[switch3nt19560]

u gota put ya own flow on it dogg

n i hear no punchlines

2 be madd nice u gota be iight at everything

not jus a couple things

[gilliedakid]

Nice One bro. Real talk. Yo Check Out My Page for My Freestyle On This beat.

[DXhhhshawn]

fuck ya cuzin

[deanglo90]

DAMN MY NIGGA GOTDAMN SHIT FIRE!!!!!

[YoungFenix07]

You got mad skills forget haters you sick!

[merritbadge]

I wanna hear your twist on it, sounds like you had Jays' lyrics

next to you when you wrote it...

[Ahe101]

hott

[Ahe101]

yo that shts realtalk

[HarlemDipset7]

you're very cool with this chicken.. very real. ....

[sharpblackhawk]

all good bro, bustin a munch haha

[westsideforlife32]

y'all be hatin heavy man, dis dude can spit.. fa real man.. he grindin and don't stereotype about a nigga less u know him sayin quote "he aight but he aint real" or sum stuff like dat but ya know everybody got opinions if u gon' criticize be constructive and stop hatin

[Shorre21]

@westsideforlife32 na he real.... he eat chicken. haha but he do spit sick

[westsideforlife32]

@Shorre21 yea yea he is; he kept it straight 100 wit da chicken

[P03tMusik]

If u knew how to use Mixcraft or somethin like that, you could make this shit sound tight. dO ya thing brO. .

[chize58]

i dont care wat no1 say dat shit waz hot

[phenominalspliffz]

ooh i love my light skin dudes

[goodmusic57]

spic

[alphatom12]

....nah homie can spit

[Bien1986]

nice

[MrElephantTusks]

srumffin that mother fucking chicken up

[wadosbn4lyf]

yea ur good

[Jesudi2527]

nice...

[juneskee63]

big chicken eating mofo

[ParkdaleUP]

good stuff bro. and that shirt is fire.

[PardonTheSwag]

was dis nigga eating? lame....and his bars was shitty, niggas wastin classic beats

[juscallmeskip]

nice man. flow is sick

[YoungFenix07]

kid can spit you get 10 outta 10 from Fenix Bro

[anice121]

hes alright but hes not real

[Cronickman]

man you one of the best freestylers ive seen on here

[Reupkidd]

Damn niggas is hating like a muthufucka. Good shit son keep it up.

[JaeFrance91]

good lyrics but i prefer the 1st verse. I'am not saying i dont like the 2nd its jus the 1st was really good

[Axiomillmatic]

Weak, what is this? Dude stop rapping get a job get a life. Dont hop onto a beat that you can't live up to when u do shit like that you just embarrass yourself. Mybad for being so harsh but man you need alot of work...your performance was wack, nice lyrics...sometimes, learn to perform. Don't hop onto someone else's beat with a weak performance ever again...

[bradz2727]

yeeee, sick, im an MC from the UK, my mc name is nomad so u no i liked it, butt yeee, is ill cuz.

[UndrgrndUp]

chea! you're spittin, man. the flow was on point, and its evident you can write. keep on.

[DB02010]

the nomads line was sick!

[BuddhaFunkaho]

shit yo this dude really create them rhymes then this gawds genius ! whoguves a fuck what kinda hirt hes wearin???????

[keon4739]

fake ass icecream tee

[JAYZSTAN]

"workin wit paper like oragami" <----NICE!!!

[PhEn0m3n4L]

fuckin wack this shouldn't even be here fuckin WACKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!!

[BuddhaFunkaho]

..no wait, what do i mean i THINK it was dope, it WAS dope! hahaaa

[BuddhaFunkaho]

i think that was dope man

[Umashin]

that origami line was sick. and i you have a nice flow though out

[SunamiFlame]

Thats what I call skill..a lot of niggas forget what skill is about..you got a nice combo of creativity and realism..peace

[thamuzicaddict]

Why do we need a backstory?

[blarethephoenix]

dang that was pretty good rhyming and nice flow that was 100X then ur first video

[oplzimso1337]

WORKIN PAPER LIKE ORIGAMI HAHAHAHAH

BRO. awesome.

[manuppowerup]

Hahaha! At first I thought you were eating cereal and chicken...nvm. Anyway, you're pretty good...Keep it up!

[blackychan2171]

haha nice man!

Keep it up

[etothaj2007]

dat shit was deep man keep doin wat u do peace

[emohkay]

yo that shit was ill mah nigga...

check my vids i spit to jay z's beat threats tell me what you think

[krack914]

good lyrics keep doin ur thing and dont stop

[YounGRoCkY860]

LMFAO "Spittin wit ur chicken breath" hahahahahhahahaah

But real talk verses was illlll, did yur thing on that beat stay grindin` nigga

P.S. i aint gonna lie tho, YOU ARE ONE HIT DUDE!!! haha, good shit tho~

[paintunderpressure]

oragami line was nice, sick shit.

[PiNoYPrOjEcT]

Damn, that was raw.. only thing bad was the sound/video quality..

[silqecat]

he never said he freestyled it. It's obvious he didn't. It says "cover". Which means he's gonna do his verse/version of it.

[krolls187]

nice rhyming bro but u r one UGLY cunt! lol, keep it up man

[MAZEY22]

nice man

keep up the good word

[JoeyPasquayak]

spittin wit ur chickin breath

[zackman1]

cool vid

[jacee20]

tight bro thats tight bro

[simez86]

Yo, if you posted this one day earlier it would've been on Jay Z's birthday...and mine but good flowing man keep it up.

[YuhBoiAD]

put tha damn food down,quit talking a bunch of shit and just flow dude

[badado]

stay up dude im pretty sure you wrote this n aint nuthin wrong with that good shit man i could tell you were expermentin with that jay z flow but good though everyone is influenced by somebody n u make sure you get it from in what your opinion is the best be it big l nas, common kweli or jay or anybody else.  get at me dude . my myspace display name is "always evolving!!"- much respect from THE WESTCOAST CALI.-

[barbarakop]

good shit dawg that flow is flowing

[UrbanTheEmcee]

You got skillz kid, mad love.

[GiantsOLB53]

this is fly but get your own style dawg

[iamjappyjesus]

can a dude eat when he wants to?

[dipsetsfinest410]

WOW SON !! that was banana's

u get 4 mics son lol

[narutoguypersonkid]

HAHAH the chicken..and good freestyle

[617alday]

dis shit iz poppin

[DB02010]

wow that is a str8 up nigga...takin a chicken break?lol

[joeyvickz]

rock the mobb joint n hit up lost boyz - renee get at me son

[joeyvickz]

my man (like Frank Loucus say)... u kno who this is... JayyO from the isle my dude... u murkin this... i aint rep to the rest cuz i been heard it u allready kno... shit is fire my man... spit 2 mobb deep-give up the goods holla at ya boy

[JCOVYBABY]

Look easy/ you can bring your heat if you wanta - I have your body feelin like winter in the summer/ thats all you get (laugh)get off Jay D

[alceVGenios]

mmmmmm

[lilrobygn07]

fire boy

[JPoppie]

I mad you ate that hommie and never shared. lol j/k Hit me up I wanna add you to my version of that track. Keep doing ya do.

[FahSheezie]

eh if u freestyled dis u tight!

if u wrote dis u tight!

keep makin it do wat it do

[Mazjona]

May I have some of that chiken ...hehe lol

I think u rap like a profesionall...very good.

And I cant agree with u more...if u wanna do something make up ur mind to it and it will happen man.

Peace out.

[tombstone999]

NICE...VERY NICE. KEEP AT IT SON.

[kjwdis]

yea dawg that shit is good free style i give you your props real talk

[diamepiece]

nigga, this shit is fuckin ill. Your flow is crazy flashback. stay up nigga