IT WAS CLEAR TO HER THAT IT WAS UNCLEAR TO ME (Poem by DRC)

[Trips1103]

lol. You're fucked. 

[riptide808]

Lol

[EllyMcCormack]

Nice wordplay. I think David has gone Zen with Leonard :P

[EdMuirton]

Hahaha! It's all true! Most enjoyed David! Cheers Sir !

[mssoxinabox]

OMG OMG I LOVE IT I LOVE IT UNCLE DAVID I NEVER SAW YOU TUBE HOW YOU R SUPPOSED TO BEFORE OMG IT IS WHAT ROBIN OMG YES HIM DOES WITH HIS SONGS I THINK HE IS MARRIED I DONT KNOW HE CALLED THEN I HANG UP ON HIM THE VOW OF SILENCE THEN HE DOESN'T ANSWER WHEN I CALL I DO NOT KNOW WHAT THE FUCK HE IS THE ONLY ONE I THINK STILL FUCK FUCK YOU CURSING ROSEMARY ME CURSING ROSEMARY ME WITH THOSE WORDS YOU WROTE SO LONG AGO ASSHOLE THERE NA NA NA NA NA

[Shiroitora123]

Awesome. Love it. I've wrote poetry sense I can remember and any help on how to really get it out there will help. Please look me up on lulu poetry. Look up Tucker Bearden and tell me what you think of my poems. I'll be publishing a book soon. "confused despair" and any poets who would like their poetry I'n the book with all their rights reserved and 100% saftey on their ownership can leave a comment on lulu poetry on one of my poems telling me.

[blairtoo]

always excellent. always.

[harleynanda]

Yep...sounds like the bloom is definitely off the rose in this one. A good one, my friend.

[7Yvan]

This woman sound like my ex-wife!! :)

[JoSieLove2Sing4u]

You are so awesome, love you!! ♥

[VisionGhostPoet]

BTW nice haircut!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Really depends on the integrity on the prosecutor at hand when the defendant is more psychotic than what can be defended :)

[MrJoncando]

Oi Buddy,

don't ya know there ain't no wining with women,

greetz from France, well read:>)

[eleuthromania]

Sweet - we've all been there!!

[Delphinideaa]

Extremely amusing - you fell into a trap! :-)

[Proshka]

Heyyyyyyy.... I tried skyping w you yesterday morning, bhp u didn't accept the call... I saw ur written message about my gramps on it..., thanks so much for that beb... It was around 11am... And it says ur birthday is on st patties day... I'm also still getting the hang if it tho

[DavidRandallCurtis]

@Proshka Heyyyyyy brat! I leave my computer on all day regardless of whether I'm here or not... a voice mail will pick up and you can leave a message... usually I'm around... my time is Pacific Time (same time zone as Seattle).... if you know for sure when you are going to call let me know and I'll make it a point to be here wearing a "REALLY COOL" suit and also be stone cold drunk! :P

[Poemsapennyeach]

Think I get it...but then...maybe not.

[Proshka]

good stuff DRC..... i be missin my poetry!!! XO

[DavidRandallCurtis]

@Proshka I be missin' your poetry too Missy Thing! :P I sent out a skype friend request.... once things start going a little beter for you I hope to hear from you.... take care of yourself in the meantime!

[vudu8ball]

Ha! Ha! I have had the same thought. 

[legoAlpha]

Oh wow really great vid!!!keep up the brilliance! :)

[Chanxye]

Awesome and amusing!

[rubyrose456]

potential...minus the self strokes!

[dashpoet]

Totally agree, used against you in a court of family law..

[Nigelcf]

Beautifully read poem as ever David! :)

[gronkar66]

Your poems are as amusing as they are honest. :-) I applaud you!

[AntaresInScorpius]

;p seems i have been here before 

[elviradark6]

are you losing weight David? or is it the hair!? =/.....nice seeing again, and as always loving your poems;)

[Vincenteloco]

thumbs up

[nordicsky]

Deep within your poetry, there lie some profound truths. Once we loose the ability to talk to each other, it's time to hire a good lawyer.

Regards, Peter

[Vogter2100]

Awesome and hillarious :)

[DavidRandallCurtis]

@Vogter2100 Thanks Vogter! :P

[TheIntoxikie]

Brilliant , you never cease to amaze , liked and favourited !

[DavidRandallCurtis]

@TheIntoxikie Thanks for the fave. It is such an honor when people do that!

[twohawksfucking]

I much admire the precision in both delivery and nuance of communication here, David. This poem peels the onion of person-to-person exchange, pointing to how terribly hard it is to be understood. Maybe we're just doomed. But I take some inspiration, always, from the way some can communicate with precision.

[DavidRandallCurtis]

@twohawksfucking I've always thought of doomed love as the most romantic love.  But that's me. Thanks for the comment--it means a LOT! :)

[tomken8dy]

I KNEW There was an "until."

[DavidRandallCurtis]

@tomken8dy Isn't there ALWAYS an "until?" :P

[tomken8dy]

@DavidRandallCurtis

yup. lol

[redshiftexperiment]

awesome

[DavidRandallCurtis]

@redshiftexperiment Thank you.  I would have preferred "awesome sauce" -- but one can't have everything! Peace out and thanks again :)

[RichardRoy2]

Man oh man; from courtship to court-ship. I wonder if there is a relationship there. :P

Nice one David.

[tinySpectacle]

...In a court of family law..."

WHAT? I was paying attention.

An excellent damnation of modern relationships, a la people's inability to connect on any kind of significant level until they are forced to face the realization that they are utterly alone...oh, and it's funny too!

[DavidRandallCurtis]

@tinySpectacle Well, I think the old saying, "you don't know what you've got 'till it's gone" is very true. I'm kinda going thru that right now myself. Long story.... :p

[tinySpectacle]

@DavidRandallCurtis awwww :(

[dmio2]

genius

[DavidRandallCurtis]

@dmio2 That is a very kind thing to say. I think it applies more to TwoHawksFucking, EllyMcCormack and TinySpectacle... but I'll take it! :P

[PlayboyHerbie]

So, damn poem aside, you cut your hair and some damn rat-bastard chicken shit gave you a thumbs down. First. I'm damn glad you took the belt sander upside your temple. Looks damn good "cough". Second. The local teamsters want to know who and when you want the damn problem child bent over backwards...

Great work as usual. But I am a damn mark for the poet lawyer...

[smartbluecat]

Awesome as usual. Really love your delivery and timing here. Great work, mate. Another DRC swoosh. Look at him go.

:o)

Gary

[itsBABYSMITH]

aaah, i see...in a court of family law.  ' )

[keanghiero]

Super. Thanks, your Honour.

All the best

Kean



[AncientAtheist]

Very funny and well delivered.

[MidiPunk]

I've found a series of grunts & snorts useful for communicating with her. It's difficult to incriminate yourself with 'Hrrrumph'.

[liz1060]

ahh ... someone's life did depend on it -- lol.

[leftgreenthumb]

lol very true!

[ozjthomas]

Good one, DRC

[seekthevisceral]

I am in love with your pace, and how you emphasize certain words. I'm certain if you read the dictionary, I will be on the edge of my seat the entire time.

[DavidRandallCurtis]

@seekthevisceral That is quite a compliment! Thank you very much! :P

[controversialbook]

This was more than entertaining. I've tried everything to get Nancy to bend over backwards only to discover just now that all I had to do was pretend I give a shit about what she thinks. Damn! So simple, yet, so well camouflaged.

[DavidRandallCurtis]

@controversialbook LOL! :P

[leftysergeant]

BS only works so long and then it starts to smell. How many men live in fear of that moment?

Not me, bubba.

I had a good laugh over this one.

[yombotolompi]

I thought William Shakespesare would've really enjoyed your poem! I responded with a sonnett ofhis that breathes the same air.

[Amiduffer]

The title itself was humorous.

[IraqIsWhack]

*shakes fist at youtube* i didnt unsub but apparently i have to resub.. So now you have my attention and im not just saying that because you talked about it in the poem. LOL

[sonofwalt]

I love this! Great to hear you read again. Fun stuff.

[janeczka]

Brilliant!!if I may say so myself :p

[DavidRandallCurtis]

@janeczka What are you talking about? You didn't help me with this at all! *cough* :P

[kriskahn21]

Well done! :)