Nice job, Cory. My only suggestion is that you lighten up a bit on your ending lyrics. It sounded like you were forcing it a bit there. Apart from that (even being atheist), I still think it's a pretty decent song. Especially based on the fact that you wrote all the lyrics. You have some real talent on your hands.
I was singing like that at the end cause I wanted it to be more poweful singing, and I can see that I've deffinetely gotta work on that. Originally when we practiced it, we had used drums so the way I sang went more with it, but we went acoustic here and nobody told me, but thank you for the feedback anyways.
Nice job, Cory. My only suggestion is that you lighten up a bit on your ending lyrics. It sounded like you were forcing it a bit there. Apart from that (even being atheist), I still think it's a pretty decent song. Especially based on the fact that you wrote all the lyrics. You have some real talent on your hands.
lordoftheabyss 2 years ago
I was singing like that at the end cause I wanted it to be more poweful singing, and I can see that I've deffinetely gotta work on that. Originally when we practiced it, we had used drums so the way I sang went more with it, but we went acoustic here and nobody told me, but thank you for the feedback anyways.
thebocesman 2 years ago