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  • "The autumn grows more colder." Does it? Does it really? Lol. It needs a little work, and then it'll be really cool.

  • Wow, I'm not normally a person that enjoys poetry, but this one I like. And I'm surprised that it wasn't meant to be about Galadriel in its original intent - it fits her perfectly.

  • @EarendilTheBright

    Well that is exactly what I thought when I made the video. First I wrote the poem, and words just started to flow from my mind and afterwards when I recorded it I began thinking what images should I put in the video. After re-reading the poem several times I came to the conclusion that images of Galadriel would be absolutely perfect. Thank you for your great comment. It is always a pleasure to make someone like poetry if they didn't do so before.

  • wow

  • @Schnitterkind Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

  • I think I am going to translate this in elvish

  • @WatchmenDrManhattan I would love to hear this poem in elvish. Please go ahead and send me a video if you do, that would be great. Thank you.

  • This is amazing. Such a mature, strong-worded poem. It does remind me of Lord of the Rings, or even dark movies like Pan's Labyrinth. This is excellent, your quite talented. I feel like watching the movies all over again. XD

  • @Sosei345 Thank you. I am very pleased you enjoyed it.

  • *Came here expecting Galadriel rage*

    *Is disappoint*

  • @awakenedlink37

    Well if you had any brains at all you'd know that rage and despair are two different things.

  • Very creative and artistic, me like much. :)

  • You're a douche.

  • beautiful

  • yeeah Galadriel is the most powerfull of elfs, second is gil galad than elrond... but the strongets of all times is Feanor.....

  • I wish I was a musician, I'd give you a piece worthy of Galadriel herself and your beautiful voice. I'm not fond of poetry, my brain is light, shade and sound, deafening sounds, but you words got to me. Thanks for sharing them!

  • @solnegrolunaroja

    Thank you for your warm words and honesty. That was very nice to hear. Thank you again and best wishes to you.

  • the heck she's talking about..?

  • @AotearoaSoldier17 Probably best if you back to watching MT, you don't have the soul to comprehend it

  • @FireWhisp

    Thank you for liking my poem so much.

  • beautiful poem! thanks for sharing with us

    sad but beautiful

  • that voice has an accent, sounds gay!

  • Beautiful! I've always liked Galadriel. She's one of my favrote female characters of LOTR. Thanks for sharing this. I liked it alot.

  • share this or all day i negative

  • Very nicely done. Very Elven indeed. When I first started the vid, for a moment I thought this was Galadriel's farewell lament from the Return of The King novel.

    Great Galadriel voice impersonation also, btw ;)

  • Wats the music in the bg called?

  • simply beautiful, takes my breath away.... :)

  • I wish you wrot this sooner so maybe it could have made it into LOTR

  • Very beautifully written

  • watch?v=wNkC371hJig - The Best Fairy Artist EVER!

  • Very nicely done. Very haunting with the music of Lord of the Rings in the background. You kept very good time with the music in the background.

  • Thank you my friend, for your honest comment.

  • Hvala ti. Sorry, nisam prije mogla odg. :)

  • soon

  • I Know I shall fade, Willingly.....

  • Stunning!

    You wrote this?

    And the recitel left me awstruck!

    You are amazing!

  • Thank you so very much.

  • I just watched this video again. I love it. It was so sweet of you to write it for me.

    Richard

  • Thank you my friend. It is good to hear from you again.

  • very good!

  • Thank you very much. I couldn't have replied sooner. Thank you.

  • Wow! Amazing! I wish I would have wrote that my self. Thanks a lot!

  • Thank you. I appreciate it.

  • wow really really good. i love it

  • Thank you my friend.

  • I love your poem. <3 it's so beautiful.

    but I think it would be easier to understand (because I'm not English) if you could put the text into the video or at the side, so one can read it.

  • Hey, I'm sorry I couldn't have replied sooner. I'll take care of the text as soon as I'm able. I'm sorry again and thank you very much.

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  • youve been reported sam :) try hard as ye will.....those who know me know you, are not me lol, you fail :) and i laugh because ye are sad

  • Mystwicca (10 months ago)

    No, it was you shadow who started thi? one lol I watched ye do it and so did others, so deal with being mashed, as ye will be im sure, take it like a man

  • the leaves that wonta last...they fall to the bottom............

  • menkind are painful both in relationship or in simply watching thier ignorance as they continue to live that out

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  • i would not say that Galadriel`s eyes are blind, she is 1 of the best seers on Midle-Earth

  • That is true but this is a poem and sometimes we all think less of ourselves than what we truly are. Galadriel is a living legend in Middle-Earth but in my poem she doesn't see herself in the same way that others see her. It's a little hard to explain but thank you for your comment. I appreciate it.

  • i truly believe that you are right about Galadriel, given her history, the poem is very good, Ithank you for giving all the chance to hear it.

    please know i am touched by your words

  • I see that it has been four moths since your post. I didn't have a chance to reply until now. Thank you for your comment. I am very grateful.

  • your delivery of this is superb.

  • "No longer living, no longer dead. I am the mist..."

    Amazing.

    Beautifully written, and read, of course.

    So... haunting. Wonderful.

    Me has dejado sin palabras, qué bello (:

  • I'm so amazed by this. May I ask if this is an altered dramatic voice, or the way you actually sound? The accent is elusive, beautiful and mysterious. I cant be sure but your phraseology more colder suggests English may not be your first language. Your piece here is absolutely compelling and addictive.

  • Thank you very much for your truly wonderful compliments. My accent is something between Croatian and British English. Yes you were right, English is not my first language. I am Croatian. Thank you again so much.

  • You've seen the same things I've seen!

    Thank you much. Your body will one day be dust but you yourself shall not pass.

  • This is lovely, Lady: for three days I've returned to listen and shall listen longer still. I think your words are part of me now for all the days to come. Hauntingly well done.

  • This is a wonderful poem and I enjoyed it so much. Thank you.

  • this is real good

    love it

    your spoken voice to

    greets

    ender

  • amazing ..

  • I'm scared..

  • Why?

  • only joking. this is very good. poetry is the most beautiful & intelligent form of self expression.

    keep up the good work sweetheart!

  • Thank you. That is very sweet of you.

  • elle et vraiment superbe ta video bonne soiree

  • Merci beacoup!

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  • Wow!!...What an awesome video!!..Beautiful,and I love the poem!!...5*****:)-Great job!!...The music is lovely as well,Hauntingly,chilling!!..

  • And that is a wonderful comment! Thank you so very very much! I really appreciate your words! Thank you.

  • so cool vid!

  • Thank you so much!

  • Fantástico!!!

    *****

    Por favor, has cosas como esta.

    Saludos

    José Luis León, arpista.

  • Thank you so much my friend! Well I am really happy right now, thank you. I really appreciate it!

  • LOVE!!! ciao cara da YV:=):):)

  • Thank you so much my friend.

    Love and peace!

    Melodx

  • thanks for sharing Twirretwarre, beautiful poetry! Emily

  • Thank you so much for your lovely words and thanks to Roeleke too.

  • Oh my dear,so beautiful spoken in front of the beautiful background music,it gave me a sad feeling,oh so beautiful deep...a longing for...who knows...

  • Thank you very much. I am very happy you liked it. Thank you for your lovely comment!

  • Bravo!! very nice video MelodxKay and I like your poem,well done!!5 ***** Marc Jones Vocalist...Los Angeles,U.S.A.

  • Thank you so much my friend! I am so happy you like it.

  • Your welcome my lovely friend...Marc Jones U.S.A.

  • delicious!!

    Lloyd.

  • Thank you my friend. I appreciate it.

  • how impressed i am with this video.

    super job.

    michael

  • Thank you so much Michael! I really appreciate all of your wonderful support!

  • Although I'm a subscriber to your channel, I haven't seen everything you have to offer. With the many subscriptions I do have, I often only end up seeing the videos my friends share with me and Twirretwarre or Roeleke is the one who shared this with me. This was a very nice poem...5 stars for you!

    Peace!!

  • I'm in the same boat Jack...never enough time to look on my subscribers page.........

  • I know the feeling only to well but I really thank you for having the time to watch my video. It means a lot to me. Thank you.

  • it is well worth viewing...and more than once!

  • I left you a comment but for some reason it didn't come through but I want to say this again. Thank you so much for your lovely words. I really do understand your situation because I am in it also. I am very grateful to Roeleke also for sharing my video. I am so happy you watched it and liked it. I really appreciate your support. Thank you again!

    Peace and love

    Melodx

  • I did receive your 1st comment but sometimes YouTube is weird. I've commented on posts before and the original posts will vanish. I don't want the people to think that I've deleted their messages. But I really won't mind if you occasionally choose to share some of your own material with me. Sometimes that really is the easiest way to get me to see it.

    Peace!!

  • _./'\._¸¸.•¤**¤•.¸.•¤**¤•..•¤ **¤ •.¸.•¤**¤•..

    *•. .•* *, Beautiful video and beautiful poem !!!

    /.•*•.\ ¸..•¤**¤•.,.•¤**¤•.*.•¤**¤•.¸

  • Thank you so much for your lovely comment! I appreciate it a lot.

  • Wow. This is a very beautiful presentation of your poem, which is excellent!

  • Thank you so much my friend. It makes me very happy you liked it.

  • A Great poetry work, fascinating, spoken in a captivating manner that draws you in. Excellent. Thank you Mr Winchester for this superb share.

  • I can't thank you enough for such a wonderful comment. I really appreciate your kind words.

  • it's brillant !!!

  • Thank you! That is so nice of you.

  • Amazing!

    LaReina

  • Thank you LaReina! I really appreciate it.

  • este video e fantastico

    parabens amiga

    beijos

  • Thank you very much my friend.

  • Thanks Roeleke, great poetry...Mel

  • Thank you! And thanks to Roeleke too.

  • Beautiful video and beautiful poem !!!

    5*****

    Thanks for share Twirretwarre !!!

  • Thank you very much! And thanks to Roeleke too.

  • Wonderful poem and you read it beautifully,

    the atmosphere of the video suited it

    perfectly, thankyou Roeleke for the share

    5*....Barbara

  • Thank you so much Barbara, for your beautiful comment on my poem and my reading. I really appreciate all of your support. And thanks to Roeleke too for sharing my video.

    Best wishes

    Melodx

  • great video *****

  • thank you!

  • This is superb thanks to Roeleke for the share...Dee

  • Thank you so much! I appreciate it. And thanks to Roeleke too.

  • hermoso, bello¡¡¡

  • Thank you so much!

  • Wow, my dear friend, you are doing so fantastic! You are so creative,... it is everywhere in your videos! I am so proud of you, my friend!!!

    Roeleke

  • Dear Roeleke, thank you so much for sharing my video! And what a beautiful comment you have made also! Thank you a million times my friend! I really appreciate it.

  • Nice atmosfere , thanks to carlinhos to share this videos

  • Thank you so much! And thanks to Carlinhos too.

  • Beautiful and passionate. Very well written. When's your collection comming out?:)

  • Ah thank you my friend. You are so sweet. Well I guess you never know, I really might publish my poems some day. Thank you again.

    Love

    Melodx

  • Very nice work!

  • Thank you so much!

  • Beautifully Written And A Well Put Together Video...5+...;) Thanks MelodxKay For The Videos You Shared With Me!...;)

  • Thank you so much my dear friend. I really appreciate your awesome comment! Thank you!

  • Lovely poem, thanks for sharing MelodxKay! The words are reminiscent of Galadriel

  • Thank you! I am so happy you liked it and understood it. I am really grateful!

  • beautiful video and poem :).

  • Thank you very much!

  • Bautiful....fantastic poema and video thanks 5*

  • Thank you so very much for those lovely words!

  • Great poem and beautiful video. Five stars.

  • Thank you! I really appreciate it.

  • nice video

  • Thank you!

  • Muito bom!!!!!5*****

  • Thank you so much.

  • Dear sweet Melodx, I am speechless at this moment after seeing this beautiful video and hearing your amazing poem. Thank you so much for dedicating it to me. You are truly a genius and a wonderful friend. Richard

  • My dear friend, it is you and only you I have to thank. You have inspired me to write this poem so it is only right that I dedicate it to you. You are a great friend and great friends should always be cherished. I really hope you have enjoyed the poem, it is yours forever.

    Love

    Your friend Melodx

  • exelente*****

  • Thank you. I appreciate it.

  • so wonderfulllllll

  • Very touching!! Thanx Carlinhos for sharing!!

  • Thank you very much. And thanks to Carlinhos also!

  • Very beautiful!

  • Thank you my friend.

  • So beautiful!!! Hugs.Jan and Susan.x

  • Oh thank you so much, both of you! You're awesome!

  • Very good thank you for sharing,

  • Thank you I appreciate it.

  • Beautiful!

  • Thank you very much.

  • Great video Melody!

    A kiss and 5/5

    Gaby.

  • Thank you Gaby! That is so sweet of you!

  • Babe

    I am here again

    I can to hear your wonderful voice

    muaaaaaa

    hehehehe

    love you babe

    thanks for sharing XXMRWINCHESTERXX

    20********************

    muaaaaaaaaaa

    Carlinhos

  • It's good to see you back. You're awesome my friend!

  • very nice

  • Thank you my friend.

  • Excelent!!

    mis 5*****

  • awesome 'issy

  • Thank you!

  • That wa awesome, Is ther anything you can't do? 5/5

  • Thank you so very very much for that. Yes there is. I can't play any instruments. lol :)

  • Awesome !!!

    thanks for sharing..!!!5*****.

  • Thank you so much.

  • great work!!! 5 stars

    thanx xxmrwinchesterxx

    ***** paolo :)

  • Thank you so much again and thanks to xxmrwinchesterxx too

  • GREAT VIDEO

    DESERVES 5*

    THANKS!

  • Thank you! I am so glad you liked it.

  • friend you are awesome very nice thanks 5 stars

  • Thank you my friend. I appreciate it.

  • Absolutely beautiful!