Wow, I'm not normally a person that enjoys poetry, but this one I like. And I'm surprised that it wasn't meant to be about Galadriel in its original intent - it fits her perfectly.
Well that is exactly what I thought when I made the video. First I wrote the poem, and words just started to flow from my mind and afterwards when I recorded it I began thinking what images should I put in the video. After re-reading the poem several times I came to the conclusion that images of Galadriel would be absolutely perfect. Thank you for your great comment. It is always a pleasure to make someone like poetry if they didn't do so before.
This is amazing. Such a mature, strong-worded poem. It does remind me of Lord of the Rings, or even dark movies like Pan's Labyrinth. This is excellent, your quite talented. I feel like watching the movies all over again. XD
I wish I was a musician, I'd give you a piece worthy of Galadriel herself and your beautiful voice. I'm not fond of poetry, my brain is light, shade and sound, deafening sounds, but you words got to me. Thanks for sharing them!
Very nicely done. Very Elven indeed. When I first started the vid, for a moment I thought this was Galadriel's farewell lament from the Return of The King novel.
No, it was you shadow who started thi? one lol I watched ye do it and so did others, so deal with being mashed, as ye will be im sure, take it like a man
That is true but this is a poem and sometimes we all think less of ourselves than what we truly are. Galadriel is a living legend in Middle-Earth but in my poem she doesn't see herself in the same way that others see her. It's a little hard to explain but thank you for your comment. I appreciate it.
I'm so amazed by this. May I ask if this is an altered dramatic voice, or the way you actually sound? The accent is elusive, beautiful and mysterious. I cant be sure but your phraseology more colder suggests English may not be your first language. Your piece here is absolutely compelling and addictive.
Thank you very much for your truly wonderful compliments. My accent is something between Croatian and British English. Yes you were right, English is not my first language. I am Croatian. Thank you again so much.
This is lovely, Lady: for three days I've returned to listen and shall listen longer still. I think your words are part of me now for all the days to come. Hauntingly well done.
You can recite all your poems on my site "SoundLantern", we even have a channel type called "Poet", come check out SoundLantern i have the link on my channel, let me know what you think of SL
Oh my dear,so beautiful spoken in front of the beautiful background music,it gave me a sad feeling,oh so beautiful deep...a longing for...who knows...
Although I'm a subscriber to your channel, I haven't seen everything you have to offer. With the many subscriptions I do have, I often only end up seeing the videos my friends share with me and Twirretwarre or Roeleke is the one who shared this with me. This was a very nice poem...5 stars for you!
I left you a comment but for some reason it didn't come through but I want to say this again. Thank you so much for your lovely words. I really do understand your situation because I am in it also. I am very grateful to Roeleke also for sharing my video. I am so happy you watched it and liked it. I really appreciate your support. Thank you again!
I did receive your 1st comment but sometimes YouTube is weird. I've commented on posts before and the original posts will vanish. I don't want the people to think that I've deleted their messages. But I really won't mind if you occasionally choose to share some of your own material with me. Sometimes that really is the easiest way to get me to see it.
Thank you so much Barbara, for your beautiful comment on my poem and my reading. I really appreciate all of your support. And thanks to Roeleke too for sharing my video.
Dear Roeleke, thank you so much for sharing my video! And what a beautiful comment you have made also! Thank you a million times my friend! I really appreciate it.
Dear sweet Melodx, I am speechless at this moment after seeing this beautiful video and hearing your amazing poem. Thank you so much for dedicating it to me. You are truly a genius and a wonderful friend. Richard
My dear friend, it is you and only you I have to thank. You have inspired me to write this poem so it is only right that I dedicate it to you. You are a great friend and great friends should always be cherished. I really hope you have enjoyed the poem, it is yours forever.
"The autumn grows more colder." Does it? Does it really? Lol. It needs a little work, and then it'll be really cool.
MorwenTinuviel83 2 months ago
Wow, I'm not normally a person that enjoys poetry, but this one I like. And I'm surprised that it wasn't meant to be about Galadriel in its original intent - it fits her perfectly.
EarendilTheBright 3 months ago
@EarendilTheBright
Well that is exactly what I thought when I made the video. First I wrote the poem, and words just started to flow from my mind and afterwards when I recorded it I began thinking what images should I put in the video. After re-reading the poem several times I came to the conclusion that images of Galadriel would be absolutely perfect. Thank you for your great comment. It is always a pleasure to make someone like poetry if they didn't do so before.
MelodxKay 3 months ago
wow
Schnitterkind 3 months ago
@Schnitterkind Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
MelodxKay 3 months ago
I think I am going to translate this in elvish
WatchmenDrManhattan 3 months ago 2
@WatchmenDrManhattan I would love to hear this poem in elvish. Please go ahead and send me a video if you do, that would be great. Thank you.
MelodxKay 3 months ago
This is amazing. Such a mature, strong-worded poem. It does remind me of Lord of the Rings, or even dark movies like Pan's Labyrinth. This is excellent, your quite talented. I feel like watching the movies all over again. XD
Sosei345 3 months ago
@Sosei345 Thank you. I am very pleased you enjoyed it.
MelodxKay 3 months ago
*Came here expecting Galadriel rage*
*Is disappoint*
awakenedlink37 5 months ago 7
@awakenedlink37
Well if you had any brains at all you'd know that rage and despair are two different things.
MelodxKay 4 months ago
Very creative and artistic, me like much. :)
dk0money 8 months ago
You're a douche.
christadoesthings 9 months ago
beautiful
NaturesInstinct 11 months ago
yeeah Galadriel is the most powerfull of elfs, second is gil galad than elrond... but the strongets of all times is Feanor.....
Corleone649 11 months ago
I wish I was a musician, I'd give you a piece worthy of Galadriel herself and your beautiful voice. I'm not fond of poetry, my brain is light, shade and sound, deafening sounds, but you words got to me. Thanks for sharing them!
solnegrolunaroja 1 year ago
@solnegrolunaroja
Thank you for your warm words and honesty. That was very nice to hear. Thank you again and best wishes to you.
MelodxKay 1 year ago
the heck she's talking about..?
AotearoaSoldier17 1 year ago
@AotearoaSoldier17 Probably best if you back to watching MT, you don't have the soul to comprehend it
Essefen 11 months ago
@FireWhisp
Thank you for liking my poem so much.
MelodxKay 1 year ago
beautiful poem! thanks for sharing with us
sad but beautiful
johnnybgoodpt 1 year ago
that voice has an accent, sounds gay!
exv152 1 year ago
Beautiful! I've always liked Galadriel. She's one of my favrote female characters of LOTR. Thanks for sharing this. I liked it alot.
DannieTheElf 1 year ago
share this or all day i negative
Naomaisnomes 1 year ago
Very nicely done. Very Elven indeed. When I first started the vid, for a moment I thought this was Galadriel's farewell lament from the Return of The King novel.
Great Galadriel voice impersonation also, btw ;)
Syrinx69 1 year ago
Wats the music in the bg called?
nintendo4ever123 1 year ago
simply beautiful, takes my breath away.... :)
Volf99 1 year ago
I wish you wrot this sooner so maybe it could have made it into LOTR
SitBesideMe11 1 year ago
Very beautifully written
Volf99 1 year ago
watch?v=wNkC371hJig - The Best Fairy Artist EVER!
memoony 1 year ago
Very nicely done. Very haunting with the music of Lord of the Rings in the background. You kept very good time with the music in the background.
CuteGallifreyian 1 year ago
Thank you my friend, for your honest comment.
MelodxKay 1 year ago
Hvala ti. Sorry, nisam prije mogla odg. :)
MelodxKay 1 year ago
soon
MystSilverDragon 1 year ago
I Know I shall fade, Willingly.....
MystSilverDragon 1 year ago
Stunning!
You wrote this?
And the recitel left me awstruck!
You are amazing!
ClubGirlPower 1 year ago
Thank you so very much.
MelodxKay 1 year ago
I just watched this video again. I love it. It was so sweet of you to write it for me.
Richard
dzander100 1 year ago
Thank you my friend. It is good to hear from you again.
MelodxKay 1 year ago
very good!
LaurensA9 2 years ago 4
Thank you very much. I couldn't have replied sooner. Thank you.
MelodxKay 1 year ago
Wow! Amazing! I wish I would have wrote that my self. Thanks a lot!
locopaulito1 2 years ago 2
Thank you. I appreciate it.
MelodxKay 1 year ago
wow really really good. i love it
kiko20082001 2 years ago
Thank you my friend.
MelodxKay 1 year ago
I love your poem. <3 it's so beautiful.
but I think it would be easier to understand (because I'm not English) if you could put the text into the video or at the side, so one can read it.
JESUSfreak734 2 years ago
Hey, I'm sorry I couldn't have replied sooner. I'll take care of the text as soon as I'm able. I'm sorry again and thank you very much.
MelodxKay 1 year ago
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MystSilverDragon 2 years ago
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MystSilverDragon 2 years ago
youve been reported sam :) try hard as ye will.....those who know me know you, are not me lol, you fail :) and i laugh because ye are sad
MystSilverDragon 2 years ago
Mystwicca (10 months ago)
No, it was you shadow who started thi? one lol I watched ye do it and so did others, so deal with being mashed, as ye will be im sure, take it like a man
MystSliverDragon 2 years ago
the leaves that wonta last...they fall to the bottom............
MystSilverDragon 2 years ago
menkind are painful both in relationship or in simply watching thier ignorance as they continue to live that out
MystSilverDragon 2 years ago
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MystSilverDragon 2 years ago
i would not say that Galadriel`s eyes are blind, she is 1 of the best seers on Midle-Earth
jewish1972 2 years ago
That is true but this is a poem and sometimes we all think less of ourselves than what we truly are. Galadriel is a living legend in Middle-Earth but in my poem she doesn't see herself in the same way that others see her. It's a little hard to explain but thank you for your comment. I appreciate it.
MelodxKay 2 years ago
i truly believe that you are right about Galadriel, given her history, the poem is very good, Ithank you for giving all the chance to hear it.
please know i am touched by your words
comradeinjun 2 years ago
I see that it has been four moths since your post. I didn't have a chance to reply until now. Thank you for your comment. I am very grateful.
MelodxKay 1 year ago
your delivery of this is superb.
irgy709 2 years ago
"No longer living, no longer dead. I am the mist..."
Amazing.
Beautifully written, and read, of course.
So... haunting. Wonderful.
Me has dejado sin palabras, qué bello (:
soypedofrito 2 years ago 2
I'm so amazed by this. May I ask if this is an altered dramatic voice, or the way you actually sound? The accent is elusive, beautiful and mysterious. I cant be sure but your phraseology more colder suggests English may not be your first language. Your piece here is absolutely compelling and addictive.
BruleSpearSlayer 2 years ago
Thank you very much for your truly wonderful compliments. My accent is something between Croatian and British English. Yes you were right, English is not my first language. I am Croatian. Thank you again so much.
MelodxKay 2 years ago
You've seen the same things I've seen!
Thank you much. Your body will one day be dust but you yourself shall not pass.
BruleSpearSlayer 2 years ago
This is lovely, Lady: for three days I've returned to listen and shall listen longer still. I think your words are part of me now for all the days to come. Hauntingly well done.
BruleSpearSlayer 2 years ago
This is a wonderful poem and I enjoyed it so much. Thank you.
nimperiale 2 years ago
this is real good
love it
your spoken voice to
greets
ender
sevenender 2 years ago
amazing ..
honest143 2 years ago
I'm scared..
shiki5876 3 years ago
Why?
MelodxKay 3 years ago
only joking. this is very good. poetry is the most beautiful & intelligent form of self expression.
keep up the good work sweetheart!
shiki5876 3 years ago
Thank you. That is very sweet of you.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
elle et vraiment superbe ta video bonne soiree
FRIPFRIP2 3 years ago
Merci beacoup!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
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You can recite all your poems on my site "SoundLantern", we even have a channel type called "Poet", come check out SoundLantern i have the link on my channel, let me know what you think of SL
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MelodxKay 3 years ago
Wow!!...What an awesome video!!..Beautiful,and I love the poem!!...5*****:)-Great job!!...The music is lovely as well,Hauntingly,chilling!!..
kandixoxo 3 years ago
And that is a wonderful comment! Thank you so very very much! I really appreciate your words! Thank you.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
so cool vid!
EtaForsaken 3 years ago
Thank you so much!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Fantástico!!!
*****
Por favor, has cosas como esta.
Saludos
José Luis León, arpista.
arpajlleon 3 years ago
Thank you so much my friend! Well I am really happy right now, thank you. I really appreciate it!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
LOVE!!! ciao cara da YV:=):):)
xyzk54 3 years ago
Thank you so much my friend.
Love and peace!
Melodx
MelodxKay 3 years ago
thanks for sharing Twirretwarre, beautiful poetry! Emily
emilyemilianapoli 3 years ago
Thank you so much for your lovely words and thanks to Roeleke too.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Oh my dear,so beautiful spoken in front of the beautiful background music,it gave me a sad feeling,oh so beautiful deep...a longing for...who knows...
HermanHanauer 3 years ago
Thank you very much. I am very happy you liked it. Thank you for your lovely comment!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Bravo!! very nice video MelodxKay and I like your poem,well done!!5 ***** Marc Jones Vocalist...Los Angeles,U.S.A.
glennmach 3 years ago
Thank you so much my friend! I am so happy you like it.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Your welcome my lovely friend...Marc Jones U.S.A.
glennmach 3 years ago
delicious!!
Lloyd.
VideosToEnjoy 3 years ago
Thank you my friend. I appreciate it.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
how impressed i am with this video.
super job.
michael
mettanc 3 years ago
Thank you so much Michael! I really appreciate all of your wonderful support!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Although I'm a subscriber to your channel, I haven't seen everything you have to offer. With the many subscriptions I do have, I often only end up seeing the videos my friends share with me and Twirretwarre or Roeleke is the one who shared this with me. This was a very nice poem...5 stars for you!
Peace!!
MrJackGrayson 3 years ago
I'm in the same boat Jack...never enough time to look on my subscribers page.........
tps607 3 years ago
I know the feeling only to well but I really thank you for having the time to watch my video. It means a lot to me. Thank you.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
it is well worth viewing...and more than once!
tps607 3 years ago
I left you a comment but for some reason it didn't come through but I want to say this again. Thank you so much for your lovely words. I really do understand your situation because I am in it also. I am very grateful to Roeleke also for sharing my video. I am so happy you watched it and liked it. I really appreciate your support. Thank you again!
Peace and love
Melodx
MelodxKay 3 years ago
I did receive your 1st comment but sometimes YouTube is weird. I've commented on posts before and the original posts will vanish. I don't want the people to think that I've deleted their messages. But I really won't mind if you occasionally choose to share some of your own material with me. Sometimes that really is the easiest way to get me to see it.
Peace!!
MrJackGrayson 3 years ago
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*•. .•* *, Beautiful video and beautiful poem !!!
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bennystropical 3 years ago
Thank you so much for your lovely comment! I appreciate it a lot.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Wow. This is a very beautiful presentation of your poem, which is excellent!
ChickPandG 3 years ago
Thank you so much my friend. It makes me very happy you liked it.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
A Great poetry work, fascinating, spoken in a captivating manner that draws you in. Excellent. Thank you Mr Winchester for this superb share.
Grumpyoldmantrash 3 years ago
I can't thank you enough for such a wonderful comment. I really appreciate your kind words.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
it's brillant !!!
pearljamgirl08 3 years ago
Thank you! That is so nice of you.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Amazing!
LaReina
LaReinaDelBarrio 3 years ago
Thank you LaReina! I really appreciate it.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
este video e fantastico
parabens amiga
beijos
fredalbano 3 years ago
Thank you very much my friend.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Thanks Roeleke, great poetry...Mel
amazongift 3 years ago
Thank you! And thanks to Roeleke too.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Beautiful video and beautiful poem !!!
5*****
Thanks for share Twirretwarre !!!
Tadek59 3 years ago
Thank you very much! And thanks to Roeleke too.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Wonderful poem and you read it beautifully,
the atmosphere of the video suited it
perfectly, thankyou Roeleke for the share
5*....Barbara
Rumpep 3 years ago
Thank you so much Barbara, for your beautiful comment on my poem and my reading. I really appreciate all of your support. And thanks to Roeleke too for sharing my video.
Best wishes
Melodx
MelodxKay 3 years ago
great video *****
jovix79 3 years ago
thank you!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
This is superb thanks to Roeleke for the share...Dee
seniorsite 3 years ago
Thank you so much! I appreciate it. And thanks to Roeleke too.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
hermoso, bello¡¡¡
luchadora10 3 years ago
Thank you so much!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Wow, my dear friend, you are doing so fantastic! You are so creative,... it is everywhere in your videos! I am so proud of you, my friend!!!
Roeleke
Twirretwarre 3 years ago
Dear Roeleke, thank you so much for sharing my video! And what a beautiful comment you have made also! Thank you a million times my friend! I really appreciate it.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Nice atmosfere , thanks to carlinhos to share this videos
yovideomaker 3 years ago
Thank you so much! And thanks to Carlinhos too.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Beautiful and passionate. Very well written. When's your collection comming out?:)
Polarbong 3 years ago
Ah thank you my friend. You are so sweet. Well I guess you never know, I really might publish my poems some day. Thank you again.
Love
Melodx
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Very nice work!
HellenicMagic 3 years ago
Thank you so much!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Beautifully Written And A Well Put Together Video...5+...;) Thanks MelodxKay For The Videos You Shared With Me!...;)
cherrysherry333 3 years ago
Thank you so much my dear friend. I really appreciate your awesome comment! Thank you!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Lovely poem, thanks for sharing MelodxKay! The words are reminiscent of Galadriel
RLSguitar 3 years ago
Thank you! I am so happy you liked it and understood it. I am really grateful!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
beautiful video and poem :).
cabbitness1983 3 years ago
Thank you very much!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Bautiful....fantastic poema and video thanks 5*
hanjacmac 3 years ago
Thank you so very much for those lovely words!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Great poem and beautiful video. Five stars.
milkywayspot 3 years ago
Thank you! I really appreciate it.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
nice video
solcito138 3 years ago
Thank you!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Muito bom!!!!!5*****
orwille 3 years ago
Thank you so much.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Dear sweet Melodx, I am speechless at this moment after seeing this beautiful video and hearing your amazing poem. Thank you so much for dedicating it to me. You are truly a genius and a wonderful friend. Richard
dzander100 3 years ago
My dear friend, it is you and only you I have to thank. You have inspired me to write this poem so it is only right that I dedicate it to you. You are a great friend and great friends should always be cherished. I really hope you have enjoyed the poem, it is yours forever.
Love
Your friend Melodx
MelodxKay 3 years ago
exelente*****
agucamisofi 3 years ago
Thank you. I appreciate it.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
so wonderfulllllll
albamaria54 3 years ago
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Thank you very much.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Very touching!! Thanx Carlinhos for sharing!!
monicacm79 3 years ago
Thank you very much. And thanks to Carlinhos also!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Very beautiful!
Djunisijevic 3 years ago
Thank you my friend.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
So beautiful!!! Hugs.Jan and Susan.x
weeyin1155 3 years ago
Oh thank you so much, both of you! You're awesome!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Very good thank you for sharing,
slmwv34 3 years ago
Thank you I appreciate it.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Beautiful!
Gaviota42 3 years ago
Thank you very much.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Great video Melody!
A kiss and 5/5
Gaby.
pili2255 3 years ago
Thank you Gaby! That is so sweet of you!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Babe
I am here again
I can to hear your wonderful voice
muaaaaaa
hehehehe
love you babe
thanks for sharing XXMRWINCHESTERXX
20********************
muaaaaaaaaaa
Carlinhos
Carlinhos271980 3 years ago
It's good to see you back. You're awesome my friend!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
very nice
latipax 3 years ago
Thank you my friend.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Excelent!!
mis 5*****
TuAromaCafe 3 years ago
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Thank you so much.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
awesome 'issy
isthatmusicicanhear2 3 years ago
Thank you!
MelodxKay 3 years ago
That wa awesome, Is ther anything you can't do? 5/5
alwaysbearfoot 3 years ago
Thank you so very very much for that. Yes there is. I can't play any instruments. lol :)
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Awesome !!!
thanks for sharing..!!!5*****.
Feelings64 3 years ago
Thank you so much.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
great work!!! 5 stars
thanx xxmrwinchesterxx
***** paolo :)
paradisonewfs 3 years ago
Thank you so much again and thanks to xxmrwinchesterxx too
MelodxKay 3 years ago
GREAT VIDEO
DESERVES 5*
THANKS!
selvojr 3 years ago
Thank you! I am so glad you liked it.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
friend you are awesome very nice thanks 5 stars
xxmrwinchesterxx 3 years ago
Thank you my friend. I appreciate it.
MelodxKay 3 years ago
Absolutely beautiful!
WitchesSky 3 years ago