Lost? Coldplay Chris Martin Competition - with Steven Tocher (Story boarding) - I LOVE CLOCKS

[yagodowa]

Steven this is absolutely beautiful

[Tocher35Productions]

@yagodowa Thanks a lot :)

[peas182]

if you were able to make my eyes tear with a 5 minute video on you tube, i cant imagine what great impacts you can make with your future successes.

looks like you're on the right path :)

[Tocher35Productions]

@peas182 Thanks if you want to add me to facebook! "Steven S Tocher"! You seem like a person I need around me :) Where do you live and how long have you enjoyed coldplay!

[peas182]

@Tocher35Productions haha cool well i tried adding you but i wasnt quite sure which one was yours. so uh.. haha. i dont know if i should give you mine.. you know, public website i guess.. well i live in chicago. :) and i have enjoyed colplay since i was...... 15?.. muahaha you dont know my age

[Tocher35Productions]

@peas182 Right on Steven S Tocher under people I am the guy wearing the suit with the sunglasses :) LOL I am guessing your 23 :)

[Tocher35Productions]

@peas182 @peas182 Right on Steven S Tocher under people I am the guy wearing the suit with the sunglasses :) LOL I am guessing your 23 :)

[peas182]

@Tocher35Productions haha

unfortunately, i wish i was 23... =/

[Tocher35Productions]

@peas182 Steven S Tocher if you want to add me to facebook :) when did you first start loving coldplay?

[peas182]

hahaha.

that would be the day the world will become colorful again.

[Tocher35Productions]

@peas182 thank you again for your kind words! I am a christain, and don't get me wrong that word is stained with a lot of terrible stuff, but at the end of the day its about loving people and helping and I hope one day through film to do just that! I have finished 5 feature scripts shooting one this year and have about 25 other features i want to shoot :) I hope to be a man of impact in the future :)

[peas182]

why would any of you want to have this video edited?..

its an amazing video!

And it only works if you have an amazing imagination.

love the sketch of chris!!!

amazing! ^.^

[Tocher35Productions]

@peas182 thanks a lot for the comment :) I am hoping that as I get older I allow my childlike imagination to take over :) your very kind :)

[Tocher35Productions]

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[brittanyxocoldplay]

nice (:

[Tocher35Productions]

Thank you very much!

[1makes1]

I think it's an amazing story and deep

[Tocher35Productions]

Thank you sir!

[Digthemovie]

You know God also said he wanted to see the video without the crappy commentary.

[MIAthing]

yeah He told me the same

[Octoberfilm]

Images speak louder than words. Your images don't speak at all though and that's obviously why you had to narrate over a song in a video competition. Think again but think a little longer, maybe a little harder and maybe you'll have a creative thought at some point.

[zbrother080808]

dude you should post this again with out the commentary, cant really hear the song

[Tocher35Productions]

Thanks for the comment. Glad I could get a interesting point of view accross have a great day. God Bless.

[keysle]

a lot of "umf" thought went into this

[SMTunit]

Great video! :-)

[Tocher35Productions]

Thank you have a great day.

[barnhutchman]

this isnt good. at all. you are all over the place. listen to your shit properly and you will realize you don't even know what you're talkin about cos you are talking about aboslutely nothing. 'Scientific or spiritually gifted'? doesnt make any fucking sense

[Tocher35Productions]

Thanks for your comment. I am glad I invoked emotion from you have a great day and thanks for watching.

[barnhutchman]

...also stop acting like ure being persucuted with your 'nice' responses . you ain't jesus.

the idea is horrible no matter how many times you say 'god bless you'

[mcbigmoney]

Fucking awesome. Well thought out, and um, humanist.

[irtrisha92]

That was so cool. XD

[OJH01]

This is way too convoluted as a concept... mipdir is on the right page... this would make no sense as a music video. You need some real criticism if you're ever to improve... friends aren't going to tell you if your work is lacking, but they should

[Tocher35Productions]

Thats kool thanks for the comment. I agree real criticism is needed. I will get better and improve, sadly these comments aren't from friends except one. So I guess your presumption of my friends leaving comments and the idea being convoluted speaks of who I should be listening to. As a music video it would work 100% sadly once again its story boards. But like I said before I need criticism I just wish you didn't try to attack my friends who have given me more then enough criticism.

[Tocher35Productions]

Thanks again though I see what your saying overall. With the concept I just don't agree since its a story board. Have a great day God bless. Later.

[OJH01]

Sure, that's fine you disagree, I wouldn't really expect anything differently. I was in no way trying to "attack your friends" and you've just told me only one comment was from a "friend", so why you would state something like that is beyond me. I'm just giving you an honest opinion. If you want a chance to win, you may want to go back to the drawing board.

[OJH01]

I'm sure you're aware, but essentially the whole point of a storyboard is to represent your planned shots with minimal directions and dialogue. The fact that you need to explain your idea in a full-fledged audio commentary only proves it's overly complex nature.

[sailabonkie12]

I thought ur vid was awesome. it kinda went with the song but i wasn't even thinking about the song, i was thinking about ur unerverse! its sooo cool, i'm gonna send it too some friends!

[vily1977]

Bueno, no esta mal. Mira el mio y me dices que tal! Suerte

[Tocher35Productions]

Me gusta el blanco y negro para el vídeo. Su general un buen concepto. Creo que la gente disfrute de ella. Dios los bendiga.

[aznofwar]

man ur definately gonna win

[Tocher35Productions]

Thanks I hope so to. All in Gods hands right :)

[san4peace]

I think this video totally encapsulates the song. Fantastic Idea! I hope you win! :)

[Tocher35Productions]

Thank you for your comment. I really am happy people are enjoying it.

[Tocher35Productions]

Thanks for the comment. I like how I did it, I am glad you would have got it either way. But like I said before ITS A STORY BOARD.

[Tocher35Productions]

Sorry I thought about what I said it was hasty. Thank you again for your comment and to a degree your right. I am thankful for your cretic. Have a good and Godly day.

[mlpdlr]

Why not, but if you have to explain it, it means your animation doesn't mean anything. Because without explanations, we can't understand anything.

[madeinchinaseeen]

i love it toch!

[Tocher35Productions]

Thank you. Who is this lol...?

[ferfloresgon91]

hey your video is very good, i really liked the begining( after the song starts)... look at mine and tell me what you think, thanks

[Tocher35Productions]

Right on thanks. I am glad people are able to watch it from all over the world. I will check yours out.

[IR0CKem]

Steven It is rock bands like Coldplay and people like you who keep the world sane and beautiful. My own video was blown away by a third DWI, LOST became an understatement. Your video puts it all in persepctive and saves the day, or shall I say mankind.

[Tocher35Productions]

Thank you for the kind words. My only hope is that people are entertained and touched. May the healing process be a speedy and uplifting one. Thank you again, and I hope to continue to help people.

[themarfu]

Yeah good story/concept. Well done for getting across your understanding of how things work. I like how the idea fits with the song.

[Tocher35Productions]

Thank you... I hope that people are helped through the idea.

[realimaginatn]

wow. i really like it. i love the idea of the colours seperating, and all this is still in God's hand. nice last word there of how we need to take some time to mourn. thanks for that :)

[Tocher35Productions]

Your welcome. Its all God's idea's through me I am just happy to help anyone. Even one person :).