I love your voice! Its so poetic. I love it :) anyway I find it creepy that so many people keep commenting about her being a pornstar or looking/acting like a pornstar haha
My suggestion is to check out all the originals you can on youtube and look at structure. See if you can find a pattern. It may help to study how people make songs and then just go for it. Don't give up. :) Good luck!
ok, obviously you dont know music cause thats an ok song, hard to sing, doesnt flow, but its AMAZING poetry, my advice is post it as a poem and make money off it
The contest was over a while back so I'm not posting anymore vids on it. But I did listen to what you played. You just keep playing and I'll keep writing. =D
I'm sorry, but to be perfectly honest it sounds a little cliche. That is, however, what most people in the music industry do nowadays, is make vague statements that generalize about love. I would personally urge you to challenge yourself and make a song about a different topic because 99% of all music that was ever created was made about "love." Think outside of the box.
I'm sorry, but to be blunt: How are you a writer? That was just a barrage of clichés. If that was all it took to be a writer, every high school kid that has ever written a diary would be a writer as well.
i agree. very cliche. how long have you been writing? it sounds like some kid who cuts himself attempted to write deep lyrics. it.. doesnt really appeal to me.
Probably easier if I write lyrics and you figure out the song. Let's chat a bit and see what you've got and what you like to play. It should help figure out what I can work with you on. ;)
i write lyrics and lking for a partner to write thwe music but u cant ask them to do it for nothing thats theft im offering half of the complete song if anyones interested btw add mymusicseld(at)hotmail(dot)co(dot)uk
MontanTny most definatley is the best i listened to all the responses...Mountan Tny you have a wonderful voice and you are a great guitar player....honestley i think you could win american idol....lol....but hey..follow your dreams...but if you ever think about american idol...make sure you say I inspired you lol =]
Thank you very much Sandra! But I think I´m not good enough for American Idol;) I don´t even live in the USA^^Here in Germany we have some kind of the same show, but it sucks... The people there become a so called "Superstar", make one song and then you never ever hear of them again.. But maybe some day I´ll go to the US and try it;)
I definitely think you could do it. Maybe if you go on Superstar, it's an instant casting on American Idol. I used to watch Superstar when I lived in Germany. :D
:D Great! Thanks for letting me know what you think. Soon, I'll have the winner announcement video posted. Working on avid right now..first time. yikes.
I like the way you read it. Reading naked must have helped because you sounded 'naked' in the good way. I don't write music either, just thought your reading is wonderful
Hey I see I got some good competition! I hope I'm in time with borrowing the video camera (and I hope I don't discover that I suck, I never seriously recorded myself before...)
Well I've basically composed the song for guitar. Because I'm not the best player I will have to work hard on being able to perform and sing it, I hope I will succeed. Also I don't have a videocamera yet, maybe I can borrow/buy one somewhere :P
The project (in its entirety [so check with the already added artists]) should also be considered 'Open Content' on some simple 'Open Licence'.
That is, everything involved in the project (all lyrical, musical, video, production, anything) is free to be used, distributed, changed, etc... as long as proper credit for the parts is given. [or some kind of thing like that]
I loved it. :D Any ideas for a prize? I was thinking a video mixed...I make a video with actors et al, and use video clips of you as well as your soundtrack in the bg. Thoughts?
We'll see what happens with the date. They're my lyrics(you made some adjustments and others will, too)...so, I'm looking for someone to make the music for the lyrics, you see what I mean?
No, no...woman can and should participate too...and hey, if other people want to record naked, by all means...go for it-makes it all more fun for me! Woman and men are both welcome.
Sounds like an interesting tasks. I had to pick up the guitar and give it a whirl. Think I might have something but need some time to work it out. I've got a few things on the burner right now. I hope many people take on the challenge. Will be cool!
Awesome Greg! I can't wait to see what you come up with. I noticed that your wife inspired another song (maybe more) of yours... :D Maybe she can be your muse once again. ;) I'm thinking end it on March 31. Your thoughts?
"Your voice swims in my head.
Images of you dance in my heart."
my favorite lines
this is very - built for melody :o)
now that you have a musician hubby you can write plenty of great songs together :o)
and yeah - very beautiful eyes
MagicalSunrise1984 4 months ago
I love your voice! Its so poetic. I love it :) anyway I find it creepy that so many people keep commenting about her being a pornstar or looking/acting like a pornstar haha
kvglenn1 6 months ago
@kvglenn1 Thanks for that! I've read a few more poems if you look on my playlist you can find them, should you want to... :) Thanks again.
aleishar 6 months ago
I wrote lyrics too, u can find them on my page. Nobody has yet to but them to music.
HyperKidGirl 2 years ago
I'm beyond late from discovering this, but I'd love to share an idea, nonetheless.
RhythmOfTheKnight 2 years ago
song lyrics are not the same as poems
peterthesongman 2 years ago
When you talk it sounds like someone is pouring a glass of water.
submission5000 2 years ago
is this chick a pornstar or something, she gave me a major boner. I feel like I should give this chick some money.
submission5000 2 years ago
lol. Thanks, I guess. You can send the check in care of my fiance...we could use it for our wedding. :P hehe. ;-)
aleishar 2 years ago
wow thats good i found a way to sing it but i have no way to show you
cha102640 3 years ago
did u ever get any one to put music to these lyrics?????????? plz get back to me XD ty
shadrain1010 3 years ago
Yes, check out my playlists. I have one for musicians who wrote songs to my lyrics. :D You will really enjoy them. :)
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I'll write you music for your lyrics if you show something like your boobs. Hey, i'll even throw a few hints on how to write a song lyrics.
isapare 3 years ago
I make music and can't write lyrics. Whenever I try the song falls apart and I give up.
Neanderthalcouzin 3 years ago
My suggestion is to check out all the originals you can on youtube and look at structure. See if you can find a pattern. It may help to study how people make songs and then just go for it. Don't give up. :) Good luck!
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it's a nice lyrics by the way.
OraSeratta 3 years ago
thanks! =)
aleishar 3 years ago
this taste of my fever breaks through into my hand.
Just to touch your satin skin, so softly, i can understand.
To take you to world never seen is not what I planned.
But the danger of having something like you I'm bound to never have..... :D
xoxvolleyxox42 3 years ago
hey , i id a version of your ong but i can post a video response. i know its over, but its just for fun ;D
perryjw 3 years ago
ok, obviously you dont know music cause thats an ok song, hard to sing, doesnt flow, but its AMAZING poetry, my advice is post it as a poem and make money off it
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effects69 3 years ago
I thought of music but not making a video for you! Because if you get famous you will get the credit!
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pcgshow 3 years ago
turn the volume up lol thats what it's for
effects69 3 years ago
ummm i think you should b a poetry writter but ur really good at waht you do and good luck :D :) :D
galerians2300 3 years ago
she is a poetry writter as well ;)
effects69 3 years ago
hey this is xaina ! ya you dont really know me but .. ya ! but can i write my own lyrics and put it in your contest ??? :) :D
xainarocks 3 years ago
My advice is make your own video and recite your lyrics and ask musicians to compose music for them. Good luck! ;-)
aleishar 3 years ago
cool ty
xainarocks 3 years ago
Those are good lyrics they would also make a good poem
kittttttttttt 3 years ago
thanks. I do have some poetry if you'd like to listen. :D
aleishar 3 years ago
can we use those lyics with out the contest running
gorms14 3 years ago
No. I'm sorry. The prizes for the winning music and song included the exclusive use.
aleishar 3 years ago
is it supposed to be rock music; or what genre?
dogpuppy40 4 years ago
this contest ended already. We had a lot of video responses which were really great. Check em out. =D
aleishar 4 years ago
I love your voice and the way you talk, it´s so mellow!
ScarletFairy 4 years ago
Obrigada Gaby. =D
aleishar 4 years ago
Great writing however I'm in your same boat with background music hahaha!
horsegal23415 4 years ago
Yeah, that's understood. However, youtube is such a wonderful talent pool. I'm sure you'll discover someone to collab with. :D
aleishar 4 years ago
damn this thang is like a freeking poem girl!
hannahsnumba1fannah 4 years ago
Hehe, yeah. Have you read my other poetry? =D
aleishar 4 years ago
not yet soon i will..
CandyCoatedCupcakes 4 years ago
woohoo! ;D
aleishar 4 years ago
im gunna post a video of A SONg i wrote a few days ago and i could change it up a bit for the song and u can use it for free
pimpmypiano 4 years ago
The contest was over a while back so I'm not posting anymore vids on it. But I did listen to what you played. You just keep playing and I'll keep writing. =D
aleishar 4 years ago
your words are so deep....im a writer too..!
lanedeg 4 years ago
Thanks Lane. =) Keep it up. It's a wonderful, invigorating thing. :D
aleishar 4 years ago
I'm sorry, but to be perfectly honest it sounds a little cliche. That is, however, what most people in the music industry do nowadays, is make vague statements that generalize about love. I would personally urge you to challenge yourself and make a song about a different topic because 99% of all music that was ever created was made about "love." Think outside of the box.
sickpsyche 4 years ago
Hi!
Your lyrics are pretty good :)
Ive just put a video up of a song ive been working on but i dont have any lyrics. If you or anyone is interested, could you write me some lyrics?
Thanks Chick
AbbeyStyles90 4 years ago
Hey Babe, how ya doin' with your music? ;D
aleishar 4 years ago
babe al produce a track or do a instrumental and rap it is that good enouth?
deejaystyle1 4 years ago
Of course, you are welcome to try it out to a rap and send it to me. :) The contest is over though.
aleishar 4 years ago
is she naked????__<>
darkstar245 4 years ago 2
yep, i was.
aleishar 4 years ago
I'm sorry, but to be blunt: How are you a writer? That was just a barrage of clichés. If that was all it took to be a writer, every high school kid that has ever written a diary would be a writer as well.
quathar 4 years ago
i agree. very cliche. how long have you been writing? it sounds like some kid who cuts himself attempted to write deep lyrics. it.. doesnt really appeal to me.
laurenlikespie 4 years ago
get a boy friend!
EVERLAZT 4 years ago
YOU LOOK MADD DUM IN THIZ VID3O!!
immalozer15 4 years ago
what style of music do you want to ure lyrics?
JacobDatz 4 years ago
This is actually the first contest. I have a new one posted and it can be any style. :)
aleishar 4 years ago
can u give me the link to the new one please then ill give it my best
JacobDatz 4 years ago
what a perv
funnybunnybum 4 years ago
Grats on being on the audio prophecy show, I can't wait for contest number 2!
SlowStrider 4 years ago
thanks. :)
aleishar 4 years ago
Great idea, even though the date is over I may have to try this, I'm always up for a songwriting excercise when I've got time
CasualDaveDotCom 4 years ago
Cool Dave. But if you're up for something new, hit me up. :D
aleishar 4 years ago
the lyrics are o.k but not exactly.... original?
lessthanthreeband 4 years ago
yes original.
aleishar 4 years ago
ha i make the music but i suck at writing :)
bjornpellens 4 years ago
that's ok. get a lyricist. :D
aleishar 4 years ago
if i send u a video of me playing a song i wrote can u make lyrics for it
lilcarmelo25 4 years ago
Probably easier if I write lyrics and you figure out the song. Let's chat a bit and see what you've got and what you like to play. It should help figure out what I can work with you on. ;)
aleishar 4 years ago
i write lyrics and lking for a partner to write thwe music but u cant ask them to do it for nothing thats theft im offering half of the complete song if anyones interested btw add mymusicseld(at)hotmail(dot)co(dot)uk
TDementedAngel 4 years ago
MontanTny most definatley is the best i listened to all the responses...Mountan Tny you have a wonderful voice and you are a great guitar player....honestley i think you could win american idol....lol....but hey..follow your dreams...but if you ever think about american idol...make sure you say I inspired you lol =]
sandraissexy 4 years ago
Thanks Sandra. Just in case you didn't, make sure you post a comment to him on his video. I'm sure he'll appreciate your kind words. :D
aleishar 4 years ago
Thank you very much Sandra! But I think I´m not good enough for American Idol;) I don´t even live in the USA^^Here in Germany we have some kind of the same show, but it sucks... The people there become a so called "Superstar", make one song and then you never ever hear of them again.. But maybe some day I´ll go to the US and try it;)
MontanTny 4 years ago
I definitely think you could do it. Maybe if you go on Superstar, it's an instant casting on American Idol. I used to watch Superstar when I lived in Germany. :D
aleishar 4 years ago
motanTny is my favorite...he gets my vote~!
skmisscalculator 4 years ago
:D Great! Thanks for letting me know what you think. Soon, I'll have the winner announcement video posted. Working on avid right now..first time. yikes.
aleishar 4 years ago
Thanks;)
MontanTny 4 years ago
I'm going to post my video right now! Am I still in time :-)?
SlowStrider 4 years ago
Yes, do it. :D
aleishar 4 years ago
I like the way you read it. Reading naked must have helped because you sounded 'naked' in the good way. I don't write music either, just thought your reading is wonderful
sistaspooky1013 4 years ago
Thank you sistaspooky1013. :D Yeah, I guess naked is not always good. lol.
aleishar 4 years ago
I liked the way Aleisha read it, so here is my spin on it.
Every submission is great! I look forward to seeing more!
carzynj 5 years ago
Yeah, it's really an interesting and creative version, thank you. Like I said to you before, you should compose for films.
aleishar 5 years ago
Hey I see I got some good competition! I hope I'm in time with borrowing the video camera (and I hope I don't discover that I suck, I never seriously recorded myself before...)
SlowStrider 5 years ago
Yay! Do it! I can't wait. Yes, the competition is good and fun. :D
aleishar 5 years ago
I like it without anything. Its a really nice poem.
dizzle222 5 years ago
Thanks dizzle222. :D I was thinking of doing poetry online...your thoughts?
aleishar 5 years ago
I think its a great idea, i just stumbled across this video and loved it
dizzle222 5 years ago
That's cool. Thank you again. I have a ton of poetry...so, I'm sure it will help my presentation to recite it on camera. :D
aleishar 5 years ago
BTW, you may like carzynj's version. It's poetic. Check it out above. :D
aleishar 5 years ago
Hey - my version is up now ~ enjoy :o)
Kris
KrisShred 5 years ago
Great, thanks Kris! Love it! They're all so different and wonderful. Oohhh...how will I ever choose? :D
aleishar 5 years ago
alrightY than,my version of your lyrics"addicted to you"has been uploaded and is ready to be judged haha I wonder what you'll think of it,greetz dapf
dapf5 5 years ago
Thanks! I got it. :D Love it! This is really getting difficult to judge. ;)
aleishar 5 years ago
Well I've basically composed the song for guitar. Because I'm not the best player I will have to work hard on being able to perform and sing it, I hope I will succeed. Also I don't have a videocamera yet, maybe I can borrow/buy one somewhere :P
SlowStrider 5 years ago
Contest is not over until March 31, so, you still have time. I can't wait to hear what you've come up with.
aleishar 5 years ago
Nice lyrics! :-) I can't write music unfortunately :(
Good luck for your project :-)
wayslinn 5 years ago
Thanks. :) That's okay. Hopefully, you'll get to see some great entries.
aleishar 5 years ago
The project (in its entirety [so check with the already added artists]) should also be considered 'Open Content' on some simple 'Open Licence'.
That is, everything involved in the project (all lyrical, musical, video, production, anything) is free to be used, distributed, changed, etc... as long as proper credit for the parts is given. [or some kind of thing like that]
What do you think.
OrbitalBliss 5 years ago
That's exactly what I was thinking. ^_^
aleishar 5 years ago
Ok, I've thrown one up there. Hope its to everyone's liking.
OrbitalBliss 5 years ago
I loved it. :D Any ideas for a prize? I was thinking a video mixed...I make a video with actors et al, and use video clips of you as well as your soundtrack in the bg. Thoughts?
aleishar 5 years ago
good idea:)
voorwerp 5 years ago
Dank U. I appreciate that. I think it could be really awesome. :D
aleishar 5 years ago
We'll see what happens with the date. They're my lyrics(you made some adjustments and others will, too)...so, I'm looking for someone to make the music for the lyrics, you see what I mean?
aleishar 5 years ago
i didn't even notice that she was naked haha
voorwerp 5 years ago
lol...yes. And you didn't even need the inspiration. Your voice and piano piece was beautiful. I put it on my channel.
aleishar 5 years ago
hahah thx:)
voorwerp 5 years ago
Hmmm...let me see what I could do...
badboy2114 5 years ago
Go Jaysin!!! Yeah, berber! Can't wait to see all your multiple personalities come out again. Especially Mr. Cool Pimpalicious. lol. ;)
aleishar 5 years ago
Haha, you're naked.. You're crazy :D .. You want only men write a song on the lyrics huh? ;o)
It's a great idea Aleisha. I have to think about it.. not sure yet if I'll participate.
KrisShred 5 years ago
No, no...woman can and should participate too...and hey, if other people want to record naked, by all means...go for it-makes it all more fun for me! Woman and men are both welcome.
aleishar 5 years ago
Yay, the thing with "only men" was a joke ;) However you're looking quite pretty in this video ~ naturally, beautiful eyes :)
KrisShred 5 years ago
You had to say that, didn't you? Blush, sigh... lol. But, yeah, I'm a little nuts. I think I should do more videos naked. Don't you? lol.
aleishar 5 years ago
Sounds like an interesting tasks. I had to pick up the guitar and give it a whirl. Think I might have something but need some time to work it out. I've got a few things on the burner right now. I hope many people take on the challenge. Will be cool!
modernoracle 5 years ago
Awesome Greg! I can't wait to see what you come up with. I noticed that your wife inspired another song (maybe more) of yours... :D Maybe she can be your muse once again. ;) I'm thinking end it on March 31. Your thoughts?
aleishar 5 years ago
Oh for sure! thats plenty of time! This is a great idea. Im looking forward to see what people come up with. Lots o fun!
modernoracle 5 years ago