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  • "Your voice swims in my head.

    Images of you dance in my heart."

    my favorite lines

    this is very - built for melody :o)

    now that you have a musician hubby you can write plenty of great songs together :o)

    and yeah - very beautiful eyes

  • I love your voice! Its so poetic. I love it :) anyway I find it creepy that so many people keep commenting about her being a pornstar or looking/acting like a pornstar haha

  • @kvglenn1 Thanks for that! I've read a few more poems if you look on my playlist you can find them, should you want to... :) Thanks again.

  • I wrote lyrics too, u can find them on my page. Nobody has yet to but them to music.

  • I'm beyond late from discovering this, but I'd love to share an idea, nonetheless.

  • song lyrics are not the same as poems

  • When you talk it sounds like someone is pouring a glass of water.

  • is this chick a pornstar or something, she gave me a major boner. I feel like I should give this chick some money.

  • lol. Thanks, I guess. You can send the check in care of my fiance...we could use it for our wedding. :P hehe. ;-)

  • wow thats good i found a way to sing it but i have no way to show you

  • did u ever get any one to put music to these lyrics?????????? plz get back to me XD ty

  • Yes, check out my playlists. I have one for musicians who wrote songs to my lyrics. :D You will really enjoy them. :)

  • I'll write you music for your lyrics if you show something like your boobs. Hey, i'll even throw a few hints on how to write a song lyrics.

  • I make music and can't write lyrics. Whenever I try the song falls apart and I give up.

  • My suggestion is to check out all the originals you can on youtube and look at structure. See if you can find a pattern. It may help to study how people make songs and then just go for it. Don't give up. :) Good luck!

  • is she naked:|

    it's a nice lyrics by the way.

  • thanks! =)

  • this taste of my fever breaks through into my hand.

    Just to touch your satin skin, so softly, i can understand.

    To take you to world never seen is not what I planned.

    But the danger of having something like you I'm bound to never have..... :D

  • hey , i id a version of your ong but i can post a video response. i know its over, but its just for fun ;D

  • ok, obviously you dont know music cause thats an ok song, hard to sing, doesnt flow, but its AMAZING poetry, my advice is post it as a poem and make money off it

  • I thought of music but not making a video for you! Because if you get famous you will get the credit!

  • turn the volume up lol thats what it's for

  • ummm i think you should b a poetry writter but ur really good at waht you do and good luck :D :) :D

  • she is a poetry writter as well ;)

  • hey this is xaina ! ya you dont really know me but .. ya ! but can i write my own lyrics and put it in your contest ??? :) :D

  • My advice is make your own video and recite your lyrics and ask musicians to compose music for them. Good luck! ;-)

  • cool ty

  • Those are good lyrics they would also make a good poem

  • thanks. I do have some poetry if you'd like to listen. :D

  • can we use those lyics with out the contest running

  • No. I'm sorry. The prizes for the winning music and song included the exclusive use.

  • is it supposed to be rock music; or what genre?

  • this contest ended already. We had a lot of video responses which were really great. Check em out. =D

  • I love your voice and the way you talk, it´s so mellow!

  • Obrigada Gaby. =D

  • Great writing however I'm in your same boat with background music hahaha!

  • Yeah, that's understood. However, youtube is such a wonderful talent pool. I'm sure you'll discover someone to collab with. :D

  • damn this thang is like a freeking poem girl!

  • Hehe, yeah. Have you read my other poetry? =D

  • not yet soon i will..

  • woohoo! ;D

  • im gunna post a video of A SONg i wrote a few days ago and i could change it up a bit for the song and u can use it for free

  • The contest was over a while back so I'm not posting anymore vids on it. But I did listen to what you played. You just keep playing and I'll keep writing. =D

  • your words are so deep....im a writer too..!

  • Thanks Lane. =) Keep it up. It's a wonderful, invigorating thing. :D

  • I'm sorry, but to be perfectly honest it sounds a little cliche. That is, however, what most people in the music industry do nowadays, is make vague statements that generalize about love. I would personally urge you to challenge yourself and make a song about a different topic because 99% of all music that was ever created was made about "love." Think outside of the box.

  • Hi!

    Your lyrics are pretty good :)

    Ive just put a video up of a song ive been working on but i dont have any lyrics. If you or anyone is interested, could you write me some lyrics?

    Thanks Chick

  • Hey Babe, how ya doin' with your music? ;D

  • babe al produce a track or do a instrumental and rap it is that good enouth?

  • Of course, you are welcome to try it out to a rap and send it to me. :) The contest is over though.

  • is she naked????__<>

  • yep, i was.

  • I'm sorry, but to be blunt: How are you a writer? That was just a barrage of clichés. If that was all it took to be a writer, every high school kid that has ever written a diary would be a writer as well.

  • i agree. very cliche. how long have you been writing? it sounds like some kid who cuts himself attempted to write deep lyrics. it.. doesnt really appeal to me.

  • get a boy friend!

  • YOU LOOK MADD DUM IN THIZ VID3O!!

  • what style of music do you want to ure lyrics?

  • This is actually the first contest. I have a new one posted and it can be any style. :)

  • can u give me the link to the new one please then ill give it my best

  • what a perv

  • Grats on being on the audio prophecy show, I can't wait for contest number 2!

  • thanks. :)

  • Great idea, even though the date is over I may have to try this, I'm always up for a songwriting excercise when I've got time

  • Cool Dave. But if you're up for something new, hit me up. :D

  • the lyrics are o.k but not exactly.... original?

  • yes original.

  • ha i make the music but i suck at writing :)

  • that's ok. get a lyricist. :D

  • if i send u a video of me playing a song i wrote can u make lyrics for it

  • Probably easier if I write lyrics and you figure out the song. Let's chat a bit and see what you've got and what you like to play. It should help figure out what I can work with you on. ;)

  • i write lyrics and lking for a partner to write thwe music but u cant ask them to do it for nothing thats theft im offering half of the complete song if anyones interested btw add mymusicseld(at)hotmail(dot)co(­dot)uk

  • MontanTny most definatley is the best i listened to all the responses...Mountan Tny you have a wonderful voice and you are a great guitar player....honestley i think you could win american idol....lol....but hey..follow your dreams...but if you ever think about american idol...make sure you say I inspired you lol =]

  • Thanks Sandra. Just in case you didn't, make sure you post a comment to him on his video. I'm sure he'll appreciate your kind words. :D

  • Thank you very much Sandra! But I think I´m not good enough for American Idol;) I don´t even live in the USA^^Here in Germany we have some kind of the same show, but it sucks... The people there become a so called "Superstar", make one song and then you never ever hear of them again.. But maybe some day I´ll go to the US and try it;)

  • I definitely think you could do it. Maybe if you go on Superstar, it's an instant casting on American Idol. I used to watch Superstar when I lived in Germany.  :D

  • motanTny is my favorite...he gets my vote~!

  • :D Great! Thanks for letting me know what you think. Soon, I'll have the winner announcement video posted. Working on avid right now..first time. yikes.

  • Thanks;)

  • I'm going to post my video right now! Am I still in time :-)?

  • Yes, do it. :D

  • I like the way you read it. Reading naked must have helped because you sounded 'naked' in the good way. I don't write music either, just thought your reading is wonderful

  • Thank you sistaspooky1013. :D Yeah, I guess naked is not always good.  lol.

  • I liked the way Aleisha read it, so here is my spin on it.

    Every submission is great! I look forward to seeing more!

  • Yeah, it's really an interesting and creative version, thank you. Like I said to you before, you should compose for films.

  • Hey I see I got some good competition! I hope I'm in time with borrowing the video camera (and I hope I don't discover that I suck, I never seriously recorded myself before...)

  • Yay! Do it! I can't wait. Yes, the competition is good and fun. :D

  • I like it without anything. Its a really nice poem.

  • Thanks dizzle222. :D I was thinking of doing poetry online...your thoughts?

  • I think its a great idea, i just stumbled across this video and loved it

  • That's cool. Thank you again. I have a ton of poetry...so, I'm sure it will help my presentation to recite it on camera. :D

  • BTW, you may like carzynj's version. It's poetic. Check it out above. :D

  • Hey - my version is up now ~ enjoy :o)

    Kris

  • Great, thanks Kris!  Love it! They're all so different and wonderful. Oohhh...how will I ever choose? :D

  • alrightY than,my version of your lyrics"addicted to you"has been uploaded and is ready to be judged haha I wonder what you'll think of it,greetz dapf

  • Thanks! I got it. :D Love it! This is really getting difficult to judge. ;)

  • Well I've basically composed the song for guitar. Because I'm not the best player I will have to work hard on being able to perform and sing it, I hope I will succeed. Also I don't have a videocamera yet, maybe I can borrow/buy one somewhere :P

  • Contest is not over until March 31, so, you still have time. I can't wait to hear what you've come up with.

  • Nice lyrics! :-) I can't write music unfortunately :(

    Good luck for your project :-)

  • Thanks. :) That's okay. Hopefully, you'll get to see some great entries.

  • The project (in its entirety [so check with the already added artists]) should also be considered 'Open Content' on some simple 'Open Licence'.

    That is, everything involved in the project (all lyrical, musical, video, production, anything) is free to be used, distributed, changed, etc... as long as proper credit for the parts is given. [or some kind of thing like that]

    What do you think.

  • That's exactly what I was thinking. ^_^

  • Ok, I've thrown one up there. Hope its to everyone's liking.

  • I loved it. :D Any ideas for a prize? I was thinking a video mixed...I make a video with actors et al, and use video clips of you as well as your soundtrack in the bg. Thoughts?

  • good idea:)

  • Dank U. I appreciate that. I think it could be really awesome. :D

  • We'll see what happens with the date. They're my lyrics(you made some adjustments and others will, too)...so, I'm looking for someone to make the music for the lyrics, you see what I mean?

  • i didn't even notice that she was naked haha

  • lol...yes. And you didn't even need the inspiration. Your voice and piano piece was beautiful. I put it on my channel.

  • hahah thx:)

  • Hmmm...let me see what I could do...

  • Go Jaysin!!! Yeah, berber! Can't wait to see all your multiple personalities come out again. Especially Mr. Cool Pimpalicious. lol. ;)

  • Haha, you're naked.. You're crazy :D .. You want only men write a song on the lyrics huh? ;o)

    It's a great idea Aleisha. I have to think about it.. not sure yet if I'll participate.

  • No, no...woman can and should participate too...and hey, if other people want to record naked, by all means...go for it-makes it all more fun for me! Woman and men are both welcome.

  • Yay, the thing with "only men" was a joke ;) However you're looking quite pretty in this video ~ naturally, beautiful eyes :)

  • You had to say that, didn't you? Blush, sigh... lol. But, yeah, I'm a little nuts. I think I should do more videos naked. Don't you? lol.

  • Sounds like an interesting tasks. I had to pick up the guitar and give it a whirl. Think I might have something but need some time to work it out. I've got a few things on the burner right now. I hope many people take on the challenge. Will be cool!

  • Awesome Greg! I can't wait to see what you come up with. I noticed that your wife inspired another song (maybe more) of yours... :D Maybe she can be your muse once again. ;) I'm thinking end it on March 31. Your thoughts?

  • Oh for sure! thats plenty of time! This is a great idea. Im looking forward to see what people come up with. Lots o fun!

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