i rember one day in school me and tommy was walking the track down in the pit and all of a sudden he bust out the most sickest freestyle i have ever heard in my life and all day untill i went sleep it never left my mine ..tommy patch is the rap king of the north ......
What up 4Words! It's ya boy Abstruse. I love the hook on this song. Lyrically your killin it. I woulda dropped a comment sooner, but I just opened a Youtube account today. Posted my first vid too. Search Kauai rap, titles Wailua Rapper. The quality is shit cuz it was recorded on my phone spur of the moment. I plan on uploading some better quality stuff soon. Hit me up sometime. Peace
5. The hook is hot and I think that people will participate with that. You need to keep that 1st hook for the second one, the hook is the key and you can really move around and watch their reaction in sync with what you say on the hook. Put the hook in the second and keep the third. You are gifted and God Bless
This is J-El, 1. I think the intro is to long, the highs should come in a little earlier and when you say," Bring in the bass like" The intro BEAT should play and at the Max high point take it over. 2. The verses is off the hook!!!!! You show command and you demand attention with that hype, the build up. 3. I like the flow and the feel of the hook. 4. The beat is cool, I can feel it even if its looped and I think it will pass with the crowds.
Tommy are you kidding me!!! This is awesome so glad it all came together!! Tell Tucker Derek and I said Wasabiiii! Aloha Continued Greatness Mel and Derek.
SPITTING HARD LOVE THIS SHIT YOUR THE MAANNNN
HAWAIIrepkauaiNSB 2 weeks ago
I look pretty stupid holding up my hands in the middle of starbucks but who cares!
DONTworryIgotTHIS 3 months ago
yo we should do a track my g hit me on facebook @ dre.dubs@yahoo.com
KingNQueenDubs 5 months ago
sounds from Kauai where they always want to get Zanny at the bar or Perky on the set
ziggybender 6 months ago
tommy your the man
keep it up
Ela1Marley 8 months ago
that song go hard keep doing ur thing
MrNilep23 9 months ago
hahaha
Steve1190 9 months ago
hey tommy messege me man
yungkilla1231 1 year ago
i rember one day in school me and tommy was walking the track down in the pit and all of a sudden he bust out the most sickest freestyle i have ever heard in my life and all day untill i went sleep it never left my mine ..tommy patch is the rap king of the north ......
STFUhaole 1 year ago
canta mas feo que kesha sin el autotune
TheKanimer 1 year ago
good
danielverdugospc 1 year ago
Nice video man...hope you continue to work hard
leddrikinmajol 1 year ago
What up 4Words! It's ya boy Abstruse. I love the hook on this song. Lyrically your killin it. I woulda dropped a comment sooner, but I just opened a Youtube account today. Posted my first vid too. Search Kauai rap, titles Wailua Rapper. The quality is shit cuz it was recorded on my phone spur of the moment. I plan on uploading some better quality stuff soon. Hit me up sometime. Peace
1abstruse1 1 year ago
at the start your voice not too keen on it...but great song and mic :D
JOSHWF2 1 year ago
sick.
CarbonFibreHD 2 years ago
Support Kauai's Finest!
Mokejohn 2 years ago 3
right on brada mahalo
mc4words 2 years ago
very dope
flowfessional 2 years ago
5. The hook is hot and I think that people will participate with that. You need to keep that 1st hook for the second one, the hook is the key and you can really move around and watch their reaction in sync with what you say on the hook. Put the hook in the second and keep the third. You are gifted and God Bless
jtmcfadden1 2 years ago
This is J-El, 1. I think the intro is to long, the highs should come in a little earlier and when you say," Bring in the bass like" The intro BEAT should play and at the Max high point take it over. 2. The verses is off the hook!!!!! You show command and you demand attention with that hype, the build up. 3. I like the flow and the feel of the hook. 4. The beat is cool, I can feel it even if its looped and I think it will pass with the crowds.
jtmcfadden1 2 years ago
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pricejuice 2 years ago
Looks like I have the honor of posting the first "contructive comment" of this song.
1st, the beat. It's very plain and boring. Using a stock sound on FLstudio "dream organ"
the beat has 4 ascending notes that repeat over and over and over. No increased activity over the hook, just the same 4 notes.
2nd, the hook. Sounds like part of a verse to me, it's overly complex, and not very catchy.
Last, the flow. The lyrics are decent enough, but I just didn't feel the performance.
StrictlyBeatzz775 2 years ago
this song is sick
your super talented.
fives stars, support.
808flyhigh 2 years ago 3
ya tommy boy amazing song really really sick shit i love it cant wait to hear more keep it up my man love u bro keep makin the magic
johnnykingkong 2 years ago 2
yahhhh tommy ripping
WORD!
sgimthaboss 2 years ago 2
Tommy are you kidding me!!! This is awesome so glad it all came together!! Tell Tucker Derek and I said Wasabiiii! Aloha Continued Greatness Mel and Derek.
hanaleimel 2 years ago 2
TP! mean song shoots
usickid 2 years ago 2
Awesome work man, you have all our support!
Physcojosh 2 years ago 2
Respect from London 5 stars and subbed !
and forwarded to my contact list.
bravehartmman 2 years ago 2
Awesome..!! I subd to you as well AND I think you should come on my radio talk show..
changethechange 2 years ago 2
d33p dude and damn well done, keep it up, fight the fight awake the people for fun yeeyauhh!!
Burster1 2 years ago 2
~That was straight up ace bro. Keep up the good work, that was outstanding.
No BS, that was bad ass. 5***** and faved!
SheepDoggOne 2 years ago 2
Awesome work my friend
MattMaddox7 2 years ago 6
cheee! yeahh tommy keep spittin!
luandaman123 2 years ago 6
AWESOME
llpkauai 2 years ago 3
u sound lyk fort minor..
ur gud..
u shud hea captain crunch
nangkairo 2 years ago