Considering you did everything yourself in terms of producing this video, this is impressive. Please check out my A-Level Short Film: Bad Timing if you get the time.
Oh my god, this is so good. This is the tragedy that cookie day is meant to be. My only gripe was the "national" you added on. It made it seem like it was some program started by the government rather than some personal goal the character created for himself. I know that's silly.
@whisper4132 The thing is, National Cookie Day is a real celebration day on December 4th so I thought it would be funnier if he stuck with a silly government 'holiday' and enjoy a cookie with the rest of the world, making him feel less lonely for a day.
I overall really like this, and good job. But some constructive criticism if I may:
I'm not sure cookie day makes sense as an annual event. Maybe a monthly event would be better? If nothing else, cookies would not preserve for that long, especially if kept in a shoebox.
By having it annually, the cookie becomes more meaningful as he has to wait a whole year just to eat this moulding food. And even if it's gone off, that's how awesome cookies are! Throughout his terrible life he chooses to stay alive just to have a piece of a cookie. =)
Considering you did everything yourself in terms of producing this video, this is impressive. Please check out my A-Level Short Film: Bad Timing if you get the time.
WillLewisAlexander 1 month ago
there was already a half in there! why did he have to cut another half?
RafiraFira 1 year ago
@RafiraFira That half was too big. He probably wanted to save it for another time, haha.
philafofalof 1 year ago
Oh my god, this is so good. This is the tragedy that cookie day is meant to be. My only gripe was the "national" you added on. It made it seem like it was some program started by the government rather than some personal goal the character created for himself. I know that's silly.
whisper4132 1 year ago
@whisper4132 The thing is, National Cookie Day is a real celebration day on December 4th so I thought it would be funnier if he stuck with a silly government 'holiday' and enjoy a cookie with the rest of the world, making him feel less lonely for a day.
philafofalof 1 year ago
:(
Cookie....
thecreepers 1 year ago
What is that movie playing with the guy shooting himself in the mouth?
Deadboy99 2 years ago
Seriously?
You've never seen Fight Club?
Stop reading this comment and buy it from wherever.
I'll wait here.
jymkata 2 years ago 2
@Deadboy99 fight club
Minskinamaxamus 1 year ago
this made me sad. ):
tazFRAGS 2 years ago
Well done, sort of emotional at the end, pretty much as I imagined it, thank you.
P.S. Was it hard not to laugh when eating that cookie?
FPSGriff 2 years ago
Also, "national"?
WLDFLD 2 years ago
I overall really like this, and good job. But some constructive criticism if I may:
I'm not sure cookie day makes sense as an annual event. Maybe a monthly event would be better? If nothing else, cookies would not preserve for that long, especially if kept in a shoebox.
WLDFLD 2 years ago
By having it annually, the cookie becomes more meaningful as he has to wait a whole year just to eat this moulding food. And even if it's gone off, that's how awesome cookies are! Throughout his terrible life he chooses to stay alive just to have a piece of a cookie. =)
philafofalof 2 years ago
Beautifully done. Nice work.
trav3ler 2 years ago
It gave Anthony's vision the depth and tragedy it deserves.
brotroller 2 years ago 2
Wow that was great. It really created a depressing tone, great use of music.
Arctic124 2 years ago 3