You did talk a bit much in my opinion, ending up repeating alot. While you seem good at talking for something like this, consider having a more condensed first part of the video where you show things and talk about it, then having the rest of the video just being additional imagery?
But as i said, it was nice. I was glad to remember a vecation with my family years ago.
I went there it's Wonderful ^__^ nice Video.
newjeddah 1 year ago
Thank you for this nice video.
I hope you don't mind constructive criticism;
You did talk a bit much in my opinion, ending up repeating alot. While you seem good at talking for something like this, consider having a more condensed first part of the video where you show things and talk about it, then having the rest of the video just being additional imagery?
But as i said, it was nice. I was glad to remember a vecation with my family years ago.
koogco 1 year ago