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From: odymind
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  • i love how hes like dating the ideal girl... and he complains. lol

  • So awkward

  • haha gotta have my smoke break...

  • ha ha that was quite good! the one camera angle i suppose does add to the awkwardness, but i think it definitely would have benefited from some close establishing shots of the character, and perhaps if the characters were sat on a bench looking out and not at each other, that would have added to the embarrassment.

  • also the background should have been blurry, to add attention to the characters and their story...thats what i would have done anyway

    at the moment with one angle it's almost like you are a person stood there watching, whom they don't acknowledge, and i think that doesn't really lend itself to the narrative

    also where is the Asian character from if he doesn't come from the building and doesn't even work there?

  • it's as if he's walked from the street all the way to the entrance of the building just to smoke with the character

  • 'makes it hard to cheat' lol

  • lol wow.. weird

  • Lol Nicely done mate. Reminded me a bit of the Office (UK) in just the awkward pauses.

  • haha that was great

  • haha awesome

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