Cigarette Break

[LPwonder2008]

i love how hes like dating the ideal girl... and he complains. lol

[MrJas1991]

So awkward

[SDMagicMan]

haha gotta have my smoke break...

[whytydag]

ha ha that was quite good! the one camera angle i suppose does add to the awkwardness, but i think it definitely would have benefited from some close establishing shots of the character, and perhaps if the characters were sat on a bench looking out and not at each other, that would have added to the embarrassment.

[whytydag]

also the background should have been blurry, to add attention to the characters and their story...thats what i would have done anyway

at the moment with one angle it's almost like you are a person stood there watching, whom they don't acknowledge, and i think that doesn't really lend itself to the narrative

also where is the Asian character from if he doesn't come from the building and doesn't even work there?

[whytydag]

it's as if he's walked from the street all the way to the entrance of the building just to smoke with the character

[nuculoid]

'makes it hard to cheat' lol

[krn54]

lol wow.. weird

[skawars86]

Lol Nicely done mate. Reminded me a bit of the Office (UK) in just the awkward pauses.

[EventHorizon5]

haha that was great

[DetunedRadioQ8]

haha awesome