Ben Engel you changed my life Sir this is simply Hofftastic!! Unbelievable lyrics, a great voice, perfect melody, you my friend are the next big thing. You sing like a pop star, you look like a pop star, you are a pop star!! LOL JK this is fucking awful mate I've heard better melodies coming out of a dying cat, give it up son save yourself the embarressment, save some pride. Mother fucker you are not fit to lace my shoes!! OH OH OHHHHH OHHHHHHHHH OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! What the fuck is that really!?
Ben Engel you changed my life Sir this is simply Hofftastic!! Unbelievable lyrics, a great voice, perfect melody, you my friend are the next big thing. You sing like a pop star, you look like a pop star, you are a pop star!! LOL JK this is fucking awful mate I've heard better melodies coming out of a dying cat, give it up son save yourself the embarressment, save some pride. Mother fucker you are not fit to lace my shoes!! OH OH OHHHHH OHHHHHHHHH OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! What the fuck is that really?
LOL watchin you again 1 year later still bollocks OH OH A OH OH lol thats a brill lyric mate id love to meet you so i could laugh at you and you could look at me when ive got your mom bent over some boxes smashin her back doors in
Hey man this is great how are you not signed up by simon c i dont know this is brill changed my life man amazing mate..............................................NATT im joking this bollocks really bad OH OH A OH OH hah thats rediculus like youre song writing and voice quit and get to your corner shop thell give you a job
True... Oh-Oh-Oh-Oh isn't the strongest lyric around... (although widely used by many professional songwriters) and I'm aware my voice might not be to everyone's taste.... (although I prefer to think of it as original and unique, rather than the auto-tuned, generic stuff Simon C pumps out). Fair enough, can't win 'em all. Feel free to make suggestions on a replacement chorus. Not sure you needed to be quite that rude about it, but I appreciate you having the stones to comment.
tw, your other song 'depth of desire' is quite good, the quick and frenzied chorus just express your anxiety for the loved very well! though the ending could have been slower, lentando you know, to express you being exhausted from such deep desire but still cant help longing for her....but anyway great job and cheerio! and sorry if some of my suggestions are offensive to you, i dont know much about music and those are just my shallow intuition.
Tranquila, te agradezco mucho las sugerencias, no me ofende para nada! Un músico tiene que escuchar a su público, no, tanto como ellos a él? Voy pensando en lo que has dicho.
Por otro lado, lo que no entiendo del todo es por qué pusiste este comentario tres veces!! Jeje. ;-)
this one is really good. especially from 2:20 to 3:00 and 3:20-3:40, which makes the rhythm more dramatic. the last 20 seconds solo is a brilliant end of story, and also triggers infinite aftertaste. how about using more throatiness in the refrain 'ah..ah' part? anyway, this piece is really cool. The only pity is that the lyrics seem interesting but i couldnt catch every words clearly....
Again, thanks for commenting. Really, really appreciate these thumbs-up bits and the constructive criticism as well.
In fact, this is quite an old version.... if you go to my MySpace (uvrock) there's a far superior recording on there.... This was done using YouTube's Quick Capture.... the sacrifice in terms of video and sound quality is a great one, so I don't use QC any more! lol.
The lyrics, by the way, are in the video description, if you're interested.
hehe you certainly deserve more thumbs-up bits with those well written lyrics! The words you used are vivid and rhyming prefectly, can count as poetry man! yep the record on myspace carries more emotions in the vocal. but how about adding some chorus with different melody at the end of the song? or making the third verse sound more indignant?
This is pretty good, I like the lyrics a lot. They're well written and remind a little bit of The Queen and the Soldier by Suzanne Vega. Thanks for sharing, talk to you later mate, peace.
Cheers, man!! I appreciate the feedback, especially when it's positive hehehe!! I haven't heard The Queen and the Soldier, but I'll give it a listen! All the best
yeah, negative comments generally are downers, lol, but they are helpful when they give good criticism. I was listening to this song again and through out I was thinking that it seems like that range is a bit low for you, kind of like it sounds uncomfortable, maybe try singing it a bit higher, like with a capo a few frets up or something, not that it sounds bad down there. Anyways, talk to you later man, peace.
I'm gonna check out your vids in a bit. Looking forward to it.
Have you had a look at my other originals? I'd love to know what you think.
Cheers again for commenting - I wish more people would!! Feedback's good!! But one of my vids has over 2,000 views, and only 2 comments! kinda frustrating...!!
I actually didn't mean all of that last comment mate, the dying cat sounds much better!!
RoastieFella 7 months ago
Ben Engel you changed my life Sir this is simply Hofftastic!! Unbelievable lyrics, a great voice, perfect melody, you my friend are the next big thing. You sing like a pop star, you look like a pop star, you are a pop star!! LOL JK this is fucking awful mate I've heard better melodies coming out of a dying cat, give it up son save yourself the embarressment, save some pride. Mother fucker you are not fit to lace my shoes!! OH OH OHHHHH OHHHHHHHHH OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! What the fuck is that really!?
RoastieFella 7 months ago
Ben Engel you changed my life Sir this is simply Hofftastic!! Unbelievable lyrics, a great voice, perfect melody, you my friend are the next big thing. You sing like a pop star, you look like a pop star, you are a pop star!! LOL JK this is fucking awful mate I've heard better melodies coming out of a dying cat, give it up son save yourself the embarressment, save some pride. Mother fucker you are not fit to lace my shoes!! OH OH OHHHHH OHHHHHHHHH OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! What the fuck is that really?
RoastieFella 7 months ago
LOL watchin you again 1 year later still bollocks OH OH A OH OH lol thats a brill lyric mate id love to meet you so i could laugh at you and you could look at me when ive got your mom bent over some boxes smashin her back doors in
guntarg91 1 year ago
Hey man this is great how are you not signed up by simon c i dont know this is brill changed my life man amazing mate..............................................NATT im joking this bollocks really bad OH OH A OH OH hah thats rediculus like youre song writing and voice quit and get to your corner shop thell give you a job
guntarg91 2 years ago
True... Oh-Oh-Oh-Oh isn't the strongest lyric around... (although widely used by many professional songwriters) and I'm aware my voice might not be to everyone's taste.... (although I prefer to think of it as original and unique, rather than the auto-tuned, generic stuff Simon C pumps out). Fair enough, can't win 'em all. Feel free to make suggestions on a replacement chorus. Not sure you needed to be quite that rude about it, but I appreciate you having the stones to comment.
All the best.
uvrockgod 2 years ago
tw, your other song 'depth of desire' is quite good, the quick and frenzied chorus just express your anxiety for the loved very well! though the ending could have been slower, lentando you know, to express you being exhausted from such deep desire but still cant help longing for her....but anyway great job and cheerio! and sorry if some of my suggestions are offensive to you, i dont know much about music and those are just my shallow intuition.
miminniewow 2 years ago
Tranquila, te agradezco mucho las sugerencias, no me ofende para nada! Un músico tiene que escuchar a su público, no, tanto como ellos a él? Voy pensando en lo que has dicho.
Por otro lado, lo que no entiendo del todo es por qué pusiste este comentario tres veces!! Jeje. ;-)
Anda, un saludo muy fuerte.
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uvrockgod 2 years ago
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miminniewow 2 years ago
this one is really good. especially from 2:20 to 3:00 and 3:20-3:40, which makes the rhythm more dramatic. the last 20 seconds solo is a brilliant end of story, and also triggers infinite aftertaste. how about using more throatiness in the refrain 'ah..ah' part? anyway, this piece is really cool. The only pity is that the lyrics seem interesting but i couldnt catch every words clearly....
miminniewow 2 years ago
Again, thanks for commenting. Really, really appreciate these thumbs-up bits and the constructive criticism as well.
In fact, this is quite an old version.... if you go to my MySpace (uvrock) there's a far superior recording on there.... This was done using YouTube's Quick Capture.... the sacrifice in terms of video and sound quality is a great one, so I don't use QC any more! lol.
The lyrics, by the way, are in the video description, if you're interested.
:-)
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uvrockgod 2 years ago
hehe you certainly deserve more thumbs-up bits with those well written lyrics! The words you used are vivid and rhyming prefectly, can count as poetry man! yep the record on myspace carries more emotions in the vocal. but how about adding some chorus with different melody at the end of the song? or making the third verse sound more indignant?
miminniewow 2 years ago
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miminniewow 2 years ago
whats the time jimmy???
nice song
rasmet0193 3 years ago
Heheh. Cheers! You one of Tristan's mates?
uvrockgod 3 years ago
maybe
rasmet0193 3 years ago
great story telling. Nice performance
dmio2 3 years ago
Cheers!! Greatly appreciate that!! I'm looking forward to checking out your vids, they look good! :)
All the best
uvrockgod 3 years ago
This is pretty good, I like the lyrics a lot. They're well written and remind a little bit of The Queen and the Soldier by Suzanne Vega. Thanks for sharing, talk to you later mate, peace.
GabeGriggs 3 years ago
Cheers, man!! I appreciate the feedback, especially when it's positive hehehe!! I haven't heard The Queen and the Soldier, but I'll give it a listen! All the best
uvrockgod 3 years ago
yeah, negative comments generally are downers, lol, but they are helpful when they give good criticism. I was listening to this song again and through out I was thinking that it seems like that range is a bit low for you, kind of like it sounds uncomfortable, maybe try singing it a bit higher, like with a capo a few frets up or something, not that it sounds bad down there. Anyways, talk to you later man, peace.
GabeGriggs 3 years ago
nice.
its a pretty song :]
cheers
anotherteenmusician 3 years ago
Cheers!! I appreciate that!! :D
I'm gonna check out your vids in a bit. Looking forward to it.
Have you had a look at my other originals? I'd love to know what you think.
Cheers again for commenting - I wish more people would!! Feedback's good!! But one of my vids has over 2,000 views, and only 2 comments! kinda frustrating...!!
Anybody reading this, please comment!!!!!
uvrockgod 3 years ago