od yavo shalom aleinu remix

[StJouish]

I like the percussion. Good job for a first time.. But dude, fix the spelling in the onscreen title. Bad spelling is comic.

[snipeman07]

you need to speed the vocals to match the tempo of your beat, and also it would be good if you got an a Capella version of the song instead of the actual song so the instruments won't clash. good try though