The flash back sequences when the white dude was losing his mind looked like crap. They didn't even look like flashbacks. About a whole minute was spent looking at the fire without dialogue or action or purpose.
My advice for you is to remake this entire thing. Also what's with the graveyard?
None of you can act. The fucking bagpipes ruin the fucking death scene. There's no other way to put it there's like a hundred sad music tracks to use why bagpipes?
the opening sequence was awesome, i like all the war stuff...and i loved how they were in regular clothes and everyone else was in uniform XD it just adds to the blasphemy XD
ahaha..im such a bad actress XD i sound too much like a guy, really lol but thats ok
aw i died, and had an awesome funeral where all my friends came and spoke of my awesome soldier-ette ness ^_^
seriously though it came out awesome, cant wait for part 2!! =D
The flash back sequences when the white dude was losing his mind looked like crap. They didn't even look like flashbacks. About a whole minute was spent looking at the fire without dialogue or action or purpose.
My advice for you is to remake this entire thing. Also what's with the graveyard?
None of you can act. The fucking bagpipes ruin the fucking death scene. There's no other way to put it there's like a hundred sad music tracks to use why bagpipes?
Try again.
GarraTheSandman 4 years ago
w00000000h lol =D it came out great
the opening sequence was awesome, i like all the war stuff...and i loved how they were in regular clothes and everyone else was in uniform XD it just adds to the blasphemy XD
ahaha..im such a bad actress XD i sound too much like a guy, really lol but thats ok
aw i died, and had an awesome funeral where all my friends came and spoke of my awesome soldier-ette ness ^_^
seriously though it came out awesome, cant wait for part 2!! =D
NyNeko 4 years ago