B5 Story Part Two

[spectacularboo21]

love diz story it off da damn chain. *1-10 i give it a 12 1/2

[Smilyfaceshay]

iight this story is beyond great. Dustin is a lil 2 needy&clingy&Nicky is 2 cool about it. Kelly is disrespectful sometimes&Alondria is hilarious. Patrick acts perfect.iLove how funny he is&Jaslene needs 2 stop bein 2 serious. Carnell deserves better&Kasla is rude. Bryan's a player&Kyra mght be cheatin. 5*

[RoshonFeganGal15]

theze storiez r great! keep goin!!

[shaymar19]

bryan is a cheater!!!!!!!!!!carnell keeps tellin him 2 go talk 2 the other gurl!!!!!!!that's wrong,bryan!!!!!!!!but it's still a good storii,though!!!!!!!!!!keep it comin wit the storiis!!!!!!!!!

[lexyluvsb5]

damn why is nelly poo's gf so bitchy and damn bryan is player but i still love him good job girl

[Sexyaskiki]

carnells gf iz a bitch n he should have talked 2 sade u go girl llz

[huney8cocoa]

carnell's girl is mean where dos she get off callin him nothing? he needs to leave her

[arabialuvsbryan]

yupp:)

[DustinzBabyy4Lifeyy]

i feel srry 4 carnell and bryan shouldnt be cheatin oooo lol.

[sparklez365]

aww i feel so bad for carnell :(

[marjksf]

who is living with who???

[arabialuvsbryan]

Carnell, Kasla&&Bryan like in one house, Dustin&&Nicky have their own, Kelly&&Alondria have one, and Patrick and Jaslene have one.

[mizzghettoangel]

i luved it dat was awsome at the endin yuh got me waitin and am still waitin

[Enrique132]

Loved It! Ahhh! So Much Drama! Cranell Always Goin Into His Room. And Slammin Thee Door. Lols.

[MiXedBicHYADIGG]

ii Wuz Jus Watchin That..

Haha

[MiXedBicHYADIGG]

i Dont walk up tO Dawwqs...

Dawwqs Walk To ME!!!!!

Kasla & Carnell R FUNNY!

dANq Man.......Yew Jus Gonna

Leave the StORy @ that?? Sheesh...

*Sobs**

[arabialuvsbryan]

lol. your in the next one more...your actually a very important character to the story

[MiXedBicHYADIGG]

Oh Lol thats Gewd...

im Very ImpOrtant Anywayz..

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[bryanlover4life786]

i love da story can't wait for da next one

[Dream214]

good story girl loved the ending...ur a great writer and i don't like that lil chika carnell going with..she's too controlling!

[arabialuvsbryan]

thanks! nobody likes carnells girl but...whats so special about the ending?

[Dream214]

its just how u ended it..when the girl answer the phone and says hello..its catchy...b/c ur making others want to read more....thats all...

[arabialuvsbryan]

oh thanks thanks! ending with suspence:)

[Dream214]

U WELCOME LOLZ

[gracing15]

i love it, of course!!

i cant wait for the next one!!

[arabialuvsbryan]

ohhtayy:)

sounds cool. cant wait...message me!

[lacrossebabe6]

ooooo love it =] =]

can't wait til the next one

[kasla88]

huh i love it 5 stars u go girl n i cant belive i feel really bad 4 carnell n that lil controling bitch ooo wait dats me lol n e wayz people i'm not like dat i just a character n this WONDERFUL WRITER STORY (ARBIA)

[arabialuvsbryan]

lol

"ARBIA"??? wow

[arabialuvsbryan]

haha

[sassydiva493]

LUV !T N3XT 1 PLZ L0L

[bestlove12]

I LOVE IT