I understood the idea but the audio was very difficult to hear. There was too much time given to the skit and there were not enough facts given. You should haver proofed the spelling.
AE:The script and plot were good, but not executed as well as they could be. I found that the overall message of this video sort of offset any informative part of the video. There was no real refference to how regularly the individual was experimenting with marijuana except for when he says "This stuff is bad for me, but its got me hooked." The message was also a little harsh essentially saying "Don't do drugs once or you'll die." To sum up, too much screaming, not enough information.
I understand completely what was portrayed here, however I couldn't hear the exact details. It was very difficult to hear the audio and I noticed two editing errors in the text. Other than what was onscreen, I couldn't find any information about the different effects of drugs. There's a lot of potential with this idea however.
It was very hard to understand what the actors were saying because of all of the background commotion. I found the spelling mistakes to be unprofessional. The video was however, amusing. Adding more facts and information would have improved the overall affect of the video on the audience.
There is a lot of room for improvement but this is a good start.
MH: And the editing of the video could have improved the validity of it because there was spelling mistakes, wqhich made the audience think that the video shouldn't have been taken seriously. But other than those improvments the video was good. :)
MH: this video was interesting... The ideas were there I just didn't think that they were carried through very well. I thought that the information was lacking, it either could have been in the script, put in writing or just said during the credits. Also the story's sound was not very well executed, it was hard to understand the lines and what everyone was saying.
i rate this video a 2/5, it was really hard to tell what everyone was saying and there were spelling mistakes at the beginning, though it was somewhat convincing
I'm not sure what this video was suppose to give information about. I could not hear anything, which hindered the message trying to be sent. The camera was shaky, and the video lacked any health information. There is some potential in the script.
Angelica: um... it was very amusing and definitely showed a different perspective to it. the filming and skript was pretty good but the audio was not up to par. If i could change anything on the video it would be to improve the audio.
The script was very good, The video quality was ok, but the audio was very hard to hear. There was little to no information in the video. The message was clear. The execution could have been much better.
The video showed the effects that drug use can have on your body. This was the only positive part in this video. The script was well written, however it was not well executed. The Camera work could have been better, and the audio quality was horrible, which prevented the audience from hearing what people were saying. The video also lacked any facts about drug use or the negative health effect that it can have.
1/5 Stars. Would give 0/5 stars, but I could see promise in the script.
Cole Thomson: Good job guys i thought this video was amusing, and the acting was very good. The voices were sometimes hard to hear, and there was a lack of information.
I understood the idea but the audio was very difficult to hear. There was too much time given to the skit and there were not enough facts given. You should haver proofed the spelling.
-RL
andiefish32 2 years ago
This was a nice idea, I enjoyed most of it. The message was clear but the facts could have been better.
If you had done this at a better time, or in a different location, it might add professionalism and you would have had better audio.
But good job guys! :)
Rebecca
rebeccamaddens 2 years ago
AE:The script and plot were good, but not executed as well as they could be. I found that the overall message of this video sort of offset any informative part of the video. There was no real refference to how regularly the individual was experimenting with marijuana except for when he says "This stuff is bad for me, but its got me hooked." The message was also a little harsh essentially saying "Don't do drugs once or you'll die." To sum up, too much screaming, not enough information.
1/5 stars
eagle8burger 2 years ago
I understand completely what was portrayed here, however I couldn't hear the exact details. It was very difficult to hear the audio and I noticed two editing errors in the text. Other than what was onscreen, I couldn't find any information about the different effects of drugs. There's a lot of potential with this idea however.
timtamslam444 2 years ago
it was a bit funny, the audio was hard to under stand.
mike
andiefish32 2 years ago
It was very hard to understand what the actors were saying because of all of the background commotion. I found the spelling mistakes to be unprofessional. The video was however, amusing. Adding more facts and information would have improved the overall affect of the video on the audience.
There is a lot of room for improvement but this is a good start.
-Kylie D.
andiefish32 2 years ago
MH: And the editing of the video could have improved the validity of it because there was spelling mistakes, wqhich made the audience think that the video shouldn't have been taken seriously. But other than those improvments the video was good. :)
andiefish32 2 years ago
MH: this video was interesting... The ideas were there I just didn't think that they were carried through very well. I thought that the information was lacking, it either could have been in the script, put in writing or just said during the credits. Also the story's sound was not very well executed, it was hard to understand the lines and what everyone was saying.
andiefish32 2 years ago
Amy M.
i rate this video a 2/5, it was really hard to tell what everyone was saying and there were spelling mistakes at the beginning, though it was somewhat convincing
andiefish32 2 years ago
I'm not sure what this video was suppose to give information about. I could not hear anything, which hindered the message trying to be sent. The camera was shaky, and the video lacked any health information. There is some potential in the script.
-Jen-
horsefreak8888 2 years ago
Angelica: um... it was very amusing and definitely showed a different perspective to it. the filming and skript was pretty good but the audio was not up to par. If i could change anything on the video it would be to improve the audio.
floweribbon 2 years ago
Good Job
but couldn't hear audio and there wasn't very much information and might want to use spell check!
andiefish32 2 years ago
The script was very good, The video quality was ok, but the audio was very hard to hear. There was little to no information in the video. The message was clear. The execution could have been much better.
crackinwindow 2 years ago
The video showed the effects that drug use can have on your body. This was the only positive part in this video. The script was well written, however it was not well executed. The Camera work could have been better, and the audio quality was horrible, which prevented the audience from hearing what people were saying. The video also lacked any facts about drug use or the negative health effect that it can have.
1/5 Stars. Would give 0/5 stars, but I could see promise in the script.
charliehorse55 2 years ago
Cole Thomson: Good job guys i thought this video was amusing, and the acting was very good. The voices were sometimes hard to hear, and there was a lack of information.
andiefish32 2 years ago
Good job guys.
Just two suggestions:
1) You might want to add more information, because the message was not completely clear.
2) The audio was kind of hard to hear.
Other than that, it was good.
-Megan
andiefish32 2 years ago