Looks good. Tension builds well towards the end. But yeah, lose the entire intro up until the thunderstrike and the storm clouds. I'd put the voice over somewhere else is at all.
Looks good. Got the basics, dude. Make it a little less, rough and you got a winner. Be sure to include some of the first fight between Marvin and the kid brother and when Marvin steals the truck.
Anyone know any films like this?
palotin07 10 months ago
I like it but schifrins killer music is sadly missed during the footage of the storm coming..
msinthrop 1 year ago
Looks good. Tension builds well towards the end. But yeah, lose the entire intro up until the thunderstrike and the storm clouds. I'd put the voice over somewhere else is at all.
Cyronaseez 1 year ago
Cut off the entire opening with Eddie Egan's voice over and it's terrific.
maitlandvampyr13 1 year ago
Looks good. Got the basics, dude. Make it a little less, rough and you got a winner. Be sure to include some of the first fight between Marvin and the kid brother and when Marvin steals the truck.
ladianoh 2 years ago