Oh, this is really sweet! Stephen Sondheim with an edge! Turn this into a musical and you'll sell out. Really... I see you on the stage, whether a small smoky one or playing to a grand throng. Your fans can't wait.
wow carol, you have no idea how much that means to me. I was thinking about you the other day, wondering what you thought about this. thank you so very much!
yes, i think youre tapped in to essential rhythms, waltzes and jigs, "cabbages celery 3beats, rutabaga, watermelon, 4"..dance is the mother of poetry, keep going, dance on the grave (low spirits) and the grim
continue to write, to out pour...to pick yourself up off the ground, tell your self "i don't want." But know you are worth it, don't look to Youtube or anyone else for your worth. It is in you already, God put it there for you!
Believe it or not, and this sounds abit pretensive...but you remind me of Ogden Nash when he was younger. You've captured a certain lyric comedy within your style(s). *grin*, what a wonderful reading/poem!
Poetry is always beautiful, but can be made even more special in its delivery, and this is no exception, wonderful poem and a voice that helps it along that little bit, to make it that something special:)
beautiful
fakebestfriend 2 years ago
as flamboyant as you are, this is genious
vibe0789 3 years ago
wow
=]
colombiacrack88 3 years ago
Very powerful, descriptive, and eloquent poem. You are MEGA-TALENTED! Keep up the GREAT WORK!!!!!
~OC (Jules)
OrangeCaesar 3 years ago
Your hands are ridiculously sexual, leibchen. I like the poem.
xo- Astrid
AstridVonAij 3 years ago
Wow, that was great. Don't know why I didn't get this one before. Thanks. Really good.
mewatchtube06 4 years ago
best work of yours so far , as far as im concerned at least =) xx
summerbrrk 4 years ago
Oh, this is really sweet! Stephen Sondheim with an edge! Turn this into a musical and you'll sell out. Really... I see you on the stage, whether a small smoky one or playing to a grand throng. Your fans can't wait.
ytcarol 4 years ago
wow carol, you have no idea how much that means to me. I was thinking about you the other day, wondering what you thought about this. thank you so very much!
NunsAndPoses 4 years ago
yes, i think youre tapped in to essential rhythms, waltzes and jigs, "cabbages celery 3beats, rutabaga, watermelon, 4"..dance is the mother of poetry, keep going, dance on the grave (low spirits) and the grim
saladlvr 4 years ago
continue to write, to out pour...to pick yourself up off the ground, tell your self "i don't want." But know you are worth it, don't look to Youtube or anyone else for your worth. It is in you already, God put it there for you!
onelovingwife 4 years ago 2
I LOVE THIS POEM.
Very very much.
Many kudos.
Aquadeam 4 years ago
You have captured my spirit! I feel sad for the person of whom you speak. Yet, elated as the person picks themself back up and carry on.
Very beautifully read.
Thank you!
MisphitMary 4 years ago
A powerful piece of poetry and beautifully read
TheRavenOfPoe 4 years ago
Brilliant!
Believe it or not, and this sounds abit pretensive...but you remind me of Ogden Nash when he was younger. You've captured a certain lyric comedy within your style(s). *grin*, what a wonderful reading/poem!
Thanks Guy!
UncleBym 4 years ago
Poetry is always beautiful, but can be made even more special in its delivery, and this is no exception, wonderful poem and a voice that helps it along that little bit, to make it that something special:)
Ryukotsusei26 4 years ago 2
Wow! Loved it, Guy!!! :)
singingkid 4 years ago
A very powerful poem. Simply beautiful!
kaisaselfan 4 years ago
This verse sounds very much like a note I read recently.
Interesting, Guy, that one can use his pain in his art..... All true artists do that, you know?
Bravo!
Peace Bro,
-Mike
GubbioTwo 4 years ago
BEAUTIFUL!!!! I loved it Guy!!!
FRANKYCG 4 years ago
I adore you, Guy.
A16Matthews 4 years ago
consider this "sweet affirmation" ...
you speak my heart and soul
simplydaft 4 years ago