I just stop by to let you know that my book, HE CHANGED ME - a book that articulates the pain of man with the heart of God and to a revelation that will change your life. Available online bookstores and Christian bookstores near you. Thank you for your time
What a Beautiful, Encouraging, Annilating, Revealing poem....You are victorious because you no longer B.E.A.R. the weight anymore....Well Done Sista, Well done.
thanks everyone for your comments! i have been writing more and will be posting some new videos within the next couple weeks. again, i truly appreciate your kind words and feedback.
I will be posting more soon, I have been writing a lot lately and will try to create some videos surrounding my work. sorry for the delay in uploading more!
Thank you all so much for the comments- they mean so much to me. I truly appreciate all of your kind words!
I will also post a video soon that will explain a bit more about the reasoning for this spoken word poem and the backstory. Thanks again!
You encourage me. I have written a few that I plan to us while street preaching this coming spring.
the presentation, the angle, the light, the colour scheme. the glasses. all work.
perhaps just a little work on the phrasing of the thoughts. and a little awareness of changing volume and enunciation to make it aurally more interesting.
very well done- but I think you are being a bit too hard on yourself though for what more are we but the chosen people who choosing whats best for us. misguided yes but no 1 is perfect and not even Christ could understand His will but Thy will be done. So shouldn't our decisions(as best as they can be) be good enough?
That's fiya my girl. Nice job. Checkout my poetry on here if you can. Search Christian rap Nameless. The one where I'm wearing a red shirt is the best in my opinion.
right on!! Love the message and the presentation of it. As far as constructive criticism goes I would say work a lil bit on how you have it flow together, sometimes the rhymes don't need to be overly emphasized. But that said you still did a pretty good job with that anyway. Good work! Keep it up!
thanks for the constructive criticism! I am working on another one right now so I will keep that in mind for the future! I appreciate the comment! God bless!
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lookupbeblessed 1 week ago
What a Beautiful, Encouraging, Annilating, Revealing poem....You are victorious because you no longer B.E.A.R. the weight anymore....Well Done Sista, Well done.
CyndiCeaable 1 month ago
wow!!!! amazing!
Damirrea9 3 months ago
AWESOME CARBON COPIES I LOVE THIS!!!! blessings to you..I feel you!!
diva4Jesus28 3 months ago
Thank you. I needed this. God bless. :)
rhia671 3 months ago
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good. everyone should go look at my profile for a good spoken word
SpencerElston92 4 months ago
all i could say is amazing.
chanelbahamianbeauty 4 months ago
This is really good
edcba321ful 4 months ago
I LOVE IT!!
JMFJ1316 5 months ago
wow
kirkfranklinboy1986 6 months ago
beautiful words.... keep it up!!! :D
aidenn89 8 months ago
thanks for the comment! i appreciate your kind words. Revel8ion, go for it! I appreciate the support!
sensoryoverload18 9 months ago
Awsome work... Ide love to put that on REVEL8ION!
REVEL8ION 10 months ago
this was beautiful... loved it.
bchelle923 10 months ago
thanks everyone for your comments! i have been writing more and will be posting some new videos within the next couple weeks. again, i truly appreciate your kind words and feedback.
sensoryoverload18 11 months ago
I will be posting more soon, I have been writing a lot lately and will try to create some videos surrounding my work. sorry for the delay in uploading more!
Thank you all so much for the comments- they mean so much to me. I truly appreciate all of your kind words!
I will also post a video soon that will explain a bit more about the reasoning for this spoken word poem and the backstory. Thanks again!
sensoryoverload18 11 months ago
this is amazing :)
IAmJacey 11 months ago
power of interpretation and power of words! you were amazing. do you have any more ?
lyricisible 1 year ago
MY JESUS !! this is deep!! *snap snaps*
ESHA111190 1 year ago
I like it !!!!
You encourage me. I have written a few that I plan to us while street preaching this coming spring.
the presentation, the angle, the light, the colour scheme. the glasses. all work.
perhaps just a little work on the phrasing of the thoughts. and a little awareness of changing volume and enunciation to make it aurally more interesting.
but girl you get ****1/2's !!!!
yeshua4U 1 year ago
This Was awesome. :)
smilewriter94 1 year ago
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ElvisM1234 1 year ago
very well done- but I think you are being a bit too hard on yourself though for what more are we but the chosen people who choosing whats best for us. misguided yes but no 1 is perfect and not even Christ could understand His will but Thy will be done. So shouldn't our decisions(as best as they can be) be good enough?
ElvisM1234 1 year ago
That's fiya my girl. Nice job. Checkout my poetry on here if you can. Search Christian rap Nameless. The one where I'm wearing a red shirt is the best in my opinion.
cajunkonection 1 year ago
Amazing u r truly God's anointed ...my sister
JCSPOKENWORD 1 year ago
Deep ..i like
alexisbabesz 1 year ago
thanks... i will be putting another one up within the month. appreciate your comments!
sensoryoverload18 1 year ago
ok, im ttly high 5ing u through the computer!
that was amazing!
n i wana hear more!
AlwaysHopeAlwaysLove 1 year ago
right on!! Love the message and the presentation of it. As far as constructive criticism goes I would say work a lil bit on how you have it flow together, sometimes the rhymes don't need to be overly emphasized. But that said you still did a pretty good job with that anyway. Good work! Keep it up!
MickQuick07 2 years ago
thanks for the constructive criticism! I am working on another one right now so I will keep that in mind for the future! I appreciate the comment! God bless!
sensoryoverload18 2 years ago
No problem! You definitely have a gift there! God will use it :)
MickQuick07 2 years ago
thanks for your support! i will be putting up more soon!
sensoryoverload18 2 years ago
Great JOB! God bless. Put more stuff so u can spread Gods word as well as your "brand"!!!!
marineinChrist 2 years ago
I really enjoyed this Kylee and I am sharing it on my sites on Facebook and Blogger. You are so talented.
richnjesus 2 years ago